Sharing
On the far horizon thereHeaps of cloudy darkness rest;Though the wind is in the airThere is stupor east and west.
For the sky no change is making,Scarce we know it from the plain;Droop its eyelids never waking,Blinded by the misty rain;
Save on high one little spot,Round the baffled moon a spaceWhere the tumult ceaseth not:Wildly goes the midnight race!
And a joy doth rise in meUpward gazing on the sight,When I think that others seeIn yon clouds a like delight;
How perchance an aged manStruggling with the wind and rain,In the moonlight cold and wanFeels his heart grow young again;
As the cloudy rack goes by,How the life-blood mantles upTill the fountain deep and dryYields once more a sparkling cup.
Or upon the gazing childCometh down a thought of gloryWhich will keep him undefiledTill his head is old and hoary.
For it may be he hath wokeAnd hath raised his fair young form;Strangely on his eyes have brokeAll the splendours of the storm;
And his young soul forth doth leapWith the storm-clouds in the moon;And his heart the light will keepThough the vision passeth soon.
Thus a joy hath often laughedOn my soul from other skies,Bearing on its wings a draughtFrom the wells of Paradise,
For that not to me aloneComes a splendour out of fear;Where the light of heaven hath shoneThere is glory far and near.
Words in this poem
- scarce a.
- Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
- hoary a.
- White or whitish."The hoary willows."
- strangely adv.
- As something foreign, or not one's own; in a manner adapted to something foreign and strange.
- broke v. i.
- To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
- splendour n.
- Great brightness; brilliant luster; brilliancy; as, the splendor ot the sun. B. Jonson. [L. fr. splendere to shine: cf. F. splendeur.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Sharing is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: George MacDonald, Sharing, in A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems (1893), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9984, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macdonald-poems/sharing.html, id L22412.
Form and metre
Sharing is 44 lines in 11 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 9 of its 11 stanzas. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).
See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABAB thereA · restB · airA · westB
- 2 ABAB makingA · plainB · wakingA · rainB
- 3 ABAB spotA · spaceB · notA · raceB
- 4 ABAB meA · sightB · seeA · delightB
- 5 -A-A man · rainA · wan · againA
- 6 ABAB byA · upB · dryA · cupB
- 7 ABAB childA · gloryB · undefiledA · hoaryB
- 8 ABAB wokeA · formB · brokeA · stormB
- 9 ABAB leapA · moonB · keepA · soonB
- 10 A-A- laughedA · skies · draughtA · paradise
- 11 ABAB aloneA · fearB · shoneA · nearB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| On the far horizon there | 7 | ···˘/˘· |
| Heaps of cloudy darkness rest; | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| Though the wind is in the air | 7 | ······· |
| There is stupor east and west. | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| For the sky no change is making, | 8 | ······/˘ |
| Scarce we know it from the plain; | 7 | ······· |
| Droop its eyelids never waking, | 8 | ··/·/˘/˘ |
| Blinded by the misty rain; | 7 | /˘··/˘· |
| Save on high one little spot, | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Round the baffled moon a space | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Where the tumult ceaseth not: | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| Wildly goes the midnight race! | 7 | /˘··/·· |
| And a joy doth rise in me | 7 | ······· |
| Upward gazing on the sight, | 7 | /˘/˘··· |
| When I think that others see | 7 | ····/˘· |
| In yon clouds a like delight; | 7 | ·····˘/ |
| How perchance an aged man | 6 | ·˘/··· |
| Struggling with the wind and rain, | 7 | /˘····· |
| In the moonlight cold and wan | 7 | ··/···· |
| Feels his heart grow young again; | 7 | ·····˘/ |
| As the cloudy rack goes by, | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| How the life-blood mantles up | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Till the fountain deep and dry | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Yields once more a sparkling cup. | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Or upon the gazing child | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Cometh down a thought of glory | 8 | /˘····/˘ |
| Which will keep him undefiled | 7 | ······· |
| Till his head is old and hoary. | 8 | ······/˘ |
| For it may be he hath woke | 7 | ······· |
| And hath raised his fair young form; | 7 | ······· |
| Strangely on his eyes have broke | 7 | /˘····· |
| All the splendours of the storm; | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| And his young soul forth doth leap | 7 | ······· |
| With the storm-clouds in the moon; | 7 | ······· |
| And his heart the light will keep | 7 | ······· |
| Though the vision passeth soon. | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| Thus a joy hath often laughed | 7 | ····/˘· |
| On my soul from other skies, | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Bearing on its wings a draught | 7 | /˘····· |
| From the wells of Paradise, | 7 | ····/˘· |
| For that not to me alone | 7 | ·····˘/ |
| Comes a splendour out of fear; | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Where the light of heaven hath shone | 7 | ····/·· |
| There is glory far and near. | 7 | ··/˘··· |
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