The Souls' Rising

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

trochaic tetrameter · 134 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

See how the storm of life ascendsUp through the shadow of the world!Beyond our gaze the line extends,Like wreaths of vapour tempest-hurled!Grasp tighter, brother, lest the stormShould sweep us down from where we stand,And we may catch some human formWe know, amongst the straining band.

See! see in yonder misty cloudOne whirlwind sweep, and we shall hearThe voice that waxes yet more loudAnd louder still approaching near!

Tremble not, brother, fear not thou,For yonder wild and mystic strainWill bring before us strangely nowThe visions of our youth again!

Listen! oh listen!See how its eyeballs roll and glistenWith a wild and fearful stareUpwards through the shining air,Or backwards with averted look,As a child were gazing at a bookFull of tales of fear and dread,When the thick night-wind came hollow and dead.

Round about it, wavering and light.As the moths flock round a candle at night,A crowd of phantoms sheeted and dumbStrain to its words as they shrilly come:Brother, my brother, dost thou hear?They pierce through the tumult sharp and clear!

"The rush of speed is on my soul,My eyes are blind with things I see;I cannot grasp the awful whole,I cannot gird the mystery!The mountains sweep like mist away;The great sea shakes like flakes of fire;The rush of things I cannot seeIs mounting upward higher and higher!Oh! life was still and full of calmIn yonder spot of earthly ground,But now it rolls a thunder-psalm,Its voices drown my ear in sound!Would God I were a child againTo nurse the seeds of faith and power;I might have clasped in wisdom thenA wing to beat this awful hour!The dullest things would take my marks--They took my marks like drifted snow--God! how the footsteps rise in sparks,Rise like myself and onward go!Have pity, O ye driving thingsThat once like me had human form!For I am driven for lack of wingsA shreddy cloud before the storm!"

How its words went through me then,Like a long forgotten pang,Till the storm's embrace againSwept it far with sudden clang!--Ah, methinks I see it still!Let us follow it, my brother,Keeping close to one another,Blessing God for might of will!Closer, closer, side by side!Ours are wings that deftly glideUpwards, downwards, and crosswiseFlashing past our ears and eyes,Splitting up the comet-tracksWith a whirlwind at our backs!

How the sky is blackening!Yet the race is never slackening;Swift, continual, and strong,Streams the torrent slope along,Like a tidal surge of facesMolten into one despair;Each the other now displaces,A continual whirl of spaces;Ah, my fainting eyesight reelsAs I strive in vain to stareOn a thousand turning wheelsDimly in the gloom descending,Faces with each other blending!--Let us beat the vapours back,We are yet upon his track.

Didst thou see a spirit haltUpright on a cloudy peak,As the lightning's horrid faultSmote a gash into the cheekOf the grinning thunder-cloudWhich doth still besiege and crowdUpward from the nether pitsWhere the monster Chaos sits,Building o'er the fleeing rackRoofs of thunder long and black?Yes, I see it! I will shoutTill I stop the horrid rout.Ho, ho! spirit-phantom, tellIs thy path to heaven or hell?We would hear thee yet again,What thy standing amongst men,What thy former history,And thy hope of things to be!Wisdom still we gain from hearing:We would know, we would knowWhither thou art steering--Unto weal or woe!

Ah, I cannot hear it speaking!Yet it seems as it were seekingThrough our eyes our souls to reachWith a quaint mysterious speech,As with stretched and crossing palmsOne were tracing diagramsOn the ebbing of the beach,Till with wild unmeasured danceAll the tiptoe waves advance,Seize him by the shoulder, cover,Turn him up and toss him over:He is vanished from our sight,Nothing mars the quiet nightSave a speck of gloom afarLike the ruin of a star!

Brother, streams it ever so,Such a torrent tide of woe?Ah, I know not; let us hasteUpwards from this dreary waste,Up to where like music flowingGentler feet are ever going,Streams of life encircling runRound about the spirit-sun!Up beyond the storm and rushWith our lesson let us rise!Lo, the morning's golden flushMeets us midway in the skies!Perished all the dream and strife!Death is swallowed up of Life!

