Deserted Gipsy's Song: Hillside Camp

Laurence Hope (1865–1904) · 1901

trochaic tetrameter · ABAB · 28 lines · from India's Love Lyrics

She is glad to receive your turquoise ring,Dear and dark-eyed Lover of mine!I, to have given you everything:Beauty maddens the soul like Wine.

"She is proud to have held aloof her charms,Slender, dark-eyed Lover of mine!But I, of the night you lay in my arms:Beauty maddens the sense like Wine!

"She triumphs to think that your heart is won,Stately, dark-eyed Lover of mine!I had not a thought of myself, not one:Beauty maddens the brain like Wine!

"She will speak you softly, while skies are blue,Dear, deluded Lover of mine!I would lose both body and soul for you:Beauty maddens the brain like Wine!

"While the ways are fair she will love you well,Dear, disdainful Lover of mine!But I would have followed you down to Hell:Beauty maddens the soul like Wine!

"Though you lay at her feet the days to be,Now no longer Lover of mine!You can give her naught that you gave not me:Beauty maddened my soul like Wine!

"When the years have shown what is false or true:Beauty maddens the sight like Wine!You will understand how I cared for you,First and only Lover of mine!"

About this text

Deserted Gipsy's Song: Hillside Camp is in the public domain. This text is taken from India's Love Lyrics, Project Gutenberg ebook #8197; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Laurence Hope, Deserted Gipsy's Song: Hillside Camp, in India's Love Lyrics (1901), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8197, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hope-india/deserted-gipsy-s-song-hillside-camp.html, id L22598.

Form and metre

Deserted Gipsy's Song: Hillside Camp is 28 lines in 7 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 79%).

See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB ringA · mineB · everythingA · wineB
  2. 2 ABAB charmsA · mineB · armsA · wineB
  3. 3 ABAB wonA · mineB · oneA · wineB
  4. 4 ABAB blueA · mineB · youA · wineB
  5. 5 ABAB wellA · mineB · hellA · wineB
  6. 6 ABAB beA · mineB · meA · wineB
  7. 7 ABAB trueA · wineB · youA · mineB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
She is glad to receive your turquoise ring,10····˘/·/˘·
Dear and dark-eyed Lover of mine!8····/˘··
I, to have given you everything:8···/·/˘·
Beauty maddens the soul like Wine.8/˘/˘····
"She is proud to have held aloof her charms,10······˘/··
Slender, dark-eyed Lover of mine!8/˘··/˘··
But I, of the night you lay in my arms:10··········
Beauty maddens the sense like Wine!8/˘/˘····
"She triumphs to think that your heart is won,10·/˘·······
Stately, dark-eyed Lover of mine!8/˘··/˘··
I had not a thought of myself, not one:10·······/··
Beauty maddens the brain like Wine!8/˘/˘····
"She will speak you softly, while skies are blue,10····/˘····
Dear, deluded Lover of mine!8·˘/˘/˘··
I would lose both body and soul for you:10····/˘····
Beauty maddens the brain like Wine!8/˘/˘····
"While the ways are fair she will love you well,10··········
Dear, disdainful Lover of mine!8·˘/˘/˘··
But I would have followed you down to Hell:10····/˘····
Beauty maddens the soul like Wine!8/˘/˘····
"Though you lay at her feet the days to be,10··········
Now no longer Lover of mine!8··/˘/˘··
You can give her naught that you gave not me:10··········
Beauty maddened my soul like Wine!8/˘/˘····
"When the years have shown what is false or true:10··········
Beauty maddens the sight like Wine!8/˘/˘····
You will understand how I cared for you,10···˘/·····
First and only Lover of mine!"8··/˘/˘··

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