Rose-Morals

Sidney Lanier (1842–1881) · 1884

iambic pentameter · ABAB · 24 lines · from Poems

Would that my songs might beWhat roses make by day and night --Distillments of my clod of miseryInto delight.

Soul, could'st thou bare thy breastAs yon red rose, and dare the day,All clean, and large, and calm with velvet rest?Say yea -- say yea!

Ah, dear my Rose, good-bye;The wind is up; so; drift away.That songs from me as leaves from thee may fly,I strive, I pray.

Soul, get thee to the heartOf yonder tuberose: hide thee there --There breathe the meditations of thine artSuffused with prayer.

Of spirit grave yet light,How fervent fragrances uprisePure-born from these most rich and yet most whiteVirginities!

Mulched with unsavory death,Grow, Soul! unto such white estate,That virginal-prayerful art shall be thy breath,Thy work, thy fate.

Words in this poem

clod n.
A lump or mass, especially of earth, turf, or clay. [OE. clodde, latter form of clot. See Clot.]
yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
tuberose n.
A plant (Polianthes tuberosa) with a tuberous root and a liliaceous flower. It is much cultivated for its beautiful and fragrant white blossoms. [Cf. G. tuberose, F. tubéreuse, NL. Polianthes tuberosa. See Tuberous.]
fervent a.
Hot; glowing; boiling; burning; as, a fervent summer. [F. fervent, L. fervens, -entis. p.pr. of fervere o the boiling hot, to boil, glow.]
uprise v. i.
To rise; to get up; to appear from below the horizon.
virginal a.
Of or pertaining to a virgin; becoming a virgin; maidenly. [L. virginalis: cf. F. virginal.]
prayerful a.
Given to prayer; praying much or often; devotional.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Rose-Morals is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of Sidney Lanier, Project Gutenberg ebook #579; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Sidney Lanier, Rose-Morals, in Poems (1884), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #579, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lanier-poems/rose-morals.html, id L07623.

Form and metre

Rose-Morals is 24 lines in 6 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 4 of its 6 stanzas. 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.0 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 29% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A be · nightA · misery · delightA
  2. 2 ABAB breastA · dayB · restA · yeaB
  3. 3 ABAB byeA · awayB · flyA · prayB
  4. 4 ABAB heartA · thereB · artA · prayerB
  5. 5 A-A- lightA · uprise · whiteA · virginities
  6. 6 ABAB deathA · estateB · breathA · fateB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Would that my songs might be6······
What roses make by day and night --8·/˘·····
Distillments of my clod of misery10·······/˘˘
Into delight.4··˘/
Soul, could'st thou bare thy breast6······
As yon red rose, and dare the day,8········
All clean, and large, and calm with velvet rest?10·······/˘·
Say yea -- say yea!4····
Ah, dear my Rose, good-bye;6······
The wind is up; so; drift away.8······˘/
That songs from me as leaves from thee may fly,10··········
I strive, I pray.4····
Soul, get thee to the heart6······
Of yonder tuberose: hide thee there --8·/˘/˘···
There breathe the meditations of thine art10····˘/˘···
Suffused with prayer.4˘/··
Of spirit grave yet light,6·/˘···
How fervent fragrances uprise8·/˘/˘˘/˘
Pure-born from these most rich and yet most white10··········
Virginities!4˘/˘˘
Mulched with unsavory death,7··˘/˘˘·
Grow, Soul! unto such white estate,8······˘/
That virginal-prayerful art shall be thy breath,10·/˘/˘·····
Thy work, thy fate.4····

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