Lead Soldiers
Tommy's soldiers march to battle,Trumpets flare and snare-drums rattle.Bayonets flash, and sabres glance--How the horses snort and prance!Cannon drawn up in a lineGlitter in the dizzy shineOf the morning sunlight. FlagsRipple colours in great jags.Red blows out, then blue, then green,Then all three--a weaving sheenOf prismed patriotism. MarchTommy's soldiers, stiff and starch,Boldly stepping to the rattleOf the drums, they go to battle.Crack! Rattle! The sparks fly up the chimney.
Tommy's army's off to war--Not a soldier knows what for.But he knows about his rifle,How to shoot it, and a trifleOf the proper thing to doWhen it's he who is shot through.Like a cleverly trained flea,He can follow instantlyOrders, and some quick commandsReally make severe demandsOn a mind that's none too rapid,Leaden brains tend to the vapid.But how beautifully dressedIs this army! How impressedTommy is when at his heelAll his baggage wagons wheelAbout the patterned carpet, andMoving up his heavy gunsHe sees them glow with diamond sunsFlashing all along each barrel.And the gold and blue apparelOf his gunners is a joy.Tommy is a lucky boy.Boom! Boom! Ta-ra!
Tommy's leaden soldiers we,Glittering with efficiency.Not a button's out of place,Tons and tons of golden laceWind about our officers.Every manly bosom stirsAt the thought of killing--killing!Tommy's dearest wish fulfilling.We are gaudy, savage, strong,And our loins so ripe we longFirst to kill, then procreate,Doubling so the laws of Fate.On their women we have swornTo graft our sons. And overborneThey'll rear us younger soldiers, soShall our race endure and grow,Waxing greater in the wombsBorrowed of them, while damp tombsRot their men. O Glorious War!Goad us with your points, Great Star!
The china mandarin on the bookcase nods slowly, forward andback--forward and back--and the red rose writhes and wriggles,thrusting its flaming petals under and over one another like torturedsnakes.
Words in this poem
- trumpets n.
- A plant (Sarracenia flava) with long, hollow leaves.
- flare v. i.
- To burn with an unsteady or waving flame; as, the candle flares. [Cf. Norw. flara to blaze, flame, adorn with tinsel, dial. Sw. flasa upp, and E. flash, or flacker.]
- sheen v. i.
- To shine; to glisten.
- boldly adv.
- In a bold manner. [AS. bealdlice.]
- chimney n.
- A fireplace or hearth. Sir W. Raleigh.
- cleverly adv.
- In a clever manner.
- tommy n.
- Bread, -- generally a penny roll; the supply of food carried by workmen as their daily allowance.
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- glorious a.
- Exhibiting attributes, qualities, or acts that are worthy of or receive glory; noble; praiseworthy; excellent; splendid; illustrious; inspiring admiration; as, glorious deeds. [OF. glorios, glorious, F. glorieux, fr. L. gloriosus. See Glory, n.]
- bookcase n.
- A case with shelves for holding books, esp. one with glazed doors.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Lead Soldiers is in the public domain. This text is taken from Men, Women and Ghosts, Project Gutenberg ebook #841; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Amy Lowell, Lead Soldiers, in Men, Women and Ghosts (1916), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #841, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lowell-amy-men-women-ghosts/lead-soldiers.html, id L24272.
Form and metre
Lead Soldiers is 63 lines in 4 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 70% of the lines. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%).
