À Quoi Bon Dire

Charlotte Mew (1869–1928) · 1916

iambic pentameter · ABAB · 13 lines · from The Farmer's Bride

Seventeen years ago you saidSomething that sounded like Good-bye;And everybody thinks that you are dead,But I.

So I, as I grow stiff and coldTo this and that say Good-bye too;And everybody sees that I am oldBut you.

And one fine morning in a sunny laneSome boy and girl will meet and kiss and swearThat nobody can love their way againWhile over thereYou will have smiled, I shall have tossed your hair.

Words in this poem

seventeen a.
One more than sixteen; ten and seven added; as, seventeen years. [OE. seventene, AS. seofontyne, i. e., seven- ten. Cf. Seventy.]
sunny a.
Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
nobody n.
No person; no one; not anybody. [No, a. + body.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

À Quoi Bon Dire is in the public domain. This text is taken from The farmer's bride, Project Gutenberg ebook #71305; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Charlotte Mew, À Quoi Bon Dire, in The Farmer's Bride (1916), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #71305, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/mew-farmers-bride/quoi-bon-dire.html, id L02464.

Form and metre

À Quoi Bon Dire is 13 lines in 3 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 2 of its 3 stanzas. 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.7 syllables. 54% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB saidA · byeB · deadA · iB
  2. 2 ABAB coldA · tooB · oldA · youB
  3. 3 ABABB laneA · swearB · againA · thereB · hairB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Seventeen years ago you said8/˘/·˘/··
Something that sounded like Good-bye;8/˘·/˘···
And everybody thinks that you are dead,10·/˘·˘·····
But I.2··
So I, as I grow stiff and cold8········
To this and that say Good-bye too;8········
And everybody sees that I am old10·/˘·˘·····
But you.2··
And one fine morning in a sunny lane10···/˘··/˘·
Some boy and girl will meet and kiss and swear10··········
That nobody can love their way again10·/······˘/
While over there4····
You will have smiled, I shall have tossed your hair.10··········

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