The Stranger in Louisiana
We saw thee, O stranger! and wept.We look’d for the youth of the sunny glanceWhose step was the fleetest in chase or dance;The light of his eye was a joy to see,The path of his arrows a storm to flee.But there came a voice from a distant shore--He was call’d--he is found midst his tribe no moreHe is not in his place when the night-fires burn,But we look for him still--he will yet return!His brother sat with a drooping browIn the gloom of the shadowing cypress bough:We roused him--we bade him no longer pine,For we heard a step--but the step was thine!
We saw thee, O stranger! and wept.We look’d for the maid of the mournful song--Mournful, though sweet,--she hath left us long:We told her the youth of her love was gone,And she went forth to seek him--she pass’d alone.We hear not her voice when the woods are still,From the bower where it sang, like a silvery rill.The joy of her sire with her smile is fled,The winter is white on his lonely head:He hath none by his side when the wilds we track,He hath none when we rest--yet she comes not back!We look’d for her eye on the feast to shine,For her breezy step--but the step was thine!
We saw thee, O stranger! and wept.We look’d for the chief, who hath left the spearAnd the bow of his battles forgotten here:We look’d for the hunter, whose bride’s lamentOn the wind of the forest at eve is sent:We look’d for the first-born, whose mother’s crySounds wild and shrill through the midnight sky!--Where are they? Thou’rt seeking some distant coast:Oh ask of them, stranger!--send back the lost!Tell them we mourn by the dark-blue streams,Tell them our lives but of them are dreams!Tell, how we sat in the gloom to pine,And to watch for a step--but the step was thine!
Words in this poem
- sunny a.
- Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
- shadowing n.
- Shade, or gradation of light and color; shading. Feltham.
- bade
- A form of the pat tense of Bid.
- went n.
- Course; way; path; journey; direction.
- rill n.
- A very small brook; a streamlet. [Cf. LG. rille a small channel or brook, a furrow, a chamfer, OE. rigol a small brook, F. rigole a trench or furrow for water, W. rhill a row, rhigol a little di]
- sire n.
- A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
- breezy a.
- Characterized by, or having, breezes; airy.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Stranger in Louisiana is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of Felicia Hemans, Project Gutenberg ebook #66785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Felicia Hemans, The Stranger in Louisiana, in Poems (1808–1835), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #66785, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hemans-poems/the-stranger-in-louisiana.html, id L19334.
Form and metre
The Stranger in Louisiana is 39 lines in 3 stanzas of 13 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 82% of the lines: heroic couplets. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter.
See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 -AABBCCDDEEFF wept · glanceA · danceA · seeB · fleeB · shoreC · moreC · burnD · returnD · browE · boughE · pineF · thineF
- 2 -AA--BBCCDDEE wept · songA · longA · gone · alone · stillB · rillB · fledC · headC · trackD · backD · shineE · thineE
- 3 -AABBCC--DDEE wept · spearA · hereA · lamentB · sentB · cryC · skyC · coast · lost · streamsD · dreamsD · pineE · thineE
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| We saw thee, O stranger! and wept. | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| We look’d for the youth of the sunny glance | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Whose step was the fleetest in chase or dance; | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| The light of his eye was a joy to see, | 10 | ·········· |
| The path of his arrows a storm to flee. | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| But there came a voice from a distant shore-- | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| He was call’d--he is found midst his tribe no more | 11 | ··········· |
| He is not in his place when the night-fires burn, | 11 | ·········/· |
| But we look for him still--he will yet return! | 11 | ·········˘/ |
| His brother sat with a drooping brow | 9 | ·/˘···/˘· |
| In the gloom of the shadowing cypress bough: | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| We roused him--we bade him no longer pine, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| For we heard a step--but the step was thine! | 10 | ·········· |
| We saw thee, O stranger! and wept. | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| We look’d for the maid of the mournful song-- | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Mournful, though sweet,--she hath left us long: | 9 | /˘······· |
| We told her the youth of her love was gone, | 10 | ·········· |
| And she went forth to seek him--she pass’d alone. | 11 | ·········˘/ |
| We hear not her voice when the woods are still, | 10 | ·········· |
| From the bower where it sang, like a silvery rill. | 11 | ··/·····/˘· |
| The joy of her sire with her smile is fled, | 10 | ····/····· |
| The winter is white on his lonely head: | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| He hath none by his side when the wilds we track, | 11 | ··········· |
| He hath none when we rest--yet she comes not back! | 11 | ··········· |
| We look’d for her eye on the feast to shine, | 10 | ·········· |
| For her breezy step--but the step was thine! | 10 | ··/˘······ |
| We saw thee, O stranger! and wept. | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| We look’d for the chief, who hath left the spear | 10 | ·········· |
| And the bow of his battles forgotten here: | 11 | ·····/˘˘/˘· |
| We look’d for the hunter, whose bride’s lament | 10 | ····/˘··˘/ |
| On the wind of the forest at eve is sent: | 11 | ·····/˘···· |
| We look’d for the first-born, whose mother’s cry | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Sounds wild and shrill through the midnight sky!-- | 9 | ······/·· |
| Where are they? Thou’rt seeking some distant coast: | 10 | ····/˘·/˘· |
| Oh ask of them, stranger!--send back the lost! | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| Tell them we mourn by the dark-blue streams, | 9 | ········· |
| Tell them our lives but of them are dreams! | 10 | ··/˘······ |
| Tell, how we sat in the gloom to pine, | 9 | ········· |
| And to watch for a step--but the step was thine! | 11 | ··········· |
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