Ode III

Richard Lovelace (1617–1657) · 1649

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 10 lines · from Lucasta

That strange force on the ignoble hath renown;As AURUM FULMINANS, it blows vice down.'Twere better (heavy one) to crawlForgot, then raised, trod on to fall.All your defections nowAre not writ on your brow;Odes to faults giveA shame must live.When a fat mist we view, we coughing run;But, that once meteor drawn, all cry: undone.

Words in this poem

aurum n.
Gold. Aurum fulminans (See Fulminate. [L.]
crawl v. i.
To move slowly by drawing the body along the ground, as a worm; to move slowly on hands and kness; to creep. [Dan. kravle, or Icel. krafla, to paw, scrabble with the hands; akin to Sw. kr to crawl; cf. LG. krabbeln, D. krabbelen to scratch.]
undone a.
Not done or performed; neglected. [Pref. un- not + done.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Ode III is in the public domain. This text is taken from Lucasta, Project Gutenberg ebook #703; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Richard Lovelace, Ode III, in Lucasta (1649), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #703, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lovelace-lucasta/ode-iii.html, id L13047.

Form and metre

Ode III is 10 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets: octosyllabic couplets. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter. 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.8 syllables. 30% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEE renownA · downA · crawlB · fallB · nowC · browC · giveD · liveD · runE · undoneE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
That strange force on the ignoble hath renown;11·····˘/˘·˘/
As AURUM FULMINANS, it blows vice down.10·/˘·······
'Twere better (heavy one) to crawl8·/˘/˘···
Forgot, then raised, trod on to fall.9˘/··˘····
All your defections now6··˘/˘·
Are not writ on your brow;6······
Odes to faults give4····
A shame must live.4····
When a fat mist we view, we coughing run;10·······/˘·
But, that once meteor drawn, all cry: undone.10···/˘···˘/

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