Drunk
Too far away, oh love, I know,To save me from this haunted road,Whose lofty roses break and blowOn a night-sky bent with a load
Of lights: each solitary rose,Each arc-lamp golden does exposeGhost beyond ghost of a blossom, showsNight blenched with a thousand snows.
Of hawthorn and of lilac trees,White lilac; shows discoloured nightDripping with all the golden leesLaburnum gives back to light
And shows the red of hawthorn setOn high to the purple heaven of night,Like flags in blenched blood newly wet,Blood shed in the noiseless fight.
Of life for love and love for life,Of hunger for a little food,Of kissing, lost for want of a wifeLong ago, long ago wooed.Too far away you are, my love,To steady my brain in this phantom showThat passes the nightly road aboveAnd returns again below.
The enormous cliff of horse-chestnut treesHas poised on each of its ledgesAn erect small girl looking down at me;White-night-gowned little chits I see,And they peep at me over the edgesOf the leaves as though they would leap, shouldI callThem down to my arms;"But, child, you're too small for me, too smallYour little charms."
White little sheaves of night-gowned maids,Some other will thresh you out!And I see leaning from the shadesA lilac like a lady there, who braidsHer white mantilla aboutHer face, and forward leans to catch the sightOf a man's face,Gracefully sighing through the whiteFlowery mantilla of lace.
And another lilac in purple veiledDiscreetly, all recklessly callsIn a low, shocking perfume, to know who has hailedHer forth from the night: my strength has failedIn her voice, my weak heart falls:Oh, and see the laburnum shimmeringHer draperies down,As if she would slip the gold, and glimmeringWhite, stand naked of gown.
The pageant of flowery trees aboveThe street pale-passionate goes,And back again down the pavement, LoveIn a lesser pageant flows.
Two and two are the folk that walk,They pass in a half embraceOf linked bodies, and they talkWith dark face leaning to face.
Come then, my love, come as you willAlong this haunted road,Be whom you will, my darling, I shallKeep with you the troth I trowed.
Words in this poem 15
- haunted a.
- Inhabited by, or subject to the visits of, apparitions; frequented by a ghost.
- ghost n.
- The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
- discoloured a.
- Altered in color;
- dripping n.
- A falling in drops, or the sound so made.
- laburnum n.
- A small leguminous tree (Cytisus Laburnum), native of the Alps. [L.]
- nightly a.
- Of or pertaining to the night, or to every night; happening or done by night, or every night; as, nightly shades; he kept nightly vigils.
- thresh v. t.
- To beat out grain from, as straw or husks; to beat the straw or husk of (grain) with a flail; to beat off, as the kernels of grain; as, to thrash wheat, rye, or oats; to thrash over the old straw. [OE. , , to beat, AS. , ; akin to D. dorschen, OD. derschen, G. dreschen, OHG. dreskan, Icel. , Sw. tröska, Dan. tærske, Goth. , Lith. traszketi to rattle, Russ.]
- mantilla n.
- A lady's light cloak of cape of silk, velvet, lace, or the like. [Sp. See Mantle.]
- veiled a.
- Covered by, or as by, a veil; hidden.
- shocking a.
- Causing to shake or tremble, as by a blow; especially, causing to recoil with horror or disgust; extremely offensive or disgusting.
- shimmering n.
- A gleam or glimmering.
- pageant n.
- A theatrical exhibition; a spectacle. [OE. pagent, pagen, originally, a movable scaffold or stage, hence, what was exhibited on it, fr. LL. pagina, akin to pangere to fasten; cf. L. pagina page, leaf]
- folk n.
- In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- troth n.
- Belief; faith; fidelity. [A variant of truth. See Truth.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Drunk is in the public domain. This text is taken from Amores: Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #22531; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: D. H. Lawrence, Drunk, in Amores (1916), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #22531, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lawrence-amores/drunk.html, id L13571.