See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in trochaic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBCCDDEEFFAA- battleA · rattleA · glanceB · pranceB · lineC · shineC · flagsD · jagsD · greenE · sheenE · marchF · starchF · rattleA · battleA · chimney
- 2 AABBCC--DDEEFFGG-HHIIJJ- warA · forA · rifleB · trifleB · doC · throughC · flea · instantly · commandsD · demandsD · rapidE · vapidE · dressedF · impressedF · heelG · wheelG · and · gunsH · sunsH · barrelI · apparelI · joyJ · boyJ · ra
- 3 --AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH-- we · efficiency · placeA · laceA · officersB · stirsB · killingC · fulfillingC · strongD · longD · procreateE · fateE · swornF · overborneF · soG · growG · wombsH · tombsH · war · star
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Tommy's soldiers march to battle, | 8 | /˘/˘··/˘ |
| Trumpets flare and snare-drums rattle. | 8 | /˘····/˘ |
| Bayonets flash, and sabres glance-- | 8 | /˘···/˘· |
| How the horses snort and prance! | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Cannon drawn up in a line | 7 | /˘····· |
| Glitter in the dizzy shine | 7 | /˘··/˘· |
| Of the morning sunlight. Flags | 7 | ··/˘/·· |
| Ripple colours in great jags. | 7 | /˘/˘··· |
| Red blows out, then blue, then green, | 7 | ······· |
| Then all three--a weaving sheen | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Of prismed patriotism. March | 8 | ·/˘/˘·˘· |
| Tommy's soldiers, stiff and starch, | 7 | /˘/˘··· |
| Boldly stepping to the rattle | 8 | /˘/˘··/˘ |
| Of the drums, they go to battle. | 8 | ······/˘ |
| Crack! Rattle! The sparks fly up the chimney. | 10 | ·/˘·····/˘ |
| Tommy's army's off to war-- | 7 | /˘/˘··· |
| Not a soldier knows what for. | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| But he knows about his rifle, | 8 | ······/˘ |
| How to shoot it, and a trifle | 8 | ······/˘ |
| Of the proper thing to do | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| When it's he who is shot through. | 7 | ······· |
| Like a cleverly trained flea, | 7 | ··/˘˘·· |
| He can follow instantly | 7 | ··/˘/˘˘ |
| Orders, and some quick commands | 7 | /˘···˘/ |
| Really make severe demands | 7 | /˘·˘/˘/ |
| On a mind that's none too rapid, | 8 | ······/˘ |
| Leaden brains tend to the vapid. | 8 | /˘····/˘ |
| But how beautifully dressed | 7 | ··/˘˘·˘ |
| Is this army! How impressed | 7 | ··/˘·˘/ |
| Tommy is when at his heel | 7 | /˘····· |
| All his baggage wagons wheel | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| About the patterned carpet, and | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| Moving up his heavy guns | 7 | /˘··/˘· |
| He sees them glow with diamond suns | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Flashing all along each barrel. | 8 | /˘·˘/·/˘ |
| And the gold and blue apparel | 8 | ·····˘/˘ |
| Of his gunners is a joy. | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Tommy is a lucky boy. | 7 | /˘··/˘· |
| Boom! Boom! Ta-ra! | 4 | ···· |
| Tommy's leaden soldiers we, | 7 | /˘/˘/˘· |
| Glittering with efficiency. | 8 | /˘˘·˘/˘˘ |
| Not a button's out of place, | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Tons and tons of golden lace | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Wind about our officers. | 8 | ···/˘/˘˘ |
| Every manly bosom stirs | 7 | /˘/˘/˘· |
| At the thought of killing--killing! | 8 | ····/˘/˘ |
| Tommy's dearest wish fulfilling. | 8 | /˘/˘·˘/˘ |
| We are gaudy, savage, strong, | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| And our loins so ripe we long | 7 | ·/····· |
| First to kill, then procreate, | 7 | ····/˘/ |
| Doubling so the laws of Fate. | 7 | /˘····· |
| On their women we have sworn | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| To graft our sons. And overborne | 8 | ··/····· |
| They'll rear us younger soldiers, so | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| Shall our race endure and grow, | 7 | ·/·˘/·· |
| Waxing greater in the wombs | 7 | /˘/˘··· |
| Borrowed of them, while damp tombs | 7 | /······ |
| Rot their men. O Glorious War! | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Goad us with your points, Great Star! | 7 | ······· |
| The china mandarin on the bookcase nods slowly, forward and | 15 | ·/˘/˘··/··/˘/˘· |
| back--forward and back--and the red rose writhes and wriggles, | 13 | ·/˘········/˘ |
| thrusting its flaming petals under and over one another like tortured | 18 | /˘·/˘/˘·····˘/˘·/˘ |
| snakes. | 1 | · |
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