Anonymous: The Milk White Doe

Various, translated by Andrew Lang · 1872

common measure · 48 lines · from Ballads and Lyrics of Old France

IT was a mother and a maidThat walked the woods among,And still the maid went slow and sad,And still the mother sung.

‘What ails you, daughter Margaret?Why go you pale and wan?Is it for a cast of bitter love,Or for a false leman?’

‘It is not for a false loverThat I go sad to see;But it is for a weary lifeBeneath the greenwood tree.

‘For ever in the good daylightA maiden may I go,But always on the ninth midnightI change to a milk white doe.

‘They hunt me through the green forestWith hounds and hunting men;And ever it is my fair brotherThat is so fierce and keen.’

‘Good-morrow, mother.’ ‘Good-morrow, son;Where are your hounds so good?’Oh, they are hunting a white doeWithin the glad greenwood.

‘And three times have they hunted her,And thrice she’s won away;The fourth time that they follow herThat white doe they shall slay.’

Then out and spoke the forester,As he came from the wood,‘Now never saw I maid’s gold hairAmong the wild deer’s blood.

‘And I have hunted the wild deerIn east lands and in west;And never saw I white doe yetThat had a maiden’s breast.’

Then up and spake her fair brother,Between the wine and bread,‘Behold, I had but one sister,And I have been her dead.’

‘But ye must bury my sweet sisterWith a stone at her foot and her head,And ye must cover her fair bodyWith the white roses and red.’

And I must out to the greenwood,The roof shall never shelter me;And I shall lie for seven long yearsOn the grass below the hawthorn tree.

Words in this poem

went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
leman n.
A sweetheart, of either sex; a gallant, or a mistress; -- usually in a bad sense. Chaucer. Spenser. [OE. lemman, legman; AS.leóf dear + mann man. See Lief, and Man.]
greenwood n.
A forest as it appears is spring and summer.
daylight n.
The light of day as opposed to the darkness of night; the light of the sun, as opposed to that of the moon or to artificial light.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
forester n.
One who has charge of the growing timber on an estate; an officer appointed to watch a forest and preserve the game. [F. forestier, LL. forestarius.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Anonymous: The Milk White Doe is in the public domain. This text is taken from Ballads and Lyrics of Old France, with Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #795, the Andrew Lang translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, Anonymous: The Milk White Doe, in Ballads and Lyrics of Old France (1872), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #795, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lang-old-france/the-milk-white-doe.html, id L26918.

Form and metre

Anonymous: The Milk White Doe is 48 lines in 12 stanzas of 4 lines each. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 81%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A maid · amongA · sad · sungA
  2. 2 -A-A margaret · wanA · love · lemanA
  3. 3 -A-A lover · seeA · life · treeA
  4. 4 ABAB daylightA · goB · midnightA · doeB
  5. 6 -A-A son · goodA · doe · greenwoodA
  6. 7 ABAB herA · awayB · herA · slayB
  7. 8 -A-A forester · woodA · hair · bloodA
  8. 9 -A-A deer · westA · yet · breastA
  9. 10 -A-A brother · breadA · sister · deadA
  10. 11 -A-A sister · headA · body · redA
  11. 12 -A-A greenwood · meA · years · treeA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
IT was a mother and a maid8···/˘···
That walked the woods among,6······
And still the maid went slow and sad,8········
And still the mother sung.6···/˘·
‘What ails you, daughter Margaret?8···/˘/˘˘
Why go you pale and wan?6······
Is it for a cast of bitter love,9······/˘·
Or for a false leman?’6····/˘
‘It is not for a false lover8······/˘
That I go sad to see;6······
But it is for a weary life8·····/˘·
Beneath the greenwood tree.6···/··
‘For ever in the good daylight8·/˘···/·
A maiden may I go,6·/˘···
But always on the ninth midnight8·/˘···/·
I change to a milk white doe.7·······
‘They hunt me through the green forest8······/˘
With hounds and hunting men;6···/˘·
And ever it is my fair brother9·/˘····/˘
That is so fierce and keen.’6······
‘Good-morrow, mother.’ ‘Good-morrow, son;9·/˘/˘·/˘·
Where are your hounds so good?’6······
Oh, they are hunting a white doe8···/˘···
Within the glad greenwood.6····/·
‘And three times have they hunted her,8·····/˘·
And thrice she’s won away;6····˘/
The fourth time that they follow her8·····/˘·
That white doe they shall slay.’6······
Then out and spoke the forester,8·····/˘˘
As he came from the wood,6······
‘Now never saw I maid’s gold hair8·/˘·····
Among the wild deer’s blood.6······
‘And I have hunted the wild deer8···/˘···
In east lands and in west;6······
And never saw I white doe yet8·/˘·····
That had a maiden’s breast.’6···/˘·
Then up and spake her fair brother,8······/˘
Between the wine and bread,6······
‘Behold, I had but one sister,8˘/····/˘
And I have been her dead.’6······
‘But ye must bury my sweet sister9···/˘··/˘
With a stone at her foot and her head,9·········
And ye must cover her fair body9···/˘··/˘
With the white roses and red.’7···/˘··
And I must out to the greenwood,8······/·
The roof shall never shelter me;8···/˘/˘·
And I shall lie for seven long years8·····/··
On the grass below the hawthorn tree.9······/··

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