Rights
WHAT am I but the creature Thou hast made?What have I save the blessings Thou hast lent?What hope I but thy mercy and thy love?Who but myself shall cloud my soul with fear?Whose hand protect me from myself but thine?I claim the rights of weakness, I, the babe,Call on my sire to shield me from the illsThat still beset my path, not trying meWith snares beyond my wisdom or my strength,He knowing I shall use them to my harm,And find a tenfold misery in the senseThat in my childlike folly I have sprungThe trap upon myself as vermin use,Drawn by the cunning bait to certain doom.Who wrought the wondrous charm that leads us onTo sweet perdition, but the selfsame powerThat set the fearful engine to destroyHis wretched offspring (as the Rabbis tell),And hid its yawning jaws and treacherous springsIn such a show of innocent sweet flowersIt lured the sinless angels and they fell?Ah! He who prayed the prayer of all mankindSummed in those few brief words the mightiest pleaFor erring souls before the courts of heaven,--Save us from being tempted,--lest we fall!
If we are only as the potter's clayMade to be fashioned as the artist wills,And broken into shards if we offendThe eye of Him who made us, it is well;Such love as the insensate lump of clayThat spins upon the swift-revolving wheelBears to the hand that shapes its growing form,--Such love, no more, will be our hearts' returnTo the great Master-workman for his care,--Or would be, save that this, our breathing clay,Is intertwined with fine innumerous threadsThat make it conscious in its framer's hand;And this He must remember who has filledThese vessels with the deadly draught of life,--Life, that means death to all it claims. Our loveMust kindle in the ray that streams from heaven,A faint reflection of the light divine;The sun must warm the earth before the roseCan show her inmost heart-leaves to the sun.
He yields some fraction of the Maker's rightWho gives the quivering nerve its sense of pain;Is there not something in the pleading eyeOf the poor brute that suffers, which arraignsThe law that bids it suffer? Has it notA claim for some remembrance in the bookThat fills its pages with the idle wordsSpoken of men? Or is it only clay,Bleeding and aching in the potter's hand,Yet all his own to treat it as He willAnd when He will to cast it at his feet,Shattered, dishonored, lost forevermore?My dog loves me, but could he look beyondHis earthly master, would his love extendTo Him who--Hush! I will not doubt that HeIs better than our fears, and will not wrongThe least, the meanest of created things!
He would not trust me with the smallest orbThat circles through the sky; He would not giveA meteor to my guidance; would not leaveThe coloring of a cloudlet to my hand;He locks my beating heart beneath its barsAnd keeps the key himself; He measures outThe draughts of vital breath that warm my blood,Winds up the springs of instinct which uncoil,Each in its season; ties me to my home,My race, my time, my nation, and my creedSo closely that if I but slip my wristOut of the band that cuts it to the bone,Men say, "He hath a devil;" He has lentAll that I hold in trust, as unto oneBy reason of his weakness and his yearsNot fit to hold the smallest shred in feeOf those most common things he calls his own,--And yet--my Rabbi tells me--He has leftThe care of that to which a million worldsFilled with unconscious life were less than naught,Has left that mighty universe, the Soul,To the weak guidance of our baby hands,Let the foul fiends have access at their will,Taking the shape of angels, to our hearts,--Our hearts already poisoned through and throughWith the fierce virus of ancestral sin;Turned us adrift with our immortal charge,To wreck ourselves in gulfs of endless woe.
If what my Rabbi tells me is the truthWhy did the choir of angels sing for joy?Heaven must be compassed in a narrow space,And offer more than room enough for allThat pass its portals; but the under-world,The godless realm, the place where demons forgeTheir fiery darts and adamantine chains,Must swarm with ghosts that for a little whileHad worn the garb of flesh, and being heirsOf all the dulness of their stolid sires,And all the erring instincts of their tribe,Nature's own teaching, rudiments of "sin,"Fell headlong in the snare that could not failTo trap the wretched creatures shaped of clayAnd cursed with sense enough to lose their souls!
