The Colour of Life

Various (about 750), translated by L. Cranmer-Byng · 1909

iambic tetrameter · 12 lines · from A Lute of Jade

Would that we might for ever stayThe rainbow glories of the world,The blue of the unfathomed sea,The rare azalea late unfurled,The parrot of a greener spring,The willows and the terrace line,The stranger from the night-steeped hills,The roselit brimming cup of wine.Oh for a life that stretched afar,Where no dead dust of books were rife,Where spring sang clear from star to star;Alas! what hope for such a life?

Words in this poem

azalea n.
A genus of showy flowering shrubs, mostly natives of China or of North America; false honeysuckle. The genus is scarcely distinct from Rhododendron.
brimming a.
Full to the brim; overflowing.
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
rife a.
Prevailing; prevalent; abounding. [AS. rif abundant, or Icel. rifr munificent; akin to OD. riff, rijve, abundant.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Colour of Life is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Lute of Jade, Project Gutenberg ebook #390, the L. Cranmer-Byng translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, The Colour of Life, in A Lute of Jade (1909), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #390, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lute-of-jade/the-colour-of-life.html, id L15613.

Form and metre

The Colour of Life is 12 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.4 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 8% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A-B-BCDCD stay · worldA · sea · unfurledA · spring · lineB · hills · wineB · afarC · rifeD · starC · lifeD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Would that we might for ever stay8·····/˘·
The rainbow glories of the world,8·/·/˘···
The blue of the unfathomed sea,8········
The rare azalea late unfurled,8··˘/˘·˘/
The parrot of a greener spring,8·/˘··/˘·
The willows and the terrace line,8·/···/˘·
The stranger from the night-steeped hills,8·/˘·····
The roselit brimming cup of wine.9····/˘···
Oh for a life that stretched afar,8······˘/
Where no dead dust of books were rife,8········
Where spring sang clear from star to star;8········
Alas! what hope for such a life?8˘/······

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