The Night Cometh

John McCrae (1872–1918) · 1919

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 15 lines · from In Flanders Fields, and Other Poems

Cometh the night. The wind falls low,The trees swing slowly to and fro:Around the church the headstones greyCluster, like children strayed awayBut found again, and folded so.

No chiding look doth she bestow:If she is glad, they cannot know;If ill or well they spend their day,Cometh the night.

Singing or sad, intent they go;They do not see the shadows grow;"There yet is time," they lightly say,"Before our work aside we lay";Their task is but half-done, and lo!Cometh the night.

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The Night Cometh is in the public domain. This text is taken from In Flanders Fields, and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #353; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: John McCrae, The Night Cometh, in In Flanders Fields, and Other Poems (1919), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #353, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/mccrae-flanders/the-night-cometh.html, id L17058.

Form and metre

The Night Cometh is 15 lines in 3 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 67% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.6 syllables. 13% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBA lowA · froA · greyB · awayB · soA
  2. 2 AA-- bestowA · knowA · day · night
  3. 3 AABBA- goA · growA · sayB · layB · loA · night
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Cometh the night. The wind falls low,8/˘······
The trees swing slowly to and fro:8···/˘···
Around the church the headstones grey8·····/··
Cluster, like children strayed away9/˘·/˘·˘˘/
But found again, and folded so.8··˘/·/˘·
No chiding look doth she bestow:8·/˘···˘/
If she is glad, they cannot know;8·····/˘·
If ill or well they spend their day,8········
Cometh the night.4/˘··
Singing or sad, intent they go;8/˘··˘/··
They do not see the shadows grow;8·····/··
"There yet is time," they lightly say,8·····/˘·
"Before our work aside we lay";9··/˘·˘/··
Their task is but half-done, and lo!8········
Cometh the night.4/˘··

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