670. A Paranæticall, or Advisive Verse, to His Friend, M. John Wicks
Is this a life, to break thy sleep,To rise as soon as day doth peep?To tire thy patient ox or assBy noon, and let thy good days pass,Not knowing this, that Jove decreesSome mirth t' adulce man's miseries?No; 'tis a life to have thine oilWithout extortion from thy soil;Thy faithful fields to yield thee grain,Although with some, yet little, pain;To have thy mind, and nuptial bed,With fears and cares uncumbered;A pleasing wife, that by thy sideLies softly panting like a bride.This is to live, and to endearThose minutes Time has lent us here.Then, while fates suffer, live thou freeAs is that air that circles thee,And crown thy temples too, and letThy servant, not thy own self, sweat,To strut thy barns with sheafs of wheat.Time steals away like to a stream,And we glide hence away with them.No sound recalls the hours once fled,Or roses, being withered;Nor us, my friend, when we are lost,Like to a dew or melted frost.Then live we mirthful while we should,And turn the iron age to gold.Let's feast, and frolic, sing, and play,And thus less last than live our day.Whose life with care is overcast,That man's not said to live, but last;Nor is't a life, seven years to tell,But for to live that half seven well;And that we'll do, as men who know,Some few sands spent, we hence must go,Both to be blended in the urnFrom whence there's never a return.
Words in this poem
- jove n.
- The chief divinity of the ancient Romans; Jupiter. [L. Jupiter, gen. Jovis, OL. Jovis, nom. & gen. for Djovis; akin to E. Tuesday. See Tuesday, and cf. Jupiter.]
- endear v. t.
- To make dear or beloved.
- overcast v. t.
- To cast or cover over; hence, to cloud; to darken.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
670. A Paranæticall, or Advisive Verse, to His Friend, M. John Wicks is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Hesperides & Noble Numbers: Vol. 1 and 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #22421; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
670. A Paranæticall, or Advisive Verse, to His Friend, M. John Wicks is 39 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 20% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBCCDDEE--FFGGHHII---JJKKJ-LLMMNNOOPP sleepA · peepA · assB · passB · decreesC · miseriesC · oilD · soilD · grainE · painE · bed · uncumbered · sideF · brideF · endearG · hereG · freeH · theeH · letI · sweatI · wheat · stream · them · fledJ · witheredJ · lostK · frostK · shouldJ · gold · playL · dayL · overcastM · lastM · tellN · wellN · knowO · goO · urnP · returnP
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Is this a life, to break thy sleep, | 8 | ········ |
| To rise as soon as day doth peep? | 8 | ········ |
| To tire thy patient ox or ass | 9 | ·/˘·/˘··· |
| By noon, and let thy good days pass, | 8 | ········ |
| Not knowing this, that Jove decrees | 8 | ·/˘···˘/ |
| Some mirth t' adulce man's miseries? | 9 | ······/˘˘ |
| No; 'tis a life to have thine oil | 8 | ········ |
| Without extortion from thy soil; | 8 | ··˘/˘··· |
| Thy faithful fields to yield thee grain, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Although with some, yet little, pain; | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| To have thy mind, and nuptial bed, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| With fears and cares uncumbered; | 7 | ······· |
| A pleasing wife, that by thy side | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Lies softly panting like a bride. | 8 | ·/˘/˘··· |
| This is to live, and to endear | 8 | ······˘/ |
| Those minutes Time has lent us here. | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Then, while fates suffer, live thou free | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| As is that air that circles thee, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| And crown thy temples too, and let | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Thy servant, not thy own self, sweat, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| To strut thy barns with sheafs of wheat. | 8 | ········ |
| Time steals away like to a stream, | 8 | ··˘/···· |
| And we glide hence away with them. | 8 | ····˘/·· |
| No sound recalls the hours once fled, | 9 | ··˘/·/˘·· |
| Or roses, being withered; | 7 | ·/˘/˘/˘ |
| Nor us, my friend, when we are lost, | 8 | ········ |
| Like to a dew or melted frost. | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Then live we mirthful while we should, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| And turn the iron age to gold. | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Let's feast, and frolic, sing, and play, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| And thus less last than live our day. | 9 | ······/˘· |
| Whose life with care is overcast, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| That man's not said to live, but last; | 8 | ········ |
| Nor is't a life, seven years to tell, | 9 | ····/˘··· |
| But for to live that half seven well; | 9 | ······/˘· |
| And that we'll do, as men who know, | 8 | ········ |
| Some few sands spent, we hence must go, | 8 | ········ |
| Both to be blended in the urn | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| From whence there's never a return. | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
Notes from the edition 1
Word-glosses from Pollard's edition (Muses' Library, 1891; Project Gutenberg #22421).
- Adulce: sweeten · Strut: swell
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