An Elegy

Ben Jonson (c. 1573–1637) · 1616

iambic tetrameter · ABBA · 36 lines · from Discoveries Made Upon Men and Matter and Some Poems

THOUGH beauty be the mark of praise,And yours, of whom I sing, be suchAs not the world can praise too much,Yet is ’t your virtue now I raise.

A virtue, like allay, so goneThroughout your form, as though that move,And draw, and conquer all men’s love,This subjects you to love of one,

Wherein you triumph yet: because’Tis of yourself, and that you useThe noblest freedom, not to chooseAgainst or faith, or honour’s laws.

But who could less expect from you,In whom alone Love lives again?By whom he is restored to men;And kept, and bred, and brought up true?

His falling temples you have reared,The withered garlands ta’en away;His altars kept from the decayThat envy wished, and nature feared;

And on them burns so chaste a flame,With so much loyalty’s expense,As Love, t’ acquit such excellence,Is gone himself into your name.

And you are he: the deityTo whom all lovers are designed,That would their better objects find;Among which faithful troop am I;

Who, as an offering at your shrine,Have sung this hymn, and here entreatOne spark of your diviner heatTo light upon a love of mine;

Which, if it kindle not, but scantAppear, and that to shortest view,Yet give me leave t’ adore in youWhat I, in her, am grieved to want.

Words in this poem

honour n.
Esteem due or paid to worth; high estimation; respect; consideration; reverence; veneration; manifestation of respect or reverence. [OE. honor, honour, onour, onur, OF. honor, onor, honur, onur, honour, onour, F. honneur, fr. L. honor, honos.]
expect v. t.
To wait for; to await. [L. expectatum, to look out for, await, expect; ex + out spectare to look at. See Spectacle.]
entreat v. t.
To treat, or conduct toward; to deal with; to use. [OE. entreten to treat, request, OF. entraiter to treat of; pref. en- (L. in) + traitier to treat. See Treat.]
adore v. t.
To worship with profound reverence; to pay divine honors to; to honor as deity or as divine. [OE. aouren, anouren, adoren, OF. aorer, adorer, F. adorer, fr. L. adorare; ad + orare to speak, pray, os, oris, mouth. In OE. confused with honor, the French pr]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

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Form and metre

An Elegy is 36 lines in 9 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABBA, complete in 6 of its 9 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA praiseA · suchB · muchB · raiseA
  2. 2 -AA- gone · moveA · loveA · one
  3. 3 ABBA becauseA · useB · chooseB · lawsA
  4. 4 ABBA youA · againB · menB · trueA
  5. 5 ABBA rearedA · awayB · decayB · fearedA
  6. 6 ABBA flameA · expenseB · excellenceB · nameA
  7. 7 -AA- deity · designedA · findA · i
  8. 8 ABBA shrineA · entreatB · heatB · mineA
  9. 9 -AA- scant · viewA · youA · want
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
THOUGH beauty be the mark of praise,8·/˘·····
And yours, of whom I sing, be such8········
As not the world can praise too much,8········
Yet is ’t your virtue now I raise.9····/˘···
A virtue, like allay, so gone8·/˘·˘/··
Throughout your form, as though that move,8········
And draw, and conquer all men’s love,8···/˘···
This subjects you to love of one,8·/˘·····
Wherein you triumph yet: because8···/˘···
’Tis of yourself, and that you use8··˘/····
The noblest freedom, not to choose8·/˘/˘···
Against or faith, or honour’s laws.8·····/˘·
But who could less expect from you,8····˘/··
In whom alone Love lives again?8··˘/··˘/
By whom he is restored to men;8····˘/··
And kept, and bred, and brought up true?8········
His falling temples you have reared,8·/˘/˘···
The withered garlands ta’en away;8·/˘/˘·˘/
His altars kept from the decay8·/˘···˘/
That envy wished, and nature feared;8·/˘··/˘·
And on them burns so chaste a flame,8········
With so much loyalty’s expense,8···/˘˘˘/
As Love, t’ acquit such excellence,9···˘/·/˘˘
Is gone himself into your name.8··˘/····
And you are he: the deity8·····/˘˘
To whom all lovers are designed,8···/˘·˘/
That would their better objects find;8···/˘/˘·
Among which faithful troop am I;8···/˘···
Who, as an offering at your shrine,8···/˘···
Have sung this hymn, and here entreat8······˘/
One spark of your diviner heat8····˘/˘·
To light upon a love of mine;8········
Which, if it kindle not, but scant8···/˘···
Appear, and that to shortest view,8˘/···/˘·
Yet give me leave t’ adore in you9·····˘/··
What I, in her, am grieved to want.8········

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