Under the Moon

Various (about 750), translated by L. Cranmer-Byng · 1909

iambic tetrameter · 6 lines · from A Lute of Jade

Under the crescent moon's faint glowThe washerman's bat resounds afar,And the autumn breeze sighs tenderly.But my heart has gone to the Tartar war,To bleak Kansuh and the steppes of snow,Calling my husband back to me.

Words in this poem

afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
tenderly adv.
In a tender manner; with tenderness; mildly; gently; softly; in a manner not to injure or give pain; with pity or affection; kindly.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Under the Moon is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Lute of Jade, Project Gutenberg ebook #390, the L. Cranmer-Byng translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, Under the Moon, in A Lute of Jade (1909), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #390, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lute-of-jade/under-the-moon.html, id L15582.

Form and metre

Under the Moon is 6 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 82%). 88% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.8 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A---A- glowA · afar · tenderly · war · snowA · me
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Under the crescent moon's faint glow8···/˘···
The washerman's bat resounds afar,9······/˘/
And the autumn breeze sighs tenderly.9··/˘··/˘˘
But my heart has gone to the Tartar war,10·······/˘·
To bleak Kansuh and the steppes of snow,9·········
Calling my husband back to me.8/˘·/˘···

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