Brother, thy heart is troubled at my word;Sister, I see the cloud is on thy brow.He will not blame me, He who sends not peace,But sends a sword, and bids us strike amainAt Error's gilded crest, where in the vanOf earth's great army, mingling with the bestAnd bravest of its leaders, shouting loudThe battle-cries that yesterday have ledThe host of Truth to victory, but to-dayAre watchwords of the laggard and the slave,He leads his dazzled cohorts. God has madeThis world a strife of atoms and of spheres;With every breath I sigh myself awayAnd take my tribute from the wandering windTo fan the flame of life's consuming fire;So, while my thought has life, it needs must burn,And, burning, set the stubble-fields ablaze,Where all the harvest long ago was reapedAnd safely garnered in the ancient barns.But still the gleaners, groping for their food,Go blindly feeling through the close-shorn straw,While the young reapers flash, their glittering steelWhere later suns have ripened nobler grain!
Words in this poem 29
- hast
- , 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- babe n.
- An infant; a young child of either sex; a baby. [Cf. Ir. bab, baban, W. baban, maban.]
- sire n.
- A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
- childlike a.
- Resembling a child, or that which belongs to children; becoming a child; meek; submissive; dutiful.
- vermin n.
- An animal, in general. [OE. vermine, F. vermine, from L. vermis a worm; cf. LL. vermen a worm, L. verminosus full of worms. See Vermicular, Worm.]
- wondrous adv.
- In a wonderful or surprising manner or degree; wonderfully. [OE. wonders, adv. (later also adj.). See Wonder, n., and cf. -wards.]
- perdition n.
- Entire loss; utter destruction; ruin; esp., the utter loss of the soul, or of final happiness in a future state; future misery or eternal death. [F., fr. L. perditio, fr. perdere, perditum, to ruin, to lose; per (cf. Skr. para away) + -dere (only in comp.) to put; akin to Gr. do. See Do.]
- selfsame a.
- Precisely the same; the very same; identical. [Self, a. + same.]
- sinless a.
- Free from sin. Piers Plowman.
- artist n.
- One who practices some mechanic art or craft; an artisan. [F. artiste, LL. artista, fr. L. ars. See Art, n., and cf. Artiste.]
- insensate a.
- Wanting sensibility; destitute of sense; stupid; foolish. [L. insensatus. See In- not, and Sensate.]
- inmost a.
- Deepest within; farthest from the surface or external part; innermost. [OE. innemest, AS. innemest, a double superlative form fr. inne within, fr. in in. The modern form is due to confusion with most. See In, and cf. Aftermost, Fore]
- aching a.
- That aches; continuously painful. See Ache.
- cloudlet n.
- A little cloud. R. Browning.
- uncoil v. t.
- To unwind or open, as a coil of rope. Derham. [1st pref. un- + coil.]
- rabbi n.
- Master; lord; teacher; -- a Jewish title of respect or honor for a teacher or doctor of the law.
- adrift adv.
- Floating at random; in a drifting condition; at the mercy of wind and waves. Also fig. [Pref. a- (for on) + drift.]
- compassed a.
- Rounded; arched.
- godless a.
- Having, or acknowledging, no God; without reverence for God; impious; wicked.
- garb n.
- External appearance, as expressive of the feelings or character; looks; fashion or manner, as of speech. [OF. garbe looks, countenance, grace, ornament, fr. OHG. garawi, garwi, ornament, dress. akin to E. gear. See Gear, n.]
- stolid a.
- Hopelessly insensible or stupid; not easily aroused or excited; dull; impassive; foolish. [L. stolidus.]
- cursed a.
- Deserving a curse; execrable; hateful; detestable; abominable.
- amain adv.
- With might; with full force; vigorously; violently; exceedingly. [Pref. a- + main. See 2d Main, n.]
- laggard a.
- Slow; sluggish; backward. [Lag + -ard.]
- strife n.
- The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]
- needs adv.
- Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]
- ablaze adv.
- On fire; in a blaze, gleaming. Milman. [Pref. a- + blaze.]
- blindly adv.
