404. Upon Electra

Robert Herrick (1591–1674) · 1648

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 4 lines · from Hesperides

When out of bed my love doth spring,'Tis but as day a-kindling;But when she's up and fully dress'd,'Tis then broad day throughout the east.

About this text

404. Upon Electra is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Hesperides & Noble Numbers: Vol. 1 and 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #22421; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Robert Herrick, 404. Upon Electra, in Hesperides (1648), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #22421, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/herrick-hesperides/404-upon-electra.html, id L05408.

Form and metre

404. Upon Electra is 4 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 50% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter. 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.8 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA-- springA · kindlingA · dress'd · east
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
When out of bed my love doth spring,8········
'Tis but as day a-kindling;7·····/˘
But when she's up and fully dress'd,8·····/˘·
'Tis then broad day throughout the east.8········

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