In Absence
The storm that snapped our fate's one ship in twainHath blown my half o' the wreck from thine apart.O Love! O Love! across the gray-waved mainTo thee-ward strain my eyes, my arms, my heart.I ask my God if e'en in His sweet place,Where, by one waving of a wistful wing,My soul could straightway tremble face to faceWith thee, with thee, across the stellar ring --Yea, where thine absence I could ne'er bewailLonger than lasts that little blank of blissWhen lips draw back, with recent pressure pale,To round and redden for another kiss --Would not my lonesome heart still sigh for theeWhat time the drear kiss-intervals must be?
So do the mottled formulas of SenseGlide snakewise through our dreams of Aftertime;So errors breed in reeds and grasses denseThat bank our singing rivulets of rhyme.By Sense rule Space and Time; but in God's LandTheir intervals are not, save such as lieBetwixt successive tones in concords blandWhose loving distance makes the harmony.Ah, there shall never come 'twixt me and theeGross dissonances of the mile, the year;But in the multichords of ecstasyOur souls shall mingle, yet be featured clear,And absence, wrought to intervals divine,Shall part, yet link, thy nature's tone and mine.
Look down the shining peaks of all my daysBase-hidden in the valleys of deep night,So shalt thou see the heights and depths of praiseMy love would render unto love's delight;For I would make each day an Alp sublimeOf passionate snow, white-hot yet icy-clear,-- One crystal of the true-loves of all timeSpiring the world's prismatic atmosphere;And I would make each night an awful valeDeep as thy soul, obscure as modesty,With every star in heaven trembling paleO'er sweet profounds where only Love can see.Oh, runs not thus the lesson thou hast taught? --When life's all love, 'tis life: aught else, 'tis naught.
Let no man say, `He at his lady's feetLays worship that to Heaven alone belongs;Yea, swings the incense that for God is meetIn flippant censers of light lover's songs.'Who says it, knows not God, nor love, nor thee;For love is large as is yon heavenly dome:In love's great blue, each passion is full freeTo fly his favorite flight and build his home.Did e'er a lark with skyward-pointing beakStab by mischance a level-flying dove?Wife-love flies level, his dear mate to seek:God-love darts straight into the skies above.Crossing, the windage of each other's wingsBut speeds them both upon their journeyings.
Words in this poem 16
- twain a.
- Two;- nearly obsolete in common discourse, but used in poetry and burlesque. [OE. twein, tweien, tweyne, AS. twegen, masc. See Two.]
- wistful a.
- Longing; wishful; desirous. [For wishful; perhaps influenced by wistly, which is probably corrupted from OE. wisly certainly (from Icel. viss certain, akin to E. wit). See Wish.]
- straightway adv.
- Immediately; without loss of time; without delay.
- stellar a.
- Of or pertaining to stars; astral; as, a stellar figure; stellary orbs. [L. stellaris, fr. stella a star. See Star.]
- lonesome a.
- Secluded from society; not frequented by human beings; solitary.
- drear n.
- Sadness; dismalness.
- betwixt prep.
- In the space which separates; between. [OE. betwix, bitwix, rarely bitwixt, AS. betweox, betweohs, betweoh, betwih; pref. be- by + a form fr. AS. twa two. See Between.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- featured a.
- Shaped; fashioned.
- shalt
- 2d per. sing. of Shall.
- spiring a.
- Shooting up in a spire or spires.
- vale n.
- A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
- hast
- , 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
- aught n.
- Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
- flippant a.
- Of smooth, fluent, and rapid speech; speaking with ease and rapidity; having a voluble tongue; talkative. [Prov. E. flip to move nimbly; cf. W. llipa soft, limber, pliant, or Icel. fleipa to babble, prattle. Cf. Flip, Fillip, Flap, Flipper.]
- windage n.