Words in this poem 30
vapour n.
Any substance in the gaseous, or aëriform, state, the condition of which is ordinarily that of a liquid or solid. [OE. vapour, OF. vapour, vapor, vapeur, F. vapeur, L. vapor; probably for cvapor, and akin to Gr. kvepti to breathe, smell, Russ. kopote fine soot. Cf. Vapid.]
tighter n.
A ribbon or string used to draw clothes closer.
amongst prep.
Mixed or mingled; surrounded by. [OE. amongist, amonges, amonge, among, AS. onmang, ongemang, gemang, in a crowd or mixture. For the ending -st see Amidst. See Mingle.]
yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
strangely adv.
As something foreign, or not one's own; in a manner adapted to something foreign and strange.
averted a.
Turned away, esp. as an expression of feeling; also, offended; unpropitious.
shrilly a.
Somewhat shrill.
shreddy a.
Consisting of shreds.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
clang v. t.
To strike together so as to produce a ringing metallic sound. [L. clangere; akin to Gr. clank.]
methinks v.
It seems to me; I think. See Me. [AS. þyncan to seem, me þynceedh, me þuhte, OE. me thinketh, me thoughte; akin to G. dünken to seem, denken to think, and E. think. See Me, and Think.]
closer n.
One who, or that which, closes; specifically, a boot closer. See under Boot.
deftly adv.
Aptly; fitly; dexterously; neatly. [Cf. Defly.]
backs n.
Among leather dealers, the thickest and stoutest tanned hides.
tidal a.
Of or pertaining to tides; caused by tides; having tides; periodically rising and falling, or following and ebbing; as, tidal waters.
eyesight n.
Sight of the eye; the sense of seeing; view; observation.
dimly adv.
In a dim or obscure manner; not brightly or clearly; with imperfect sight.
blending n.
The act of mingling.
didst
, the 2d pers. sing. imp. of Do.
horrid a.
Rough; rugged; bristling. [L. horridus. See Horror, and cf. Ordure.]
nether a.
Situated down or below; lying beneath, or in the lower part; having a lower position; belonging to the region below; lower; under; -- opposed to upper. [OE. nethere, neithere, AS. ni, fr. the adv. ni downward; akin to neo below, beneath, D. neder down, G. nieder, Sw. nedre below, nether, a. & adv., and also to S]
chaos n.
An empty, immeasurable space; a yawning chasm. [L. chaos chaos (in senses 1 & 2), Gr. Chasm.]
whither adv.
To what place; -- used interrogatively; as, whither goest thou [OE. whider. AS. hwider; akin to E. where, who; cf. Goth. hvadre whither. See Who, and cf. Hither, Thither.]
quaint a.
Prudent; wise; hence, crafty; artful; wily. [OE. queint, queynte, coint, prudent, wise, cunning, pretty, odd, OF. cointe cultivated, amiable, agreeable, neat, fr. L. cognitus known, p. p. of cognoscere to ]
tiptoe n.
The end, or tip, of the toe.
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
dreary a.
Sorrowful; distressful. [OE. dreori, dreri, AS. dreórig, sad; akin to G. traurig, and prob. to AS. dreósan to fall, Goth. driusan. Cf. Dross, Drear, Drizzle, Drowse.]
midway n.
The middle of the way or distance; a middle way or course.
strife n.
The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

The Souls' Rising is 134 lines in 11 stanzas. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 83%).

