Dave Lilly

Joyce Kilmer (1886–1918) · 1914

iambic tetrameter · AABB · 33 lines · from Trees and Other Poems

There's a brook on the side of Greylock that used to be full of trout,But there's nothing there now but minnows; they say it is all fished out.I fished there many a Summer day some twenty years ago,And I never quit without getting a mess of a dozen or so.

There was a man, Dave Lilly, who lived on the North Adams road,And he spent all his time fishing, while his neighbors reaped and sowed.He was the luckiest fisherman in the Berkshire hills, I think.And when he didn't go fishing he'd sit in the tavern and drink.

Well, Dave is dead and buried and nobody cares very much;They have no use in Greylock for drunkards and loafers and such.But I always liked Dave Lilly, he was pleasant as you could wish;He was shiftless and good-for-nothing, but he certainly could fish.

The other night I was walking up the hill from WilliamstownAnd I came to the brook I mentioned,and I stopped on the bridge and sat down.I looked at the blackened water with its little flecks of whiteAnd I heard it ripple and whisper in the still of the Summer night.

And after I'd been there a minute it seemed to me I could feelThe presence of someone near me, and I heard the hum of a reel.And the water was churned and broken, and something was brought to landBy a twist and flirt of a shadowy rod in a deft and shadowy hand.

I scrambled down to the brookside and hunted all about;There wasn't a sign of a fisherman; there wasn't a sign of a trout.But I heard somebody chuckle behind the hollow oakAnd I got a whiff of tobacco like Lilly used to smoke.

It's fifteen years, they tell me, since anyone fished that brook;And there's nothing in it but minnows that nibble the bait off your hook.But before the sun has risen and after the moon has setI know that it's full of ghostly trout for Lilly's ghost to get.

I guess I'll go to the tavern and get a bottle of ryeAnd leave it down by the hollow oak, where Lilly's ghost went by.I meant to go up on the hillside and try to find his graveAnd put some flowers on it -- but this will be better for Dave.

Words in this poem

nobody n.
No person; no one; not anybody. [No, a. + body.]
deft a.
Apt; fit; dexterous; clever; handy; spruce; neat. [OE. daft, deft, becoming, mild, gentle, stupid (cf. OE. daffe, deffe, fool, coward), AS. dæft (in derivatives only) mild, gentle, fitting, seasonable; akin to d]
brookside n.
The bank of a brook.
somebody n.
A person unknown or uncertain; a person indeterminate; some person.
chuckle v. t.
To call, as a hen her chickens; to cluck. [From lst Chuck.]
whiff n.
A sudden expulsion of air from the mouth; a quick puff or slight gust, as of air or smoke. [OE. weffe vapor, whiff, probably of imitative origin; cf. Dan. vift a puff, gust, W. chwiff a whiff, puff.]
anyone n.
One taken at random rather than by selection; anybody.
ghostly a.
Relating to the soul; not carnal or secular; spiritual; as, a ghostly confessor. [OE. gastlich, gostlich, AS. gastlic. See Ghost.]
ghost n.
The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Dave Lilly is in the public domain. This text is taken from Trees, and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #263; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Joyce Kilmer, Dave Lilly, in Trees and Other Poems (1914), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #263, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/kilmer-trees/dave-lilly.html, id L12914.

Form and metre

Dave Lilly is 33 lines in 8 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is AABB, complete in 7 of its 8 stanzas. 79% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 15.0 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB troutA · outA · agoB · soB
  2. 2 AABB roadA · sowedA · thinkB · drinkB
  3. 3 AABB muchA · suchA · wishB · fishB
  4. 4 A-ABB williamstownA · mentioned · downA · whiteB · nightB
  5. 5 AABB feelA · reelA · landB · handB
  6. 6 AABB aboutA · troutA · oakB · smokeB
  7. 7 AABB brookA · hookA · setB · getB
  8. 8 AABB ryeA · byA · graveB · daveB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
There's a brook on the side of Greylock that used to be full of trout,16················
But there's nothing there now but minnows; they say it is all fished out.16··/˘···/˘·······
I fished there many a Summer day some twenty years ago,14···/·/˘··/˘·˘/
And I never quit without getting a mess of a dozen or so.16··/···/˘····/˘··
There was a man, Dave Lilly, who lived on the North Adams road,15·····/˘·····/˘·
And he spent all his time fishing, while his neighbors reaped and sowed.15······/˘··/˘···
He was the luckiest fisherman in the Berkshire hills, I think.15···/˘/˘···/····
And when he didn't go fishing he'd sit in the tavern and drink.16···/˘·/˘····/˘··
Well, Dave is dead and buried and nobody cares very much;15·····/˘·/···/˘·
They have no use in Greylock for drunkards and loafers and such.15········/˘·/˘··
But I always liked Dave Lilly, he was pleasant as you could wish;16··/···/˘··/˘····
He was shiftless and good-for-nothing, but he certainly could fish.15··/˘···/˘··/˘··
The other night I was walking up the hill from Williamstown15·/˘···/˘····/˘·
And I came to the brook I mentioned,9·······/˘
and I stopped on the bridge and sat down.9·········
I looked at the blackened water with its little flecks of white15····/˘/˘··/˘···
And I heard it ripple and whisper in the still of the Summer night.17····/˘·/˘·····/˘·
And after I'd been there a minute it seemed to me I could feel16·······/˘·······
The presence of someone near me, and I heard the hum of a reel.16·/˘·/···········
And the water was churned and broken, and something was brought to land16··/˘···/˘·/˘····
By a twist and flirt of a shadowy rod in a deft and shadowy hand.17·······/˘·····/˘·
I scrambled down to the brookside and hunted all about;14·/˘···/··/˘···
There wasn't a sign of a fisherman; there wasn't a sign of a trout.18·/˘····/˘··/˘·····
But I heard somebody chuckle behind the hollow oak14···/˘˘/˘···/˘·
And I got a whiff of tobacco like Lilly used to smoke.15······˘/··/˘···
It's fifteen years, they tell me, since anyone fished that brook;14·˘/·····/˘····
And there's nothing in it but minnows that nibble the bait off your hook.17··/˘···/˘·/˘·····
But before the sun has risen and after the moon has set15······/˘·······
I know that it's full of ghostly trout for Lilly's ghost to get.15······/˘··/˘···
I guess I'll go to the tavern and get a bottle of rye15······/˘···/˘··
And leave it down by the hollow oak, where Lilly's ghost went by.15······/˘··/˘···
I meant to go up on the hillside and try to find his grave15·······/·······
And put some flowers on it -- but this will be better for Dave.14···/······/˘··

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