It came with the threat of a waning moon

W. E. Henley (1849–1903) · 1898

iambic tetrameter · 16 lines · from Poems

IT came with the threat of a waning moonAnd the wail of an ebbing tide,But many a woman has lived for less,And many a man has died;For life upon life took hold and passed,Strong in a fate set free,Out of the deep into the darkOn for the years to be.

Between the gloom of a waning moonAnd the song of an ebbing tide,Chance upon chance of love and deathTook wing for the world so wide.O, leaf out of leaf is the way of the land,Wave out of wave of the seaAnd who shall reckon what lives may liveIn the life that we bade to be?

Words in this poem

waning n.
The act or process of waning, or decreasing.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
bade
A form of the pat tense of Bid.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

It came with the threat of a waning moon is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #1568; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

It came with the threat of a waning moon is 16 lines in 2 stanzas of 8 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 74%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 38% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A-B-B moon · tideA · less · diedA · passed · freeB · dark · beB
  2. 2 -A-A-B-B moon · tideA · death · wideA · land · seaB · live · beB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
IT came with the threat of a waning moon10·······/˘·
And the wail of an ebbing tide,8·····/˘·
But many a woman has lived for less,9·/·/˘····
And many a man has died;7·/˘····
For life upon life took hold and passed,9·········
Strong in a fate set free,6······
Out of the deep into the dark8········
On for the years to be.6······
Between the gloom of a waning moon9······/˘·
And the song of an ebbing tide,8·····/˘·
Chance upon chance of love and death8········
Took wing for the world so wide.7·······
O, leaf out of leaf is the way of the land,11···········
Wave out of wave of the sea7·······
And who shall reckon what lives may live9···/˘····
In the life that we bade to be?8········

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