Merrow Down II

Rudyard Kipling (1865–1936) · 1912

iambic tetrameter · ABAB · 20 lines · from Songs from Books

Of all the Tribe of TegumaiWho cut that figure, none remain,--On Merrow Down the cuckoos cry--The silence and the sun remain.

But as the faithful years returnAnd hearts unwounded sing again,Comes Taffy dancing through the fernTo lead the Surrey spring again.

Her brows are bound with bracken-fronds,And golden elf-locks fly above;Her eyes are bright as diamondsAnd bluer than the sky above.

In mocassins and deer-skin cloak,Unfearing, free and fair she flits,And lights her little damp-wood smokeTo show her Daddy where she flits.

For far--oh, very far behind,So far she cannot call to him,Comes Tegumai alone to findThe daughter that was all to him.

Words in this poem

taffy n.
A kind of candy made of molasses or brown sugar boiled down and poured out in shallow pans. [Written also, in England, toffy.] [Prov. E. taffy toffy.]
daddy n.
Diminutive of Dad.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Merrow Down II is in the public domain. This text is taken from Songs from Books, Project Gutenberg ebook #15529; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Rudyard Kipling, Merrow Down II, in Songs from Books (1912), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #15529, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/kipling-songs-from-books/merrow-down-ii.html, id L20378.

Form and metre

Merrow Down II is 20 lines in 5 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 96%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB tegumaiA · remainB · cryA · remainB
  2. 2 ABAB returnA · againB · fernA · againB
  3. 3 ABAB frondsA · aboveB · diamondsA · aboveB
  4. 4 ABAB cloakA · flitsB · smokeA · flitsB
  5. 5 ABAB behindA · himB · findA · himB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Of all the Tribe of Tegumai8········
Who cut that figure, none remain,--8···/˘·˘/
On Merrow Down the cuckoos cry--8·/˘··/˘·
The silence and the sun remain.8·/˘···˘/
But as the faithful years return8···/˘·˘/
And hearts unwounded sing again,8··˘/˘·˘/
Comes Taffy dancing through the fern8·/˘/˘···
To lead the Surrey spring again.8···/˘·˘/
Her brows are bound with bracken-fronds,8·····/˘·
And golden elf-locks fly above;8·/˘·····
Her eyes are bright as diamonds7·····/˘
And bluer than the sky above.8·/˘·····
In mocassins and deer-skin cloak,8········
Unfearing, free and fair she flits,8········
And lights her little damp-wood smoke8···/˘···
To show her Daddy where she flits.8···/˘···
For far--oh, very far behind,8···/˘···
So far she cannot call to him,8···/˘···
Comes Tegumai alone to find8····˘/··
The daughter that was all to him.8·/˘·····

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