Apathy and Enthusiasm II

Herman Melville (1819–1891) · 1866

iambic tetrameter · 61 lines · from Battle-Pieces and Aspects of the War

So the winter died despairing,And the weary weeks of Lent;And the ice-bound rivers melted,And the tomb of Faith was rent.O, the rising of the PeopleCame with springing of the grass,They rebounded from dejectionAnd Easter came to pass.And the young were all elationHearing Sumter’s cannon roar,And they thought how tame the NationIn the age that went before.And Michael seemed gigantical,The Arch-fiend but a dwarf;And at the towers of ErebusOur striplings flung the scoff.But the elders with forebodingMourned the days forever o’er,And re called the forest proverb,The Iroquois’ old saw:Grief to every graybeardWhen young Indians lead the war.

The March into Virginia,Ending in the First Manassas.(July, 1861.)

Did all the lets and bars appearTo every just or larger end,Whence should come the trust and cheer?Youth must its ignorant impulse lend--Age finds place in the rear.All wars are boyish, and are fought by boys,The champions and enthusiasts of the state:Turbid ardors and vain joysNot barrenly abate--Stimulants to the power mature,Preparatives of fate.

Who here forecasteth the event?What heart but spurns at precedentAnd warnings of the wise,Contemned foreclosures of surprise?

The banners play, the bugles call,The air is blue and prodigal.No berrying party, pleasure-wooed,No picnic party in the May,Ever went less loth than theyInto that leafy neighborhood.In Bacchic glee they file toward Fate,Moloch’s uninitiate;Expectancy, and glad surmiseOf battle’s unknown mysteries.All they feel is this: ’tis glory,A rapture sharp, though transitory,Yet lasting in belaureled story.So they gayly go to fight,Chatting left and laughing right.

But some who this blithe mood present,As on in lightsome files they fare,Shall die experienced ere three days are spent--Perish, enlightened by the vollied glare;Or shame survive, and, like to adamant,The throe of Second Manassas share.

