Oh That a Wind

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

iambic tetrameter · ABABCDCD · 32 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

Oh that a wind would callFrom the depths of the leafless wood!Oh that a voice would fallOn the ear of my solitude!

Far away is the sea,With its sound and its spirit tone;Over it white clouds flee;But I am alone, alone.

Straight and steady and tallThe trees stand on their feet;Fast by the old stone wallThe moss grows green and sweet;But my heart is full of fears,For the sun shines far away;And they look in my face through tears,And the light of a dying day.

My heart was glad last nightAs I pressed it with my palm;Its throb was airy and lightAs it sang some spirit psalm;But it died away in my breastAs I wandered forth to-day,--As a bird sat dead on its nest,While others sang on the spray.

O weary heart of mine,Is there ever a Truth for thee?Will ever a sun outshineBut the sun that shines on me?Away, away through the airThe clouds and the leaves are blown;And my heart hath need of prayer,For it sitteth alone, alone.

Words in this poem

throb v. i.
To beat, or pulsate, with more than usual force or rapidity; to beat in consequence of agitation; to palpitate; -- said of the heart, pulse, etc. [OE. ; of uncertain origin; cf. Russ. trepete a trembling, and E. trepidation.]
outshine v. i.
To shine forth.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Oh That a Wind is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: George MacDonald, Oh That a Wind, in A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems (1893), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9984, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macdonald-poems/oh-that-a-wind.html, id L22422.

Form and metre

Oh That a Wind is 32 lines in 5 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABABCDCD, complete in 3 of its 5 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A-A- callA · wood · fallA · solitude
  2. 2 ABAB seaA · toneB · fleeA · aloneB
  3. 3 ABABCDCD tallA · feetB · wallA · sweetB · fearsC · awayD · tearsC · dayD
  4. 4 ABABCDCD nightA · palmB · lightA · psalmB · breastC · dayD · nestC · sprayD
  5. 5 ABABCDCD mineA · theeB · outshineA · meB · airC · blownD · prayerC · aloneD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Oh that a wind would call6······
From the depths of the leafless wood!8·····/˘·
Oh that a voice would fall6······
On the ear of my solitude!8·····/˘·
Far away is the sea,6·˘/···
With its sound and its spirit tone;7·····/·
Over it white clouds flee;6······
But I am alone, alone.7···˘/˘/
Straight and steady and tall6··/˘··
The trees stand on their feet;6······
Fast by the old stone wall6······
The moss grows green and sweet;6······
But my heart is full of fears,7·······
For the sun shines far away;7·····˘/
And they look in my face through tears,8········
And the light of a dying day.8·····/˘·
My heart was glad last night6······
As I pressed it with my palm;7·······
Its throb was airy and light7···/˘··
As it sang some spirit psalm;7····/˘·
But it died away in my breast8···˘/···
As I wandered forth to-day,--7··/˘···
As a bird sat dead on its nest,8········
While others sang on the spray.7·/˘····
O weary heart of mine,6·/˘···
Is there ever a Truth for thee?7··/····
Will ever a sun outshine7·/˘··/·
But the sun that shines on me?7·······
Away, away through the air7˘/˘/···
The clouds and the leaves are blown;7·······
And my heart hath need of prayer,7·······
For it sitteth alone, alone.8··/˘˘/˘/

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