To E.M. II
Dear friend, you love the poet's song,And here is one for your regard.You know the "melancholy bard,"Whose grief is wise as well as strong;
Already something understandFor whom he mourns and what he sings,And how he wakes with golden stringsThe echoes of "the silent land;"
How, restless, faint, and worn with grief,Yet loving all and hoping all,He gazes where the shadows fall,And finds in darkness some relief;
And how he sends his cries across,His cries for him that comes no more,Till one might think that silent shoreFull of the burden of his loss;
And how there comes sublimer cheer--Not darkness solacing sad eyes,Not the wild joy of mournful cries,But light that makes his spirit clear;
How, while he gazes, something high,Something of Heaven has fallen on him,His distance and his future dimBroken into a dawning sky!
Something of this, dear friend, you know;And will you take the book from meThat holds this mournful melody,And softens grief to sadness so?
Perhaps it scarcely suits the dayOf joyful hopes and memories clear,When love should have no thought of fear,And only smiles be round your way;
Yet from the mystery and the gloom,From tempted faith and conquering trust,From spirit stronger than the dust,And love that looks beyond the tomb,
What can there be but good to win,But hope for life, but love for all,But strength whatever may befall?--So for the year that you begin,
For all the years that follow thisWhile a long happy life endures,This hope, this love, this strength be yours,And afterwards a larger bliss!
May nothing in this mournful songToo much take off your thoughts from time,For joy should fill your vernal prime,And peace your summer mild and long.
And may his love who can restoreAll losses, give all new good things,Like loving eyes and sheltering wingsBe round us all for evermore!
Words in this poem
- sadness n.
- Heaviness; firmness.
- evermore adv.
- During eternity; always; forever; for an indefinite period; at all times; -- often used substantively with for.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
To E.M. II is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: George MacDonald, To E.M. II, in A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems (1893), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9984, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macdonald-poems/to-e-m-ii.html, id L22439.
Form and metre
To E.M. II is 52 lines in 13 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABBA, complete in 12 of its 13 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABBA songA · regardB · bardB · strongA
- 2 ABBA understandA · singsB · stringsB · landA
- 3 ABBA griefA · allB · fallB · reliefA
- 4 ABBA acrossA · moreB · shoreB · lossA
- 5 ABBA cheerA · eyesB · criesB · clearA
- 6 ABBA highA · himB · dimB · skyA
- 7 A--A knowA · me · melody · soA
- 8 ABBA dayA · clearB · fearB · wayA
- 9 ABBA gloomA · trustB · dustB · tombA
- 10 ABBA winA · allB · befallB · beginA
- 11 ABBA thisA · enduresB · yoursB · blissA
- 12 ABBA songA · timeB · primeB · longA
- 13 ABBA restoreA · thingsB · wingsB · evermoreA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Dear friend, you love the poet's song, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| And here is one for your regard. | 8 | ······˘/ |
| You know the "melancholy bard," | 8 | ···/˘·˘· |
| Whose grief is wise as well as strong; | 8 | ········ |
| Already something understand | 8 | ˘/˘/˘·˘/ |
| For whom he mourns and what he sings, | 8 | ········ |
| And how he wakes with golden strings | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| The echoes of "the silent land;" | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| How, restless, faint, and worn with grief, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Yet loving all and hoping all, | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| He gazes where the shadows fall, | 8 | ·/˘··/·· |
| And finds in darkness some relief; | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
| And how he sends his cries across, | 8 | ······˘/ |
| His cries for him that comes no more, | 8 | ········ |
| Till one might think that silent shore | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Full of the burden of his loss; | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| And how there comes sublimer cheer-- | 8 | ········ |
| Not darkness solacing sad eyes, | 8 | ·/˘/˘˘·· |
| Not the wild joy of mournful cries, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| But light that makes his spirit clear; | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| How, while he gazes, something high, | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| Something of Heaven has fallen on him, | 9 | /˘·/·/˘·· |
| His distance and his future dim | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Broken into a dawning sky! | 8 | /˘···/˘· |
| Something of this, dear friend, you know; | 8 | /˘······ |
| And will you take the book from me | 8 | ········ |
| That holds this mournful melody, | 8 | ···/˘/˘˘ |
| And softens grief to sadness so? | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Perhaps it scarcely suits the day | 8 | ˘/·/˘··· |
| Of joyful hopes and memories clear, | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| When love should have no thought of fear, | 8 | ········ |
| And only smiles be round your way; | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Yet from the mystery and the gloom, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| From tempted faith and conquering trust, | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| From spirit stronger than the dust, | 8 | ·/˘/˘··· |
| And love that looks beyond the tomb, | 8 | ········ |
| What can there be but good to win, | 8 | ········ |
| But hope for life, but love for all, | 8 | ········ |
| But strength whatever may befall?-- | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
| So for the year that you begin, | 8 | ······˘/ |
| For all the years that follow this | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| While a long happy life endures, | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
| This hope, this love, this strength be yours, | 8 | ········ |
| And afterwards a larger bliss! | 8 | ·/˘˘·/˘· |
| May nothing in this mournful song | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Too much take off your thoughts from time, | 8 | ········ |
| For joy should fill your vernal prime, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| And peace your summer mild and long. | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| And may his love who can restore | 8 | ······˘/ |
| All losses, give all new good things, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Like loving eyes and sheltering wings | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Be round us all for evermore! | 8 | ·····/˘· |
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