The Influence of Religion on Chinese Poetry

Various (about 750), translated by L. Cranmer-Byng · 1909

iambic tetrameter · 12 lines · from A Lute of Jade

Gathering the water-plantsFrom the wild luxuriance of spring,Away in the depth of a wild valleyAnon, I see a lovely girl.With green leaves the peach-trees are loaded,The breeze blows gently along the stream,Willows shade the winding path,Darting orioles collect in groups.Eagerly I press forwardAs the reality grows upon me. . . .'Tis the eternal theme,Which, though old, is ever new.*

Words in this poem

luxuriance n.
The state or quality of being luxuriant; rank, vigorous growth; excessive abundance produced by rank growth. [Cf. F. luxuriance.]
anon adv.
Straightway; at once. [OE. anoon, anon, anan, lit., in one (moment), fr. AS. on in + an one. See On and One.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Influence of Religion on Chinese Poetry is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Lute of Jade, Project Gutenberg ebook #390, the L. Cranmer-Byng translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Influence of Religion on Chinese Poetry is 12 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 83%). 82% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.2 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 33% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -----A----A- plants · spring · valley · girl · loaded · streamA · path · groups · forward · me · themeA · new
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Gathering the water-plants7/˘˘·/˘·
From the wild luxuriance of spring,9···˘/˘˘··
Away in the depth of a wild valley10˘/······/˘
Anon, I see a lovely girl.8˘/···/˘·
With green leaves the peach-trees are loaded,9·······/˘
The breeze blows gently along the stream,9···/˘˘/··
Willows shade the winding path,7/···/˘·
Darting orioles collect in groups.9/˘/˘·˘/··
Eagerly I press forward7/˘˘··/˘
As the reality grows upon me. . . .10··˘/˘˘····
'Tis the eternal theme,6··˘/˘·
Which, though old, is ever new.*7····/˘·

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