How Christ Mourns over Man the Sinner

Jacopone da Todi (c. 1230–1306), translated by Mrs. Theodore Beck · 1919

iambic tetrameter · 115 lines · from The Lauds

O MAN, I mourn for theeWho still wouldst fly from me,And I to save thee wait.

O Man, for thy soul's new birth,To set thy feet in the Way,I was incarnate on earth,Of Mary, the Virgin May:—And yet thou wilt not obey,Unthankful art thou to Me,Uncourteous and ingrate.

If I were a cruel lord,An evil master to thee,Well might'st thou then affordOut of My hands to flee;Foolish indeed must thou be,For on the good I do theeThou wilt not meditate.

All creatures my Hand hath made,To serve thee in sequence true;And all in order arrayed,Each one his duty to do;Pleasures before thee they strew,Yet Me, the Maker of all,Thou wilt not contemplate.

As a man may threaten a son,Beloved, but to error beguiled,With the Courts, where justice is done,To heal his folly so wild ;So have I threatened thee, child,With hell, and have promised thee glory,If thou wilt turn to Me straight.

Son, cease thy restless flight,For long was My love's pursuit ;I would give thee a world of light,I would save thee from error's fruit:From the judgment absolute,That thy soul could never answer,I would keep thee inviolate.

Then flee no longer in fear;O brother of Mine, so sweet!My Father summoned me here,To follow thy flying feet.Return, for love I entreat!For all His court awaits theeIn joys that are uncreate.

I was sent from My Father's throne,To summon thee to His court ;Is thy heart as hard as a stone?Untouched by love of such sort?O brother, yield up thy fort!Cast off thine ingratitude,That hath crushed Me with its weight.

My pilgrimage on earthFor thee was cruel and hard:Dearly I bought thy worth ;See My hands that are scarred!Keep not back My reward,Brother, for great was the priceWhereby I enriched thy state.

Look on My wounded side,Pierced and wounded for thee ;O look on the spear-thrust wide,Deep in the heart of Me!For there thy name thou shalt see,Writ on My heart for ever,By Love Insatiate.

Yet art thou snared by the flesh,Parted from Me, thy Home;Twisted in Pleasure's mesh,Careless of wrath to come:Son, thy footsteps that roam,Parted from Me, will lead theeIn ways that are desolate.

Sweetly the world hath wrought,With seeming good to entice;She tells thee not she is nought,And takes of her lovers a price:I set thee in Paradise!And if thou wilt dwell beside MeI crown thee in royal state.

The demons who lurk and spy,To make thee fall into sin,Would hunt thee from heaven on high,Spoil thee, and wound thee within;Nor would they have thee winThat purer life thou hast lost:They trick thee early and late!

Thy foes are close convened,Poor wretch, thy soul is at stake,The World, the Flesh, and the Fiend,And no defence canst thou make:Those forces thou canst not break,Save with Mine arms and equipment,Thy foes are so desperate!

If thou a master couldst findBetter and kinder than I,Excuse were thine, of a kind,And lighter my grief might lie:But thou hast left me, to hieDown to hell with a traitor,To torments inveterate.

Thou hast fled from my gentle handTo the hand of vengeance and death;How dolorous wilt thou stand,When thy sentence hasteneth!Then shalt thou feel, in a breath,All thou hast wrought of evil,And never canst revocate.

Ah! to condemn am I loath!So dearly I love thee still;Yet must I grieve at thy growthDeeper and deeper in ill:—The blow must fall when it will;Alas! for I cannot save theeThy heart is so obdurate.