Words in this poem 18
despairing a.
Feeling or expressing despair; hopeless.
dejection n.
A casting down; depression. Hallywell. [L. dejectio a casting down: cf. F. déjection.]
elation n.
A lifting up by success; exaltation; inriation with pride of prosperity. [L. elatio. See Elate.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
gigantical a.
Bulky, big. Burton.
erebus n.
A place of nether darkness, being the gloomy space through which the souls passed to Hades. See Milton's
boyish a.
Resembling a boy in a manners or opinions; belonging to a boy; childish; trifling; puerile.
barrenly adv.
Unfruitfully; unproductively.
berrying n.
A seeking for or gathering of berries, esp. of such as grow wild.
bacchic a.
Of or relating to Bacchus; hence, jovial, or riotous,with intoxication.
glee n.
Music; minstrelsy; entertainment.
expectancy n.
The act of expecting ; expectation.
gayly adv.
With mirth and frolic; merrily; blithely; gleefully.
blithe a.
Gay; merry; sprightly; joyous; glad; cheerful; as, a blithe spirit. [AS. bli blithe, kind; akin to Goth. blei kind, Icel. bli mild, gentle, Dan. & Sw. blid gentle, D. blijd blithe, OHG. blidi kind, blithe.]
lightsome a.
Having light; lighted; not dark or gloomy; bright.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
glare v. i.
To shine with a bright, dazzling light. [OE. glaren, gloren; cf. AS. glær amber, LG. glaren to glow or burn like coals, D. gloren to glimmer; prob. akin to E. glass.]
throe n.
Extreme pain; violent pang; anguish; agony; especially, one of the pangs of travail in childbirth, or purturition. [OE. , , AS. a threatening, oppression, suffering, perhaps influenced by Icel. a throe, a pang, a longing; cf. AS. to suffer.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Apathy and Enthusiasm II is 61 lines in 6 stanzas. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A-BCBCDCD---------D despairing · lentA · melted · rentA · people · grassB · dejectionC · passB · elationC · roarD · nationC · beforeD · gigantical · dwarf · erebus · scoff · foreboding · o'er · proverb · saw · graybeard · warD
  2. 3 ABABACDCD-D appearA · endB · cheerA · lendB · rearA · boysC · stateD · joysC · abateD · mature · fateD
  3. 4 AABB eventA · precedentA · wiseB · surpriseB
  4. 5 AA-BB-CCDDEEEFF callA · prodigalA · wooed · mayB · theyB · neighborhood · fateC · uninitiateC · surmiseD · mysteriesD · gloryE · transitoryE · storyE · fightF · rightF
  5. 6 ABABAB presentA · fareB · spentA · glareB · adamantA · shareB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
So the winter died despairing,8··/˘·˘/˘
And the weary weeks of Lent;7··/˘···
And the ice-bound rivers melted,8····/˘/˘
And the tomb of Faith was rent.7·······
O, the rising of the People8··/˘··/˘
Came with springing of the grass,7··/˘···
They rebounded from dejection8·˘/˘·˘/˘
And Easter came to pass.6·/˘···
And the young were all elation8·····˘/˘
Hearing Sumter’s cannon roar,7/˘/˘/˘·
And they thought how tame the Nation8······/˘
In the age that went before.7·······
And Michael seemed gigantical,8·/˘·˘/˘˘
The Arch-fiend but a dwarf;6······
And at the towers of Erebus9···/˘·/˘˘
Our striplings flung the scoff.7/˘/˘···
But the elders with foreboding8··/˘·˘/˘
Mourned the days forever o’er,8·˘··˘/˘·
And re called the forest proverb,8····/˘/˘
The Iroquois’ old saw:6·/˘···
Grief to every graybeard7··/˘˘/˘
When young Indians lead the war.8··/˘˘···
The March into Virginia,7····˘/˘
Ending in the First Manassas.8/˘···˘/˘
(July, 1861.)2·/
Did all the lets and bars appear8······˘/
To every just or larger end,8·/˘··/˘·
Whence should come the trust and cheer?7·······
Youth must its ignorant impulse lend--8···/˘/˘·
Age finds place in the rear.6······
All wars are boyish, and are fought by boys,10···/˘·····
The champions and enthusiasts of the state:11·/˘·˘/˘····
Turbid ardors and vain joys7/˘/˘···
Not barrenly abate--6·/˘˘˘/
Stimulants to the power mature,8/˘˘··/˘/
Preparatives of fate.6······
Who here forecasteth the event?8··/·˘·˘/
What heart but spurns at precedent8·····/˘˘
And warnings of the wise,6·/˘···
Contemned foreclosures of surprise?8··˘/˘·˘/
The banners play, the bugles call,8·/˘··/˘·
The air is blue and prodigal.8·····/˘˘
No berrying party, pleasure-wooed,8·/˘/˘/˘·
No picnic party in the May,8·/·/˘···
Ever went less loth than they7/˘·····
Into that leafy neighborhood.8···/˘/˘·
In Bacchic glee they file toward Fate,9·········
Moloch’s uninitiate;6······
Expectancy, and glad surmise8˘/˘˘··˘/
Of battle’s unknown mysteries.8·/˘˘//˘˘
All they feel is this: ’tis glory,8······/˘
A rapture sharp, though transitory,9·/˘··/˘·˘
Yet lasting in belaureled story.9·/˘····/˘
So they gayly go to fight,7··/˘···
Chatting left and laughing right.7/˘··/˘·
But some who this blithe mood present,8······/˘
As on in lightsome files they fare,8···/˘···
Shall die experienced ere three days are spent--10··˘/˘·····
Perish, enlightened by the vollied glare;9/˘˘/˘····
Or shame survive, and, like to adamant,9··˘/···/˘
The throe of Second Manassas share.9···/˘˘/˘·

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