To W. a

W. E. Henley (1849–1903) · 1898

iambic tetrameter · 24 lines · from Poems

OR ever the knightly years were goneWith the old world to the grave,I was a King in BabylonAnd you were a Christian Slave.

I saw, I took, I cast you by,I bent and broke your pride.You loved me well, or I heard them lie,But your longing was denied.Surely I knew that by and byYou cursed your gods and died.

And a myriad suns have set and shoneSince then upon the graveDecreed by the King in BabylonTo her that had been his Slave.

The pride I trampled is now my scathe,For it tramples me again.The old resentment lasts like death,For you love, yet you refrain.I break my heart on your hard unfaith,And I break my heart in vain.

Yet not for an hour do I wish undoneThe deed beyond the grave,When I was a King in BabylonAnd you were a Virgin Slave.

Words in this poem

knightly a.
Of or pertaining to a knight; becoming a knight; chivalrous; as, a knightly combat; a knightly spirit. [AS. cnihtlic boyish.]
broke v. i.
To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
cursed a.
Deserving a curse; execrable; hateful; detestable; abominable.
myriad n.
The number of ten thousand; ten thousand persons or things. [Gr. myriade.]
scathe v. t.
To do harm to; to injure; to damage; to waste; to destroy. [Icel. skatha; akin to AS. sceathan, sceth\'eban, Dan. skade, Sw. skada, D. & G. schaden, OHG. scadon, Goth. skaÞjan.]
unfaith n.
Absence or want of faith; faithlessness; distrust; unbelief.
undone a.
Not done or performed; neglected. [Pref. un- not + done.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

To W. a is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #1568; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: W. E. Henley, To W. a, in Poems (1898), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #1568, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/henley-poems/to-w-a-2.html, id L12420.

Form and metre

To W. a is 24 lines in 5 stanzas. The commonest rhyme scheme is ABABAB, in 2 of the 5 stanzas; the rest vary or could not be confirmed. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.7 syllables. 33% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A gone · graveA · babylon · slaveA
  2. 2 ABABAB byA · prideB · lieA · deniedB · byA · diedB
  3. 3 -A-A shone · graveA · babylon · slaveA
  4. 4 ABABAB scatheA · againB · deathA · refrainB · unfaithA · vainB
  5. 5 -A-A undone · graveA · babylon · slaveA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
OR ever the knightly years were gone8·/·/˘···
With the old world to the grave,7·······
I was a King in Babylon8·····/˘·
And you were a Christian Slave.7····/˘·
I saw, I took, I cast you by,8········
I bent and broke your pride.6······
You loved me well, or I heard them lie,9·········
But your longing was denied.7··/˘·˘/
Surely I knew that by and by8/˘······
You cursed your gods and died.6······
And a myriad suns have set and shone9··/˘·····
Since then upon the grave6······
Decreed by the King in Babylon9˘/····/˘·
To her that had been his Slave.7·······
The pride I trampled is now my scathe,9···/˘····
For it tramples me again.7··/˘·˘/
The old resentment lasts like death,8··˘/˘···
For you love, yet you refrain.7·····˘/
I break my heart on your hard unfaith,9·······˘/
And I break my heart in vain.7·······
Yet not for an hour do I wish undone10····/···˘/
The deed beyond the grave,6······
When I was a King in Babylon9······/˘·
And you were a Virgin Slave.7····/˘·

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