Words in this poem 19
incarnate a.
Not in the flesh; spiritual. [Pref. in- not + carnate.]
ingrate n.
An ungrateful person.
contemplate v. t.
To look at on all sides or in all its bearings; to view or consider with continued attention; to regard with deliberate care; to meditate on; to study. [L. contemplatus, p.p. of contemplari to contemplate; con- + templum a space for observation marked out by the augur. See Temple.]
inviolate a.
Not violated; uninjured; unhurt; unbroken. [L. inviolatus. See In- not, and Violate.]
entreat v. t.
To treat, or conduct toward; to deal with; to use. [OE. entreten to treat, request, OF. entraiter to treat of; pref. en- (L. in) + traitier to treat. See Treat.]
uncreate v. t.
To deprive of existence; to annihilate. [1st pref. un- + create.]
ingratitude n.
Want of gratitude; insensibility to, forgetfulness of, or ill return for, kindness or favors received; unthankfulness; ungratefulness. [F. ingratitude, L. ingratitudo. See Ingrate.]
pilgrimage n.
The journey of a pilgrim; a long journey; especially, a journey to a shrine or other sacred place. Fig., the journey of human life. [OE. pilgrimage, pelgrinage; cf. F. pèlerinage.]
shalt
2d per. sing. of Shall.
insatiate a.
Insatiable; as, insatiate thirst. [L. insatiatus.]
mesh n.
The opening or space inclosed by the threads of a net between knot and knot, or the threads inclosing such a space; network; a net. [AS. masc, max, m; akin to D. maas, masche, OHG. masca, Icel. möskvi; cf. Lith. mazgas a knot, megsti to weave nets, to knot.]
dwell v. i.
To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
defence n.
The act of defending, or the state of being defended; protection, as from violence or danger. [F. défense, OF. defense, fem., defens, masc., fr. L. defensa (cf. Fence.]
desperate a.
Without hope; given to despair; hopeless. [L. desperatus, p. p. of desperare. See Despair, and cf. Desperado.]
inveterate a.
Old; long-established. [L. inveteratus, p. p. of inveterare to render old; pref. in- in + vetus, veteris, old. See Veteran.]
dolorous a.
Full of grief; sad; sorrowful; doleful; dismal; as, a dolorous object; dolorous discourses. [L. dolorosus, from dolor: cf. F. douloureux. See Dolor.]
revocate v. t.
To recall; to call back. [L. revocatus, p. p. of revocare. See Revoke.]
loath a.
Hateful; odious; disliked. [OE. looth, loth, AS. la hostile, odious; akin to OS. l, G. leid, Icel. lei, Sw. led, G. leiden to suffer, OHG. lidan to suffer, go, cf. AS. li to go, Goth. leip]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

How Christ Mourns over Man the Sinner is in the public domain. This text is taken from Jacopone da Todi, Poet and Mystic, 1228-1306: A Spiritual Biography, with a Selection from the Spiritual Songs, Internet Archive, the Mrs. Theodore Beck translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

