28. Minamoto no Mune-yuki Ason

Various (about 1235), translated by William N. Porter · 1909

iambic trimeter · xaxaa · 5 lines · from A Hundred Verses from Old Japan

The mountain village solitudeIn winter time I dread;It seems as if, when friends are gone,And trees their leaves have shed,All men and plants are dead.

About this text

28. Minamoto no Mune-yuki Ason is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Hundred Verses from Old Japan (the Hyaku-nin-isshiu), Internet Archive, the William N. Porter translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, 28. Minamoto no Mune-yuki Ason, in A Hundred Verses from Old Japan (1909), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hyakunin-isshu/28.html, id L28513.

Form and metre

28. Minamoto no Mune-yuki Ason is 5 lines in a single stanza. It rhymes xaxaa. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic trimeter.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 xaxaa solitudex · dreada · gonex · sheda · deada
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The mountain village solitude8·/˘/˘/˘·
In winter time I dread;6·/˘···
It seems as if, when friends are gone,8········
And trees their leaves have shed,6······
All men and plants are dead.6······

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