An Incident in a Railroad Car
He spoke of Burns: men rude and roughPressed round to hear the praise of oneWhose heart was made of manly, simple stuff,As homespun as their own.
And, when he read, they forward leaned,Drinking, with thirsty hearts and ears,His brook-like songs whom glory never weanedFrom humble smiles and tears.
Slowly there grew a tender awe,Sun-like, o'er faces brown and hard,As if in him who read they felt and sawSome presence of the bard.
It was a sight for sin and wrongAnd slavish tyranny to see,A sight to make our faith more pure and strongIn high humanity.
I thought, these men will carry hencePromptings their former life above,And something of a finer reverenceFor beauty, truth, and love.
God scatters love on every side,Freely among his children all,And always hearts are lying open wide,Wherein some grains may fall.
There is no wind but soweth seedsOf a more true and open life,Which burst, unlooked-for, into high-souled deeds,With wayside beauty rife.
We find within these souls of oursSome wild germs of a higher birth,Which in the poet's tropic heart bear flowersWhose fragrance fills the earth.
Within the hearts of all men lieThese promises of wider bliss,Which blossom into hopes that cannot die,In sunny hours like this.
All that hath been majesticalIn life or death, since time began,Is native in the simple heart of all,The angel heart of man.
And thus, among the untaught poor,Great deeds and feelings find a home,That cast in shadow all the golden loreOf classic Greece and Rome.
O, mighty brother-soul of man,Where'er thou art, in low or high,Thy skiey arches with exulting spanO'er-roof infinity!
All thoughts that mould the age beginDeep down within the primitive soul,And from the many slowly upward winTo one who grasps the whole:
In his wide brain the feeling deepThat struggled on the many's tongueSwells to a tide of thought, whose surges leapO'er the weak thrones of wrong.
All thought begins in feeling,--wideIn the great mass its base is hid,And, narrowing up to thought, stands glorified,A moveless pyramid.
Nor is he far astray who deemsThat every hope, which rises and grows broadIn the world's heart, by ordered impulse streamsFrom the great heart of God.
God wills, man hopes: in common soulsHope is but vague and undefined,Till from the poet's tongue the message rollsA blessing to his kind.
Never did Poesy appearSo full of heaven to me, as whenI saw how it would pierce through pride and fearTo the lives of coarsest men.
It may be glorious to writeThoughts that shall glad the two or threeHigh souls, like those far stars that come in sightOnce in a century;--
But better far it is to speakOne simple word, which now and thenShall waken their free nature in the weakAnd friendless sons of men;
To write some earnest verse or line,Which, seeking not the praise of art,Shall make a clearer faith and manhood shineIn the untutored heart.
He who doth this, in verse or prose,May be forgotten in his day,But surely shall be crowned at last with thoseWho live and speak for aye.
Words in this poem 19
- spoke n.
- The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
- homespun a.
- Spun or wrought at home; of domestic manufacture; coarse; plain.
- unlooked a.
- Not observed or foreseen; unexpected; -- generally with for. [Pref. un- not + looked.]
- souled a.
- Furnished with a soul; possessing soul and feeling; -- used chiefly in composition; as, great-souled Hector.
- wayside n.
- The side of the way; the edge or border of a road or path.
- rife a.
- Prevailing; prevalent; abounding. [AS. rif abundant, or Icel. rifr munificent; akin to OD. riff, rijve, abundant.]
- sunny a.
- Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
- majestical a.
- Majestic. Cowley.
- classic a.
- Of or relating to the first class or rank, especially in literature or art. [L. classicus relating to the classes of the Roman people, and especially to the frist class; hence, of the first rank, superior, from classis class: cf. F. clas]
- exulting a.
- Rejoicing triumphantly or exceedingly; exultant.
- mould n.
- Crumbling, soft, friable earth; esp., earth containing the remains or constituents of organic matter, and suited to the growth of plants; soil. [OE. molde, AS. molde; akin to D. mul, G. mull, mulm, OHG. molt, molta, Icel. mold, Dan. muld, Sw. mull, Goth. mulda, and E. meal flour. See Meal, and cf. Mole a]
- narrowing n.
- The act of contracting, or of making or becoming less in breadth or extent.
- moveless a.
- Motionless; fixed.
- poesy n.
- The art of composing poems; poetical skill or faculty; as, the heavenly gift of poesy. [F. poésie (cf. It. poesia), L. poesis, from Gr. Posy.]
- glorious a.
- Exhibiting attributes, qualities, or acts that are worthy of or receive glory; noble; praiseworthy; excellent; splendid; illustrious; inspiring admiration; as, glorious deeds. [OF. glorios, glorious, F. glorieux, fr. L. gloriosus. See Glory, n.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- waken v. i.
- To wake; to cease to sleep; to be awakened. [OE. waknen, AS. wæcnan; akin to Goth. gawaknan. See Wake, v. i.]
- friendless a.
- Destitute of friends; forsaken. [AS. freóndleás.]
- clearer n.