- Without sight, discernment, or understanding; without thought, investigation, knowledge, or purpose of one's own.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
Rights is 127 lines in 6 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 -------A---------B--B-A-- made · lent · love · fear · thine · babe · ills · meA · strength · harm · sense · sprung · use · doom · on · power · destroy · tellB · springs · flowers · fellB · mankind · pleaA · heaven · fall
- 2 A---A----A-----BB-B clayA · wills · offend · well · clayA · wheel · form · return · care · clayA · threads · hand · filled · life · love · heavenB · divineB · rose · sunB
- 4 -----------A----A----------- orb · give · leave · hand · bars · out · blood · uncoil · home · creed · wrist · boneA · lent · one · years · fee · ownA · left · worlds · naught · soul · hands · will · hearts · through · sin · charge · woe
- 6 ---A----B---B---------A word · brow · peace · amainA · van · best · loud · led · dayB · slave · made · spheres · awayB · wind · fire · burn · ablaze · reaped · barns · food · straw · steel · grainA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| WHAT am I but the creature Thou hast made? | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| What have I save the blessings Thou hast lent? | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| What hope I but thy mercy and thy love? | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Who but myself shall cloud my soul with fear? | 10 | ···/······ |
| Whose hand protect me from myself but thine? | 10 | ··˘/···/·· |
| I claim the rights of weakness, I, the babe, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Call on my sire to shield me from the ills | 10 | ···/······ |
| That still beset my path, not trying me | 10 | ··˘/···/˘· |
| With snares beyond my wisdom or my strength, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| He knowing I shall use them to my harm, | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| And find a tenfold misery in the sense | 10 | ···/·/˘··· |
| That in my childlike folly I have sprung | 10 | ···/·/˘··· |
| The trap upon myself as vermin use, | 10 | ·····/·/˘· |
| Drawn by the cunning bait to certain doom. | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Who wrought the wondrous charm that leads us on | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| To sweet perdition, but the selfsame power | 11 | ··˘/˘··/˘/˘ |
| That set the fearful engine to destroy | 10 | ···/˘/˘·˘/ |
| His wretched offspring (as the Rabbis tell), | 10 | ·/˘/···/·· |
| And hid its yawning jaws and treacherous springs | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| In such a show of innocent sweet flowers | 11 | ·····/˘˘·/˘ |
| It lured the sinless angels and they fell? | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Ah! He who prayed the prayer of all mankind | 10 | ········// |
| Summed in those few brief words the mightiest plea | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| For erring souls before the courts of heaven,-- | 11 | ·/˘······/˘ |
| Save us from being tempted,--lest we fall! | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| If we are only as the potter's clay | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Made to be fashioned as the artist wills, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| And broken into shards if we offend | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| The eye of Him who made us, it is well; | 10 | ·········· |
| Such love as the insensate lump of clay | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| That spins upon the swift-revolving wheel | 10 | ······˘/˘· |
| Bears to the hand that shapes its growing form,-- | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Such love, no more, will be our hearts' return | 10 | ······/·˘/ |
| To the great Master-workman for his care,-- | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Or would be, save that this, our breathing clay, | 10 | ······//˘· |
| Is intertwined with fine innumerous threads | 10 | ·˘/··˘/˘˘· |
| That make it conscious in its framer's hand; | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| And this He must remember who has filled | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| These vessels with the deadly draught of life,-- | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| Life, that means death to all it claims. Our love | 10 | ········/· |
| Must kindle in the ray that streams from heaven, | 11 | ·/˘······/˘ |
| A faint reflection of the light divine; | 10 | ··˘/˘···˘/ |
| The sun must warm the earth before the rose | 10 | ·········· |
| Can show her inmost heart-leaves to the sun. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| He yields some fraction of the Maker's right | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Who gives the quivering nerve its sense of pain; | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Is there not something in the pleading eye | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Of the poor brute that suffers, which arraigns | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| The law that bids it suffer? Has it not | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| A claim for some remembrance in the book | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| That fills its pages with the idle words | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Spoken of men? Or is it only clay, | 10 | /˘·····/˘· |
| Bleeding and aching in the potter's hand, | 10 | /˘·/˘··/˘· |
| Yet all his own to treat it as He will | 10 | ·········· |
| And when He will to cast it at his feet, | 10 | ·········· |
| Shattered, dishonored, lost forevermore? | 10 | /˘˘/˘····· |
| My dog loves me, but could he look beyond | 10 | ·········· |
| His earthly master, would his love extend | 10 | ·/˘/˘···˘/ |