How Christ Mourns over Man the Sinner is 115 lines in 17 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA- theeA · meA · wait
  2. 2 ABABB-- birthA · wayB · earthA · mayB · obeyB · me · ingrate
  3. 3 ABABBB- lordA · theeB · affordA · fleeB · beB · theeB · meditate
  4. 4 ABABB-- madeA · trueB · arrayedA · doB · strewB · all · contemplate
  5. 5 ABABB-- sonA · beguiledB · doneA · wildB · childB · glory · straight
  6. 6 ABABB-A flightA · pursuitB · lightA · fruitB · absoluteB · answer · inviolateA
  7. 7 ABABB-B fearA · sweetB · hereA · feetB · entreatB · thee · uncreateB
  8. 8 ABABB-- throneA · courtB · stoneA · sortB · fortB · ingratitude · weight
  9. 9 ABAB--- earthA · hardB · worthA · scarredB · reward · price · state
  10. 10 ABABB-- sideA · theeB · wideA · meB · seeB · ever · insatiate
  11. 11 ABABB-- fleshA · homeB · meshA · comeB · roamB · thee · desolate
  12. 12 ABABB-- wroughtA · enticeB · noughtA · priceB · paradiseB · me · state
  13. 13 ABABB-- spyA · sinB · highA · withinB · winB · lost · late
  14. 14 ABABB-- convenedA · stakeB · fiendA · makeB · breakB · equipment · desperate
  15. 15 ABAB--- findA · iB · kindA · lieB · hie · traitor · inveterate
  16. 16 ABABB-- handA · deathB · standA · hastenethB · breathB · evil · revocate
  17. 17 ABABB-- loathA · stillB · growthA · illB · willB · thee · obdurate
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
O MAN, I mourn for thee6······
Who still wouldst fly from me,6······
And I to save thee wait.6······
O Man, for thy soul's new birth,7·······
To set thy feet in the Way,7·······
I was incarnate on earth,7··˘/˘··
Of Mary, the Virgin May:—7·/˘·/˘·
And yet thou wilt not obey,7·····˘/
Unthankful art thou to Me,7·······
Uncourteous and ingrate.6····/˘
If I were a cruel lord,7····/˘·
An evil master to thee,7·/˘/˘··
Well might'st thou then afford6····˘/
Out of My hands to flee;6······
Foolish indeed must thou be,7/˘˘/···
For on the good I do thee7·······
Thou wilt not meditate.6···/˘·
All creatures my Hand hath made,7·/˘····
To serve thee in sequence true;7····/˘·
And all in order arrayed,7···/˘˘/
Each one his duty to do;7···/˘··
Pleasures before thee they strew,7/˘·····
Yet Me, the Maker of all,7···/˘··
Thou wilt not contemplate.6···/˘·
As a man may threaten a son,8····/˘··
Beloved, but to error beguiled,8˘/··/˘˘/
With the Courts, where justice is done,8····/˘··
To heal his folly so wild ;7···/˘··
So have I threatened thee, child,7···/˘··
With hell, and have promised thee glory,9····/˘·/˘
If thou wilt turn to Me straight.7·······
Son, cease thy restless flight,6···/˘·
For long was My love's pursuit ;7·····˘/
I would give thee a world of light,8········
I would save thee from error's fruit:8·····/˘·
From the judgment absolute,7··/˘/˘·
That thy soul could never answer,8····/˘/˘
I would keep thee inviolate.8····˘/˘˘
Then flee no longer in fear;7···/˘··
O brother of Mine, so sweet!7·/˘····
My Father summoned me here,7·/˘/˘··
To follow thy flying feet.7·/˘·/˘·
Return, for love I entreat!7˘/···˘/
For all His court awaits thee7····˘/·
In joys that are uncreate.6······
I was sent from My Father's throne,8·····/˘·
To summon thee to His court ;7·/˘····
Is thy heart as hard as a stone?8········
Untouched by love of such sort?7˘/·····
O brother, yield up thy fort!7·/˘····
Cast off thine ingratitude,7···˘/˘˘
That hath crushed Me with its weight.7·······
My pilgrimage on earth6·/˘˘··
For thee was cruel and hard:7···/˘··
Dearly I bought thy worth ;6/˘····
See My hands that are scarred!7······˘
Keep not back My reward,6····˘/
Brother, for great was the price7/˘·····
Whereby I enriched thy state.7···˘/··
Look on My wounded side,6···/˘·
Pierced and wounded for thee ;7·˘·/˘··
O look on the spear-thrust wide,7·······
Deep in the heart of Me!6······
For there thy name thou shalt see,7·······
Writ on My heart for ever,7·····/˘
By Love Insatiate.6··˘/˘˘
Yet art thou snared by the flesh,7·······
Parted from Me, thy Home;6/˘····
Twisted in Pleasure's mesh,6/˘·/˘·
Careless of wrath to come:6/˘····
Son, thy footsteps that roam,6··/···
Parted from Me, will lead thee7/˘·····
In ways that are desolate.7····/˘·
Sweetly the world hath wrought,6/˘····
With seeming good to entice;7·/˘··˘/
She tells thee not she is nought,7·······
And takes of her lovers a price:8····/˘··
I set thee in Paradise!7····/˘·
And if thou wilt dwell beside Me8·····˘/·
I crown thee in royal state.7····/˘·
The demons who lurk and spy,7·/˘····
To make thee fall into sin,7·······
Would hunt thee from heaven on high,7····/··
Spoil thee, and wound thee within;7·······
Nor would they have thee win6······
That purer life thou hast lost:7·/˘····
They trick thee early and late!7···/˘··
Thy foes are close convened,7····˘/˘
Poor wretch, thy soul is at stake,7·······
The World, the Flesh, and the Fiend,7·······
And no defence canst thou make:7··˘/···
Those forces thou canst not break,7·/˘····
Save with Mine arms and equipment,8·····˘/˘
Thy foes are so desperate!6····/˘
If thou a master couldst find7···/˘··
Better and kinder than I,7/˘·/˘··
Excuse were thine, of a kind,7˘/·····
And lighter my grief might lie:7·/˘····
But thou hast left me, to hie7·······
Down to hell with a traitor,7·····/˘
To torments inveterate.7·/·˘/˘˘
Thou hast fled from my gentle hand8·····/˘·
To the hand of vengeance and death;8····/˘··
How dolorous wilt thou stand,7·/˘˘···
When thy sentence hasteneth!7··/˘/˘˘
Then shalt thou feel, in a breath,7·······
All thou hast wrought of evil,7·····/˘
And never canst revocate.7·/˘·/˘˘
Ah! to condemn am I loath!7··˘/···
So dearly I love thee still;7·/˘····
Yet must I grieve at thy growth7·······
Deeper and deeper in ill:—7/˘·/˘··
The blow must fall when it will;7·······
Alas! for I cannot save thee8˘/··˘/··
Thy heart is so obdurate.7····/˘˘

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