- One who, or that which, clears.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
An Incident in a Railroad Car is 88 lines in 22 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 12 of its 22 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.2 syllables. 10 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 42% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 A-A- roughA · one · stuffA · own
- 2 ABAB leanedA · earsB · weanedA · tearsB
- 3 ABAB aweA · hardB · sawA · bardB
- 4 A-A- wrongA · see · strongA · humanity
- 5 ABAB henceA · aboveB · reverenceA · loveB
- 6 ABAB sideA · allB · wideA · fallB
- 7 ABAB seedsA · lifeB · deedsA · rifeB
- 8 ABAB oursA · birthB · flowersA · earthB
- 9 ABAB lieA · blissB · dieA · thisB
- 10 -A-A majestical · beganA · all · manA
- 11 -A-A poor · homeA · lore · romeA
- 12 A-A- manA · high · spanA · infinity
- 13 ABAB beginA · soulB · winA · wholeB
- 14 A-A- deepA · tongue · leapA · wrong
- 15 A-AA wideA · hid · glorifiedA · pyramidA
- 16 A-A- deemsA · broad · streamsA · god
- 17 ABAB soulsA · undefinedB · rollsA · kindB
- 18 ABAB appearA · whenB · fearA · menB
- 19 A-A- writeA · three · sightA · century
- 20 ABAB speakA · thenB · weakA · menB
- 21 ABAB lineA · artB · shineA · heartB
- 22 A-A- proseA · day · thoseA · aye
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| He spoke of Burns: men rude and rough | 8 | ········ |
| Pressed round to hear the praise of one | 9 | ·˘······· |
| Whose heart was made of manly, simple stuff, | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| As homespun as their own. | 6 | ·/···· |
| And, when he read, they forward leaned, | 9 | ·····/˘·˘ |
| Drinking, with thirsty hearts and ears, | 8 | /˘·/˘··· |
| His brook-like songs whom glory never weaned | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| From humble smiles and tears. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Slowly there grew a tender awe, | 8 | /˘···/˘· |
| Sun-like, o'er faces brown and hard, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| As if in him who read they felt and saw | 10 | ·········· |
| Some presence of the bard. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| It was a sight for sin and wrong | 8 | ········ |
| And slavish tyranny to see, | 8 | ·/˘/˘˘·· |
| A sight to make our faith more pure and strong | 10 | ····/····· |
| In high humanity. | 6 | ··˘/˘˘ |
| I thought, these men will carry hence | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Promptings their former life above, | 8 | /˘·/˘··· |
| And something of a finer reverence | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘˘ |
| For beauty, truth, and love. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| God scatters love on every side, | 9 | ·/˘··/˘˘· |
| Freely among his children all, | 8 | /˘···/˘· |
| And always hearts are lying open wide, | 10 | ·/···/˘/˘· |
| Wherein some grains may fall. | 6 | ······ |
| There is no wind but soweth seeds | 8 | ········ |
| Of a more true and open life, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Which burst, unlooked-for, into high-souled deeds, | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| With wayside beauty rife. | 6 | ·/·/˘· |
| We find within these souls of ours | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| Some wild germs of a higher birth, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Which in the poet's tropic heart bear flowers | 11 | ···/˘/˘··/˘ |
| Whose fragrance fills the earth. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Within the hearts of all men lie | 8 | ········ |
| These promises of wider bliss, | 8 | ·/˘˘·/˘· |
| Which blossom into hopes that cannot die, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| In sunny hours like this. | 7 | ·/˘/˘·· |
| All that hath been majestical | 8 | ····˘/˘˘ |
| In life or death, since time began, | 8 | ······˘/ |
| Is native in the simple heart of all, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| The angel heart of man. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| And thus, among the untaught poor, | 8 | ········ |
| Great deeds and feelings find a home, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| That cast in shadow all the golden lore | 10 | ···/···/˘· |
| Of classic Greece and Rome. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| O, mighty brother-soul of man, | 8 | ·/˘/˘··· |
| Where'er thou art, in low or high, | 9 | ˘˘/······ |
| Thy skiey arches with exulting span | 10 | ·/˘/˘·˘/˘· |
| O'er-roof infinity! | 6 | ··˘/˘˘ |
| All thoughts that mould the age begin | 8 | ······˘/ |
| Deep down within the primitive soul, | 9 | ·····/˘˘· |
| And from the many slowly upward win | 10 | ···/˘/˘/˘· |
| To one who grasps the whole: | 6 | ······ |
| In his wide brain the feeling deep | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| That struggled on the many's tongue | 9 | ·/˘˘··/˘· |
| Swells to a tide of thought, whose surges leap | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| O'er the weak thrones of wrong. | 6 | ······ |
| All thought begins in feeling,--wide | 8 | ··˘/·/˘· |
| In the great mass its base is hid, | 8 | ········ |
| And, narrowing up to thought, stands glorified, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| A moveless pyramid. | 7 | ····/˘˘ |
| Nor is he far astray who deems | 8 | ····˘/·· |
| That every hope, which rises and grows broad | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| In the world's heart, by ordered impulse streams | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| From the great heart of God. | 6 | ······ |
| God wills, man hopes: in common souls | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Hope is but vague and undefined, | 9 | ······˘/˘ |
| Till from the poet's tongue the message rolls | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| A blessing to his kind. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Never did Poesy appear | 8 | /˘·/˘˘˘/ |
| So full of heaven to me, as when | 9 | ···/˘···· |
| I saw how it would pierce through pride and fear | 10 | ·········· |
| To the lives of coarsest men. | 7 | ····/˘· |
| It may be glorious to write | 8 | ···/˘˘·· |
| Thoughts that shall glad the two or three | 8 | ········ |
| High souls, like those far stars that come in sight | 10 | ·········· |
| Once in a century;-- | 6 | ···/˘˘ |
| But better far it is to speak | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| One simple word, which now and then | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Shall waken their free nature in the weak | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| And friendless sons of men; | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| To write some earnest verse or line, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Which, seeking not the praise of art, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Shall make a clearer faith and manhood shine | 10 | ···/˘··/·· |
| In the untutored heart. | 6 | ······ |
| He who doth this, in verse or prose, | 8 | ········ |
| May be forgotten in his day, | 8 | ··˘/˘··· |
| But surely shall be crowned at last with those | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Who live and speak for aye. | 6 | ······ |
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