See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCD ascendsA · worldB · extendsA · hurledB · stormC · standD · formC · bandD
  2. 2 ABAB cloudA · hearB · loudA · nearB
  3. 3 ABAB thouA · strainB · nowA · againB
  4. 4 AABBCCDD listenA · glistenA · stareB · airB · lookC · bookC · dreadD · deadD
  5. 5 AABBCC lightA · nightA · dumbB · comeB · hearC · clearC
  6. 6 ABA--CBCDEDEFGFGHIHIJKJK soulA · seeB · wholeA · mystery · away · fireC · seeB · higherC · calmD · groundE · psalmD · soundE · againF · powerG · thenF · hourG · marksH · snowI · sparksH · goI · thingsJ · formK · wingsJ · stormK
  7. 7 ABABCDDCEEFFGG thenA · pangB · againA · clangB · stillC · brotherD · anotherD · willC · sideE · glideE · crosswiseF · eyesF · tracksG · backsG
  8. 8 AABBCDCCEDEFFGG blackeningA · slackeningA · strongB · alongB · facesC · despairD · displacesC · spacesC · reelsE · stareD · wheelsE · descendingF · blendingF · backG · trackG
  9. 9 ABABCCDDEEFFGGHH--IJIJ haltA · peakB · faultA · cheekB · cloudC · crowdC · pitsD · sitsD · rackE · blackE · shoutF · routF · tellG · hellG · againH · menH · history · be · hearingI · knowJ · steeringI · woeJ
  10. 10 AABB--BCC--DDEE speakingA · seekingA · reachB · speechB · palms · diagrams · beachB · danceC · advanceC · cover · over · sightD · nightD · afarE · starE
  11. 11 AABBCCDDEFEFGG soA · woeA · hasteB · wasteB · flowingC · goingC · runD · sunD · rushE · riseF · flushE · skiesF · strifeG · lifeG
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
See how the storm of life ascends8······˘/
Up through the shadow of the world!8···/····
Beyond our gaze the line extends,8··/···˘/
Like wreaths of vapour tempest-hurled!8···/˘/˘·
Grasp tighter, brother, lest the storm8·/˘/˘···
Should sweep us down from where we stand,8········
And we may catch some human form8·····/˘·
We know, amongst the straining band.8·····/˘·
See! see in yonder misty cloud8···/˘/˘·
One whirlwind sweep, and we shall hear8·/······
The voice that waxes yet more loud8···/˘···
And louder still approaching near!8·/˘·˘/˘·
Tremble not, brother, fear not thou,8/˘·/˘···
For yonder wild and mystic strain8·/˘··/˘·
Will bring before us strangely now8·····/˘·
The visions of our youth again!8·/˘·/·˘/
Listen! oh listen!5/˘·/˘
See how its eyeballs roll and glisten9···/···/˘
With a wild and fearful stare7····/˘·
Upwards through the shining air,7/˘··/˘·
Or backwards with averted look,8·/˘·˘/˘·
As a child were gazing at a book9····/˘···
Full of tales of fear and dread,7·······
When the thick night-wind came hollow and dead.10······/˘··
Round about it, wavering and light.8····/˘··
As the moths flock round a candle at night,10······/˘··
A crowd of phantoms sheeted and dumb9···/˘/˘··
Strain to its words as they shrilly come:9······/˘·
Brother, my brother, dost thou hear?8/˘·/˘···
They pierce through the tumult sharp and clear!9····/˘···
"The rush of speed is on my soul,8········
My eyes are blind with things I see;8········
I cannot grasp the awful whole,8·/˘··/˘·
I cannot gird the mystery!8·/˘··/˘˘
The mountains sweep like mist away;8·/˘···˘/
The great sea shakes like flakes of fire;9·······/˘
The rush of things I cannot see8·····/˘·
Is mounting upward higher and higher!9·/˘/˘/·/˘
Oh! life was still and full of calm8········
In yonder spot of earthly ground,8·/˘··/˘·
But now it rolls a thunder-psalm,8·····/˘·
Its voices drown my ear in sound!8·/˘·····
Would God I were a child again8······˘/
To nurse the seeds of faith and power;9·······/˘
I might have clasped in wisdom then8·····/˘·
