Vinvela

James Macpherson (1736–1796) · 1760

trochaic tetrameter · unrhymed · 9 lines · from Fragments of Ancient Poetry

Yes!--I will remember thee--indeedmy Shilric will fall. What shall I do,my love! when thou art gone for ever?Through these hills I will go at noon: Owill go through the silent heath. ThereI will see where often thou sattest returningfrom the chace. Indeed, my Shilricwill fall; but I will rememberhim.

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
chace v. t.
To pursue. See Chase v. t.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Vinvela is in the public domain. This text is taken from Fragments of Ancient Poetry, Project Gutenberg ebook #8161; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: James Macpherson, Vinvela, in Fragments of Ancient Poetry (1760), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8161, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macpherson-ossian/vinvela-3.html, id L09636.

Form and metre

Vinvela is 9 lines in a single verse paragraph. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 67% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Yes!--I will remember thee--indeed9···˘/˘·˘/
my Shilric will fall. What shall I do,9·········
my love! when thou art gone for ever?9·······/˘
Through these hills I will go at noon: O9·········
will go through the silent heath. There8····/˘··
I will see where often thou sattest returning12····/˘·/˘˘/˘
from the chace. Indeed, my Shilric8···˘/···
will fall; but I will remember8·····˘/˘
him.1·

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