| To Him who--Hush! I will not doubt that He | 10 | ·········· |
| Is better than our fears, and will not wrong | 10 | ·/˘·/····· |
| The least, the meanest of created things! | 10 | ···/˘·˘/˘· |
| He would not trust me with the smallest orb | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| That circles through the sky; He would not give | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| A meteor to my guidance; would not leave | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| The coloring of a cloudlet to my hand; | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| He locks my beating heart beneath its bars | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| And keeps the key himself; He measures out | 10 | ····˘/·/˘· |
| The draughts of vital breath that warm my blood, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Winds up the springs of instinct which uncoil, | 10 | ·····/˘··/ |
| Each in its season; ties me to my home, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| My race, my time, my nation, and my creed | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| So closely that if I but slip my wrist | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Out of the band that cuts it to the bone, | 10 | ·········· |
| Men say, "He hath a devil;" He has lent | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| All that I hold in trust, as unto one | 10 | ·········· |
| By reason of his weakness and his years | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| Not fit to hold the smallest shred in fee | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Of those most common things he calls his own,-- | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| And yet--my Rabbi tells me--He has left | 10 | ···/······ |
| The care of that to which a million worlds | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Filled with unconscious life were less than naught, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Has left that mighty universe, the Soul, | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| To the weak guidance of our baby hands, | 10 | ···/˘·//˘· |
| Let the foul fiends have access at their will, | 10 | ·····/···· |
| Taking the shape of angels, to our hearts,-- | 10 | /˘···/˘·/· |
| Our hearts already poisoned through and through | 10 | /·˘/˘/˘··· |
| With the fierce virus of ancestral sin; | 10 | ···/˘·˘/˘· |
| Turned us adrift with our immortal charge, | 10 | ··˘/·/˘/˘· |
| To wreck ourselves in gulfs of endless woe. | 10 | ··˘/···/˘· |
| If what my Rabbi tells me is the truth | 10 | ···/······ |
| Why did the choir of angels sing for joy? | 10 | ···/·/˘··· |
| Heaven must be compassed in a narrow space, | 10 | /··/˘··/˘· |
| And offer more than room enough for all | 10 | ·/˘···˘/·· |
| That pass its portals; but the under-world, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| The godless realm, the place where demons forge | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| Their fiery darts and adamantine chains, | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Must swarm with ghosts that for a little while | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Had worn the garb of flesh, and being heirs | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Of all the dulness of their stolid sires, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| And all the erring instincts of their tribe, | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Nature's own teaching, rudiments of "sin," | 10 | /˘·/˘/˘˘·· |
| Fell headlong in the snare that could not fail | 10 | ·/········ |
| To trap the wretched creatures shaped of clay | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| And cursed with sense enough to lose their souls! | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| Brother, thy heart is troubled at my word; | 10 | /˘···/˘··· |
| Sister, I see the cloud is on thy brow. | 10 | /˘········ |
| He will not blame me, He who sends not peace, | 10 | ·········· |
| But sends a sword, and bids us strike amain | 10 | ········˘/ |
| At Error's gilded crest, where in the van | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Of earth's great army, mingling with the best | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| And bravest of its leaders, shouting loud | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| The battle-cries that yesterday have led | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| The host of Truth to victory, but to-day | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Are watchwords of the laggard and the slave, | 10 | ·/···/˘··· |
| He leads his dazzled cohorts. God has made | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| This world a strife of atoms and of spheres; | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| With every breath I sigh myself away | 10 | ·/˘····/˘/ |
| And take my tribute from the wandering wind | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| To fan the flame of life's consuming fire; | 11 | ······˘/˘/˘ |
| So, while my thought has life, it needs must burn, | 10 | ·········· |
| And, burning, set the stubble-fields ablaze, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| Where all the harvest long ago was reaped | 10 | ···/˘·˘/·· |
| And safely garnered in the ancient barns. | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| But still the gleaners, groping for their food, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Go blindly feeling through the close-shorn straw, | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| While the young reapers flash, their glittering steel | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Where later suns have ripened nobler grain! | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
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