Form and metre
Drunk is 64 lines in 11 stanzas. The commonest rhyme scheme is ABAB, in 5 of the 11 stanzas; the rest vary or could not be confirmed. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 82%). 89% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 53% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABAB knowA · roadB · blowA · loadB
- 2 AAAA roseA · exposeA · showsA · snowsA
- 3 ABAB treesA · nightB · leesA · lightB
- 4 ABAB setA · nightB · wetA · fightB
- 5 ABABCDCD lifeA · foodB · wifeA · wooedB · loveC · showD · aboveC · belowD
- 6 AABBA-CDCD treesA · ledgesA · meB · seeB · edgesA · should · callC · armsD · smallC · charmsD
- 7 ABAABCDCD maidsA · outB · shadesA · braidsA · aboutB · sightC · faceD · whiteC · laceD
- 8 ABAABCDCD veiledA · callsB · hailedA · failedA · fallsB · shimmeringC · downD · glimmeringC · gownD
- 9 ABAB aboveA · goesB · loveA · flowsB
- 10 ABAB walkA · embraceB · talkA · faceB
- 11 -A-A will · roadA · shall · trowedA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Too far away, oh love, I know, | 8 | ··˘/···· |
| To save me from this haunted road, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Whose lofty roses break and blow | 8 | ·/˘/˘··· |
| On a night-sky bent with a load | 8 | ········ |
| Of lights: each solitary rose, | 8 | ···/˘·˘· |
| Each arc-lamp golden does expose | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
| Ghost beyond ghost of a blossom, shows | 9 | ······/˘· |
| Night blenched with a thousand snows. | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Of hawthorn and of lilac trees, | 8 | ·/···/·· |
| White lilac; shows discoloured night | 9 | ·/··˘/˘˘· |
| Dripping with all the golden lees | 8 | /˘···/˘· |
| Laburnum gives back to light | 7 | ˘/˘···· |
| And shows the red of hawthorn set | 8 | ·····/·· |
| On high to the purple heaven of night, | 10 | ····/˘/˘·· |
| Like flags in blenched blood newly wet, | 9 | ····˘·/˘· |
| Blood shed in the noiseless fight. | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Of life for love and love for life, | 8 | ········ |
| Of hunger for a little food, | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Of kissing, lost for want of a wife | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| Long ago, long ago wooed. | 7 | ·˘/·˘/· |
| Too far away you are, my love, | 8 | ··˘/···· |
| To steady my brain in this phantom show | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| That passes the nightly road above | 9 | ·/˘·/˘··· |
| And returns again below. | 7 | ·˘/˘/·· |
| The enormous cliff of horse-chestnut trees | 10 | ·˘/˘···/·· |
| Has poised on each of its ledges | 9 | ··˘····/˘ |
| An erect small girl looking down at me; | 10 | ·˘/··/˘··· |
| White-night-gowned little chits I see, | 9 | ···˘/˘··· |
| And they peep at me over the edges | 10 | ········/˘ |
| Of the leaves as though they would leap, should | 9 | ········· |
| I call | 2 | ·· |
| Them down to my arms; | 5 | ····· |
| "But, child, you're too small for me, too small | 9 | ········· |
| Your little charms." | 4 | ·/˘· |
| White little sheaves of night-gowned maids, | 9 | ·/˘····˘· |
| Some other will thresh you out! | 7 | ·/˘···· |
| And I see leaning from the shades | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| A lilac like a lady there, who braids | 10 | ·/···/˘··· |
| Her white mantilla about | 7 | ··˘/˘·· |
| Her face, and forward leans to catch the sight | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Of a man's face, | 4 | ···· |
| Gracefully sighing through the white | 8 | /˘˘/˘··· |
| Flowery mantilla of lace. | 8 | /˘˘˘/˘·· |
| And another lilac in purple veiled | 10 | ·˘/˘/··/˘· |
| Discreetly, all recklessly calls | 8 | ˘/˘·/˘˘· |
| In a low, shocking perfume, to know who has hailed | 12 | ···/˘˘/····· |
| Her forth from the night: my strength has failed | 10 | ·········˘ |
| In her voice, my weak heart falls: | 7 | ······· |
| Oh, and see the laburnum shimmering | 10 | ····˘/˘/˘˘ |
| Her draperies down, | 5 | ·/˘˘· |
| As if she would slip the gold, and glimmering | 11 | ········/˘˘ |
| White, stand naked of gown. | 6 | ··/˘·· |
| The pageant of flowery trees above | 10 | ·/˘·/˘˘··· |
| The street pale-passionate goes, | 7 | ···/˘˘· |
| And back again down the pavement, Love | 9 | ··˘/··/˘· |
| In a lesser pageant flows. | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| Two and two are the folk that walk, | 8 | ········ |
| They pass in a half embrace | 7 | ·····˘/ |
| Of linked bodies, and they talk | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| With dark face leaning to face. | 7 | ···/˘·· |
| Come then, my love, come as you will | 8 | ········ |
| Along this haunted road, | 6 | ˘/·/˘· |
| Be whom you will, my darling, I shall | 9 | ·····/˘·· |
| Keep with you the troth I trowed. | 7 | ······· |
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