A wing to beat this awful hour!9·····/˘/˘
The dullest things would take my marks--8·/˘·····
They took my marks like drifted snow--8·····/˘·
God! how the footsteps rise in sparks,8···/····
Rise like myself and onward go!8···/·/˘·
Have pity, O ye driving things8·/˘··/˘·
That once like me had human form!8·····/˘·
For I am driven for lack of wings8···/····
A shreddy cloud before the storm!"8·/˘·····
How its words went through me then,7·······
Like a long forgotten pang,7···˘/˘·
Till the storm's embrace again7···˘/˘/
Swept it far with sudden clang!--7····/˘·
Ah, methinks I see it still!7·˘/····
Let us follow it, my brother,8··/˘··/˘
Keeping close to one another,8/˘···˘/˘
Blessing God for might of will!7/˘·····
Closer, closer, side by side!7/˘/˘···
Ours are wings that deftly glide8/˘···/˘·
Upwards, downwards, and crosswise7/˘/˘·/·
Flashing past our ears and eyes,8/˘·/˘···
Splitting up the comet-tracks7/˘··/˘·
With a whirlwind at our backs!8··/··/˘·
How the sky is blackening!7····/˘˘
Yet the race is never slackening;9····/˘/˘˘
Swift, continual, and strong,7·˘/˘˘··
Streams the torrent slope along,7··/˘·˘/
Like a tidal surge of faces8··/˘··/˘
Molten into one despair;7/˘···˘/
Each the other now displaces,8··/˘·˘/˘
A continual whirl of spaces;9·˘/˘˘··/˘
Ah, my fainting eyesight reels7··/˘/··
As I strive in vain to stare7·······
On a thousand turning wheels7··/˘/˘·
Dimly in the gloom descending,8/˘···˘/˘
Faces with each other blending!--8/˘··/˘/˘
Let us beat the vapours back,7····/˘·
We are yet upon his track.7·······
Didst thou see a spirit halt7····/˘·
Upright on a cloudy peak,7/···/˘·
As the lightning's horrid fault7··/˘/˘·
Smote a gash into the cheek7·······
Of the grinning thunder-cloud7··/˘/˘·
Which doth still besiege and crowd7···˘/··
Upward from the nether pits7/˘··/˘·
Where the monster Chaos sits,7··/˘/˘·
Building o'er the fleeing rack7/˘··/˘·
Roofs of thunder long and black?7··/˘···
Yes, I see it! I will shout7·······
Till I stop the horrid rout.7····/˘·
Ho, ho! spirit-phantom, tell7··/˘/˘·
Is thy path to heaven or hell?8····/˘··
We would hear thee yet again,7·····˘/
What thy standing amongst men,7··/˘···
What thy former history,7··/˘/˘˘
And thy hope of things to be!7·······
Wisdom still we gain from hearing:8/˘····/˘
We would know, we would know6······
Whither thou art steering--6/˘··/˘
Unto weal or woe!5·····
Ah, I cannot hear it speaking!8··/˘··/˘
Yet it seems as it were seeking8······/˘
Through our eyes our souls to reach8·/·/˘···
With a quaint mysterious speech,8···˘/˘˘·
As with stretched and crossing palms8···˘·/˘·
One were tracing diagrams7··/˘/˘·
On the ebbing of the beach,7··/˘···
Till with wild unmeasured dance8······˘·
All the tiptoe waves advance,7··/··˘/
Seize him by the shoulder, cover,8····/˘/˘
Turn him up and toss him over:8········
He is vanished from our sight,8··/˘·/˘·
Nothing mars the quiet night7/˘··/˘·
Save a speck of gloom afar7·····˘/
Like the ruin of a star!7··/˘···
Brother, streams it ever so,7/˘··/˘·
Such a torrent tide of woe?7··/˘···
Ah, I know not; let us haste7·······
Upwards from this dreary waste,7/˘··/˘·
Up to where like music flowing8····/˘/˘
Gentler feet are ever going,8/˘··/˘/˘
Streams of life encircling run8···˘/˘˘·
Round about the spirit-sun!7····/˘·
Up beyond the storm and rush7·······
With our lesson let us rise!8·/˘/˘···
Lo, the morning's golden flush7··/˘/˘·
Meets us midway in the skies!7··/····
Perished all the dream and strife!8/˘˘·····
Death is swallowed up of Life!8··/˘˘···

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