Sir Lark and King Sun

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

iambic pentameter · AABBCC · 43 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

"Good morrow, my lord!" in the sky aloneSang the lark as the sun ascended his throne."Shine on me, my lord: I only am come,Of all your servants, to welcome you home!I have shot straight up, a whole hour, I swear,To catch the first gleam of your golden hair."

"Must I thank you then," said the king, "sir Lark,For flying so high and hating the dark?You ask a full cup for half a thirst:Half was love of me, half love to be first.Some of my subjects serve better my taste:Their watching and waiting means more than your haste."

King Sun wrapt his head in a turban of cloud;Sir Lark stopped singing, quite vexed and cowed;But higher he flew, for he thought, "AnonThe wrath of the king will be over and gone;And, scattering his head-gear manifold,He will change my brown feathers to a glory of gold!"

He flew, with the strength of a lark he flew,But as he rose the cloud rose too;And not one gleam of the flashing hairBrought signal of favour across the air;And his wings felt withered and worn and old,For their feathers had had no chrism of gold.

Outwearied at length, and throbbing sore,The strong sun-seeker could do no more;He faltered and sank, then dropped like a stoneBeside his nest, where, patient, alone,Sat his little wife on her little eggs,Keeping them warm with wings and legs.

Did I say alone? Ah, no such thing!There was the cloudless, the ray-crowned king!"Welcome, sir Lark!--You look tired!" said he;"Up is not always the best way to me:While you have been racing my turban gray,I have been shining where you would not stay!"

He had set a coronet round the nest;Its radiance foamed on the wife's little breast;And so glorious was she in russet goldThat sir Lark for wonder and awe grew cold;He popped his head under her wing, and layAs still as a stone till king Sun went away.Bing, Bim, Bang, Bome!

Words in this poem

thank n.
A expression of gratitude; an acknowledgment expressive of a sense of favor or kindness received; obligation, claim, or desert, or gratitude; -- now generally used in the plural. [AS. Þanc, Þonc, thanks, favor, thought; akin to OS. thank favor, pleasure, thanks, D. & G. dank thanks, Icel. Þ\'94kk, Dan. tak, Sw. tack, Goth. Þagks thanks; -]
anon adv.
Straightway; at once. [OE. anoon, anon, anan, lit., in one (moment), fr. AS. on in + an one. See On and One.]
favour n.
Kind regard; propitious aspect; countenance; friendly disposition; kindness; good will. [Written also favour.]
chrism n.
Olive oil mixed with balm and spices, consecrated by the bishop on Maundy Thursday, and used in the administration of baptism, confirmation, ordination, etc. [OE. crisme, from AS. crisma; also OE. creme, fr. OF. cresme, like the AS. word fr. LL. chrisma, fr. Gr. friare, fricare, to rub, Skr. gharsh, E. friable, fricti]
cloudless a.
Without a cloud; clear; bright.
glorious a.
Exhibiting attributes, qualities, or acts that are worthy of or receive glory; noble; praiseworthy; excellent; splendid; illustrious; inspiring admiration; as, glorious deeds. [OF. glorios, glorious, F. glorieux, fr. L. gloriosus. See Glory, n.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
bing n.
A heap or pile; as, a bing of wood. [Cf. Icel. bingr, Sw. binge, G. beige, beuge. Cf. Prov. E. bink bench, and bench coal the uppermost stratum of coal.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Sir Lark and King Sun is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Sir Lark and King Sun is 43 lines in 7 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is AABBCC, complete in 5 of its 7 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 73%).

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCC aloneA · throneA · comeB · homeB · swearC · hairC
  2. 2 AABBCC larkA · darkA · thirstB · firstB · tasteC · hasteC
  3. 3 AA--BB cloudA · cowedA · anon · gone · manifoldB · goldB
  4. 4 AABBCC flewA · tooA · hairB · airB · oldC · goldC
  5. 5 AABBCC soreA · moreA · stoneB · aloneB · eggsC · legsC
  6. 6 AABBCC thingA · kingA · heB · meB · grayC · stayC
  7. 7 AABBCC- nestA · breastA · goldB · coldB · layC · awayC · bome
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
"Good morrow, my lord!" in the sky alone10·/˘·····˘/
Sang the lark as the sun ascended his throne.11······˘/˘··
"Shine on me, my lord: I only am come,10······/˘··
Of all your servants, to welcome you home!10···/˘·/˘··
I have shot straight up, a whole hour, I swear,10·······/··
To catch the first gleam of your golden hair."10·······/˘·
"Must I thank you then," said the king, "sir Lark,10··········
For flying so high and hating the dark?10·/˘···/˘··
You ask a full cup for half a thirst:9·········
Half was love of me, half love to be first.10··········
Some of my subjects serve better my taste:10···˘/·/˘··
Their watching and waiting means more than your haste."11·/˘·/˘·····
King Sun wrapt his head in a turban of cloud;11·······/˘··
Sir Lark stopped singing, quite vexed and cowed;10···˘/˘····
But higher he flew, for he thought, "Anon10·/˘·····˘/
The wrath of the king will be over and gone;10··········
And, scattering his head-gear manifold,10·/˘˘···/˘·
He will change my brown feathers to a glory of gold!"13·····/˘··/˘··
He flew, with the strength of a lark he flew,10··········
But as he rose the cloud rose too;8········
And not one gleam of the flashing hair9······/˘·
Brought signal of favour across the air;10·/˘·/˘˘/··
And his wings felt withered and worn and old,10····/˘····
For their feathers had had no chrism of gold.10··/˘······
Outwearied at length, and throbbing sore,8·····/˘·
The strong sun-seeker could do no more;9···/˘····
He faltered and sank, then dropped like a stone10·/˘·······
Beside his nest, where, patient, alone,9˘/···/˘˘/
Sat his little wife on her little eggs,10··/˘···/˘·
Keeping them warm with wings and legs.8/˘······
Did I say alone? Ah, no such thing!9···˘/····
There was the cloudless, the ray-crowned king!10···/˘···˘·
"Welcome, sir Lark!--You look tired!" said he;10/˘····/˘··
"Up is not always the best way to me:10···/······
While you have been racing my turban gray,10····/˘·/˘·
I have been shining where you would not stay!"10···/˘·····
He had set a coronet round the nest;10····/˘/···
Its radiance foamed on the wife's little breast;10·/˘····/˘·
And so glorious was she in russet gold10··/˘···/˘·
That sir Lark for wonder and awe grew cold;10····/˘····
He popped his head under her wing, and lay10··········
As still as a stone till king Sun went away.11·········˘/
Bing, Bim, Bang, Bome!4····

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