Despondent

Various (about 750), translated by L. Cranmer-Byng · 1909

iambic tetrameter · 12 lines · from A Lute of Jade

A gale goes ruffling down the stream,The giants of the forest crack;My thoughts are bitter -- black as death --For she, my summer, comes not back.

A hundred years like water glide,Riches and rank are ashen cold,Daily the dream of peace recedes:By whom shall Sorrow be consoled?

The soldier, dauntless, draws his sword,And there are tears and endless pain;The winds arise, leaves flutter down,And through the old thatch drips the rain.

Words in this poem

ashen a.
Of or pertaining to the ash tree. [See Ash, the tree.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
dauntless a.
Incapable of being daunted; undaunted; bold; fearless; intrepid.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Despondent is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Lute of Jade, Project Gutenberg ebook #390, the L. Cranmer-Byng translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, Despondent, in A Lute of Jade (1909), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #390, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lute-of-jade/despondent.html, id L15618.

Form and metre

Despondent is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%). 86% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.2 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A stream · crackA · death · backA
  2. 2 -A-A glide · coldA · recedes · consoledA
  3. 3 -A-A sword · painA · down · rainA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A gale goes ruffling down the stream,8···/˘···
The giants of the forest crack;8·/˘··/˘·
My thoughts are bitter -- black as death --8···/˘···
For she, my summer, comes not back.8···/˘···
A hundred years like water glide,8·/˘··/˘·
Riches and rank are ashen cold,8/˘···/˘·
Daily the dream of peace recedes:8/˘····˘/
By whom shall Sorrow be consoled?8···/˘·˘/
The soldier, dauntless, draws his sword,8·/˘/˘···
And there are tears and endless pain;8·····/˘·
The winds arise, leaves flutter down,8··˘/·/˘·
And through the old thatch drips the rain.8········

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