- The difference between the diameter of the bore of a gun and that of the shot fired from it. [From Wind air in motion.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
In Absence is 56 lines in 4 stanzas of 14 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABCDCDEFEFGG, complete in 2 of its 4 stanzas; the stanza is the English sonnet. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 4 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 43% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other English sonnets, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABABCDCDEFEFGG twainA · apartB · mainA · heartB · placeC · wingD · faceC · ringD · bewailE · blissF · paleE · kissF · theeG · beG
- 2 ABABCDC-DE-EFF senseA · aftertimeB · denseA · rhymeB · landC · lieD · blandC · harmony · theeD · yearE · ecstasy · clearE · divineF · mineF
- 3 ABABCDCDE-E-FF daysA · nightB · praiseA · delightB · sublimeC · clearD · timeC · atmosphereD · valeE · modesty · paleE · see · taughtF · naughtF
- 4 ABABCDCDEFEFGG feetA · belongsB · meetA · songsB · theeC · domeD · freeC · homeD · beakE · doveF · seekE · aboveF · wingsG · journeyingsG
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| The storm that snapped our fate's one ship in twain | 10 | ····/····· |
| Hath blown my half o' the wreck from thine apart. | 11 | ·········˘/ |
| O Love! O Love! across the gray-waved main | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| To thee-ward strain my eyes, my arms, my heart. | 10 | ·········· |
| I ask my God if e'en in His sweet place, | 10 | ·········· |
| Where, by one waving of a wistful wing, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| My soul could straightway tremble face to face | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| With thee, with thee, across the stellar ring -- | 10 | ····˘/·/˘· |
| Yea, where thine absence I could ne'er bewail | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| Longer than lasts that little blank of bliss | 10 | /˘···/˘··· |
| When lips draw back, with recent pressure pale, | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| To round and redden for another kiss -- | 10 | ···/˘·˘/˘· |
| Would not my lonesome heart still sigh for thee | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| What time the drear kiss-intervals must be? | 10 | ·····/˘˘·· |
| So do the mottled formulas of Sense | 10 | ···/˘/˘˘·· |
| Glide snakewise through our dreams of Aftertime; | 11 | ·····/····· |
| So errors breed in reeds and grasses dense | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| That bank our singing rivulets of rhyme. | 10 | ··//˘····· |
| By Sense rule Space and Time; but in God's Land | 10 | ·········· |
| Their intervals are not, save such as lie | 10 | ·/˘˘······ |
| Betwixt successive tones in concords bland | 10 | ˘/˘/˘··/·· |
| Whose loving distance makes the harmony. | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘˘ |
| Ah, there shall never come 'twixt me and thee | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Gross dissonances of the mile, the year; | 10 | ·/˘˘˘····· |
| But in the multichords of ecstasy | 10 | ·······/˘˘ |
| Our souls shall mingle, yet be featured clear, | 10 | /··/˘··/˘· |
| And absence, wrought to intervals divine, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘˘˘/ |
| Shall part, yet link, thy nature's tone and mine. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Look down the shining peaks of all my days | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Base-hidden in the valleys of deep night, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| So shalt thou see the heights and depths of praise | 10 | ·········· |
| My love would render unto love's delight; | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| For I would make each day an Alp sublime | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Of passionate snow, white-hot yet icy-clear, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| -- One crystal of the true-loves of all time | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Spiring the world's prismatic atmosphere; | 10 | /˘··˘/˘/˘· |
| And I would make each night an awful vale | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Deep as thy soul, obscure as modesty, | 10 | ····˘/·/˘˘ |
| With every star in heaven trembling pale | 10 | ·/˘··//˘˘· |
| O'er sweet profounds where only Love can see. | 10 | ··˘/·/˘··· |
| Oh, runs not thus the lesson thou hast taught? -- | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| When life's all love, 'tis life: aught else, 'tis naught. | 10 | ·········· |
| Let no man say, `He at his lady's feet | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Lays worship that to Heaven alone belongs; | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘/ |
| Yea, swings the incense that for God is meet | 10 | ···˘/····· |
| In flippant censers of light lover's songs.' | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| Who says it, knows not God, nor love, nor thee; | 10 | ·········· |
| For love is large as is yon heavenly dome: | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| In love's great blue, each passion is full free | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| To fly his favorite flight and build his home. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Did e'er a lark with skyward-pointing beak | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Stab by mischance a level-flying dove? | 10 | ··˘/·/˘/˘· |
| Wife-love flies level, his dear mate to seek: | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| God-love darts straight into the skies above. | 10 | ·········· |
| Crossing, the windage of each other's wings | 10 | /˘·/˘··/˘· |
| But speeds them both upon their journeyings. | 10 | ·······/˘˘ |
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