The Miracles

Rudyard Kipling (1865–1936) · 1889–1896

iambic tetrameter · ABAB · 36 lines · from Verses 1889–1896

I sent a message to my dear --A thousand leagues and more to Her --The dumb sea-levels thrilled to hear,And Lost Atlantis bore to Her.

Behind my message hard I came,And nigh had found a grave for me;But that I launched of steel and flameDid war against the wave for me.

Uprose the deep, by gale on gale,To bid me change my mind again --He broke his teeth along my rail,And, roaring, swung behind again.

I stayed the sun at noon to tellMy way across the waste of it;I read the storm before it fellAnd made the better haste of it.

Afar, I hailed the land at night --The towers I built had heard of me --And, ere my rocket reached its height,Had flashed my Love the word of me.

Earth sold her chosen men of strength(They lived and strove and died for me)To drive my road a nation's length,And toss the miles aside for me.

I snatched their toil to serve my needs --Too slow their fleetest flew for me --I tired twenty smoking steeds,And bade them bait a new for me.

I sent the lightnings forth to seeWhere hour by hour She waited me.Among ten million one was She,And surely all men hated me!

Dawn ran to meet me at my goal --Ah, day no tongue shall tell again!And little folk of little soulRose up to buy and sell again!

Words in this poem

broke v. i.
To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
stayed a.
Staid; fixed; settled; sober; -- now written staid. See Staid.
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
needs adv.
Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]
bade
A form of the pat tense of Bid.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
folk n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Miracles is in the public domain. This text is taken from Verses 1889-1896, Project Gutenberg ebook #323; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Rudyard Kipling, The Miracles, in Verses 1889–1896 (1889–1896), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #323, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/kipling-verses/the-miracles.html, id L16812.

Form and metre

The Miracles is 36 lines in 9 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 8 of its 9 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 96%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 17% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB dearA · herB · hearA · herB
  2. 2 ABAB cameA · meB · flameA · meB
  3. 3 ABAB galeA · againB · railA · againB
  4. 4 ABAB tellA · itB · fellA · itB
  5. 5 ABAB nightA · meB · heightA · meB
  6. 6 ABAB strengthA · meB · lengthA · meB
  7. 7 ABAB needsA · meB · steedsA · meB
  8. 8 AAAA seeA · meA · sheA · meA
  9. 9 ABAB goalA · againB · soulA · againB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I sent a message to my dear --8···/˘···
A thousand leagues and more to Her --8·/˘·····
The dumb sea-levels thrilled to hear,8···/˘···
And Lost Atlantis bore to Her.8··˘/˘···
Behind my message hard I came,8···/˘···
And nigh had found a grave for me;8········
But that I launched of steel and flame8········
Did war against the wave for me.8········
Uprose the deep, by gale on gale,8········
To bid me change my mind again --8······˘/
He broke his teeth along my rail,8····˘/··
And, roaring, swung behind again.8·/˘···˘/
I stayed the sun at noon to tell8········
My way across the waste of it;8··˘/····
I read the storm before it fell8········
And made the better haste of it.8···/˘···
Afar, I hailed the land at night --8˘/······
The towers I built had heard of me --8·/······
And, ere my rocket reached its height,8···/˘···
Had flashed my Love the word of me.8········
Earth sold her chosen men of strength8···/˘···
(They lived and strove and died for me)8········
To drive my road a nation's length,8·····/˘·
And toss the miles aside for me.8····˘/··
I snatched their toil to serve my needs --8········
Too slow their fleetest flew for me --8···/˘···
I tired twenty smoking steeds,8·/˘/˘/˘·
And bade them bait a new for me.8········
I sent the lightnings forth to see8···/˘···
Where hour by hour She waited me.8·/·/·/˘·
Among ten million one was She,8···/˘···
And surely all men hated me!8·/˘··/˘·
Dawn ran to meet me at my goal --8········
Ah, day no tongue shall tell again!8······˘/
And little folk of little soul8·/˘··/˘·
Rose up to buy and sell again!8······˘/

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