The Kelpie

Violet Jacob (1863–1946) · 1921

iambic tetrameter · ABAAB · 41 lines · from Bonnie Joann, and Other Poems

I’m feared o’ the road ayont the glen,I’m sweir to pass the placeWhaur the water’s rinnin’, for a’ fowk kenThere’s a kelpie sits at the fit o’ the den,And there’s them that’s seen his face.

But whiles he watches an’ whiles he hidesAnd whiles, gin na wind manes,Ye can hear him roarin’ frae whaur he bidesAn’ the soond o’ him splashin’ agin the sidesO’ the rocks an’ the muckle stanes.

When the mune gaes doon at the arn-tree’s backIn a wee, wee weary licht,My bed-claes up to my lugs I tak’,For I mind the swirl o’ the water blackAn’ the cry i’ the fearsome nicht.

And lang an’ fell is yon road to meAs I come frae the schule;I duarna think what I’m like to seeWhen dark fa’s airly on buss an’ treeAt Martinmas and Yule.

Aside the crusie my mither reads,“My bairn,” says she, “ye’ve heardThe Lord is mindfu’ o’ a’ oor needsAn’ His shield an’ buckler’s abune the heidsO’ them that keeps His word.”

But I’m a laddie that’s no that douce,An’ fechtin’s a bonnie game;The dominie’s pawmies are little use,An’ mony’s the Sawbath I’m rinnin’ looseWhen a’body thinks I’m hame!

Dod, noo we’re nearin’ the shorter days,It’s cannie I’ll hae to gang,An’ keep frae fechtin’ an’ sic-like ways,And no be tearin’ my Sawbath claesAfore that the nichts grow lang.

Richt guid an’ couthie I’ll need to be,(But it’s leein’ to say I’m glad),I ken there’s troubles that fowk maun dree,An’ the kelpie’s no like to shift for me,Sae, gin thae warlocks are fear’d o’ Thee,Lord, mak’ me a better lad!

Words in this poem

kelpie n.
An imaginary spirit of the waters, horselike in form, vulgarly believed to warn, by preternatural noises and lights, those who are to be drowned. Jamieson. [Cf. Gael. cailpeach, calpach, colpach, a heifer, steer, colt, colpa a cow or horse.]
whiles conj.
During the time that; while. Chaucer. Fuller.
swirl v. t.
To whirl, or cause to whirl, as in an eddy. [Akin to Norw. svirla to whirl, freq. of sverra to whirl, Dan. svirre, G. schwirren to whiz, to buzz. *177. See Swarm, n.]
fearsome a.
Frightful; causing fear
buss n.
A kiss; a rude or playful kiss; a smack. [OE. basse, fr. L. basium; cf. G. bus (Luther), Prov. G. busserl, dim. of bus kiss, bussen to kiss, Sw. puss kiss, pussa to kiss, W. & Gael. bus lip, mouth.]
yule n.
Christmas or Christmastide; the feast of the Nativity of our Savior. [OE. yol, ýol, AS. geól; akin to geóla December or January, Icel. jol Yule, Ylir the name of a winter month, Sw. jul Christmas, Dan. juul, Goth. jiuleis November]
needs adv.
Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]
laddie n.
A lad; a male sweetheart.
douce a.
Sweet; pleasant. [F. doux, masc., douce, fem., sweet, fr. L. duleis sweet.]
afore prep.
Before (in all its senses).
dree v. i.
To be able to do or endure.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Kelpie is in the public domain. This text is taken from Bonnie Joann, and other poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #69484; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Violet Jacob, The Kelpie, in Bonnie Joann, and Other Poems (1921), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #69484, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/jacob-bonnie-joann/the-kelpie.html, id L21941.

Form and metre

The Kelpie is 41 lines in 8 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABAAB, complete in 5 of its 8 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 79%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAAB glenA · placeB · kenA · denA · faceB
  2. 2 A-AA- hidesA · manes · bidesA · sidesA · stanes
  3. 3 ABAAB backA · lichtB · takA · blackA · nichtB
  4. 4 ABAAB meA · schuleB · seeA · treeA · yuleB
  5. 5 ABA-B readsA · heardB · needsA · heids · wordB
  6. 6 ABAAB douceA · gameB · useA · looseA · hameB
  7. 7 ABAAB daysA · gangB · waysA · claesA · langB
  8. 8 ABAAAB beA · gladB · dreeA · meA · theeA · ladB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I’m feared o’ the road ayont the glen,9·····˘/··
I’m sweir to pass the place6······
Whaur the water’s rinnin’, for a’ fowk ken10··/˘······
There’s a kelpie sits at the fit o’ the den,11···········
And there’s them that’s seen his face.7·······
But whiles he watches an’ whiles he hides9···/˘····
And whiles, gin na wind manes,6······
Ye can hear him roarin’ frae whaur he bides10··········
An’ the soond o’ him splashin’ agin the sides11·······˘/··
O’ the rocks an’ the muckle stanes.8·····/˘·
When the mune gaes doon at the arn-tree’s back10··········
In a wee, wee weary licht,7····/˘·
My bed-claes up to my lugs I tak’,9·········
For I mind the swirl o’ the water black10·······/˘·
An’ the cry i’ the fearsome nicht.8·····/˘·
And lang an’ fell is yon road to me9·········
As I come frae the schule;7·······
I duarna think what I’m like to see9·········
When dark fa’s airly on buss an’ tree9·········
At Martinmas and Yule.6·/˘˘··
Aside the crusie my mither reads,9˘/·······
“My bairn,” says she, “ye’ve heard6······
The Lord is mindfu’ o’ a’ oor needs9·········
An’ His shield an’ buckler’s abune the heids10····/˘····
O’ them that keeps His word.”6······
But I’m a laddie that’s no that douce,9···/˘····
An’ fechtin’s a bonnie game;7····/˘·
The dominie’s pawmies are little use,8·····/˘·
An’ mony’s the Sawbath I’m rinnin’ loose10·/˘·······
When a’body thinks I’m hame!7·······
Dod, noo we’re nearin’ the shorter days,9······/˘·
It’s cannie I’ll hae to gang,7·······
An’ keep frae fechtin’ an’ sic-like ways,9·········
And no be tearin’ my Sawbath claes9·········
Afore that the nichts grow lang.7˘/·····
Richt guid an’ couthie I’ll need to be,9·········
(But it’s leein’ to say I’m glad),7·······
I ken there’s troubles that fowk maun dree,9···/˘····
An’ the kelpie’s no like to shift for me,9·········
Sae, gin thae warlocks are fear’d o’ Thee,9·········
Lord, mak’ me a better lad!7····/˘·

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