Elysium

Felicia Hemans (1793–1835) · 1808–1835

iambic pentameter · rhyme royal · 112 lines · from Poems

Fair wert thou in the dreamsOf elder time, thou land of glorious flowersAnd summer winds and low-toned silvery streams,Dim with the shadows of thy laurel bowers,Where, as they pass’d, bright hoursLeft no faint sense of parting, such as clingsTo earthly love, and joy in loveliest things!

Fair wert thou, with the lightOn thy blue hills and sleepy waters castFrom purple skies ne’er deep’ning into night,Yet soft, as if each moment were their lastOf glory, fading fastAlong the mountains!--but thy golden dayWas not as those that warn us of decay.

And ever, through thy shades,A swell of deep Æolian sound went byFrom fountain-voices in their secret glades,And low reed-whispers, making sweet replyTo summer’s breezy sigh,And young leaves trembling to the wind’s light breath,Which ne’er had touch’d them with a hue of death!

And the transparent skyRang as a dome, all thrilling to the strainOf harps that midst the woods made harmony,Solemn and sweet; yet troubling not the brainWith dreams and yearnings vain,And dim remembrances, that still draw birthFrom the bewildering music of the earth.

And who, with silent tread,Moved o’er the plains of waving asphodel?Call’d from the dim procession of the dead,Who midst the shadowy amaranth-bowers might dwell,And listen to the swellOf those majestic hymn-notes, and inhaleThe spirit wandering in the immortal gale?

They of the sword, whose praise,With the bright wine, at nations’ feasts went round!They of the lyre, whose unforgotten laysForth on the winds had sent their mighty sound,And in all regions foundTheir echoes midst the mountains!--and becomeIn man’s deep heart as voices of his home!

They of the daring thought!Daring and powerful, yet to dust allied--Whose flight through stars, and seas, and depths, had soughtThe soul’s far birthplace--but without a guide!Sages and seers, who died,And left the world their high mysterious dreams,born midst the olive woods by Grecian streams.

But the most loved are theyOf whom fame speaks not with her clarion voice,In regal halls! The shades o’erhang their way;The vale, with its deep fountains, is their choice,And gentle hearts rejoiceAround their steps; till silently they die,As a stream shrinks from summer’s burning eye.

And these--of whose abode,Midst her green valleys, earth retain’d no trace,Save a flower springing from their burial-sod,A shade of sadness on some kindred face,A dim and vacant placeIn some sweet home;--thou hadst no wreaths for these,Thou sunny land! with all thy deathless trees!

The peasant at his doorMight sink to die when vintage-feasts were spread,And songs on every wind! From thy bright shoreNo lovelier vision floated round his head--Thou wert for nobler dead!He heard the bounding steps which round him fell,And sigh’d to bid the festal sun farewell!

The slave, whose very tearsWere a forbidden luxury, and whose breastKept the mute woes and burning thoughts of years,As embers in a burial-urn compress’d;He might not be thy guest!No gentle breathings from thy distant skyCame o’er his path, and whisper’d “Liberty!”

Calm, on its leaf-strewn bier,Unlike a gift of Nature to Decay,Too rose-like still, too beautiful, too dear,The child at rest before the mother lay,E’en so to pass away,With its bright smile!--Elysium! what wert thouTo her, who wept o’er that young slumb’rer’s brow?

Thou hadst no home, green land!For the fair creature from her bosom gone,With life’s fresh flowers just opening in its hand,And all the lovely thoughts and dreams unknown,Which in its clear eye shoneLike spring’s first wakening! but that light was past--Where went the dewdrop swept before the blast?

Not where thy soft winds play’d,Not where thy waters lay in glassy sleep!Fade with thy bowers, thou Land of Visions, fade!From thee no voice came o’er the gloomy deep,And bade man cease to weep!Fade, with the amaranth plain, the myrtle grove,Which could not yield one hope to sorrowing love!

For the most loved are theyOf whom Fame speaks not with her clarion voice,In regal halls! The shades o’erhang their way;The vale, with its deep fountains, is their choice,And gentle hearts rejoiceAround their steps; till silently they die,As a stream shrinks from summer’s burning eye.

And the world knows not then,Not then, nor ever, what pure thoughts are fled!Yet these are they, who on the souls of menCome back, when night her folding veil hath spread,The long-remember’d dead!But not with thee might aught save glory dwell--Fade, fade away, thou shore of asphodel!

Words in this poem 24
glorious a.
Exhibiting attributes, qualities, or acts that are worthy of or receive glory; noble; praiseworthy; excellent; splendid; illustrious; inspiring admiration; as, glorious deeds. [OF. glorios, glorious, F. glorieux, fr. L. gloriosus. See Glory, n.]
fading n.
An Irish dance; also, the burden of a song.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
breezy a.
Characterized by, or having, breezes; airy.
thrilling a.
Causing a thrill; causing tremulous excitement; deeply moving; as, a thrilling romance.
yearnings n.
The maws, or stomachs, of young calves, used a rennet for curdling milk. [Cf. AS. geirnan, geyrnan, to rum. See 4th Earn.]
bewildering a.
Causing bewilderment or great perplexity; as, bewildering difficulties.
asphodel n.
A general name for a plant of the genus Asphodelus. The asphodels are hardy perennial plants, several species of which are cultivated for the beauty of their flowers. [L. asphodelus, Gr. Daffodil.]
amaranth n.
An imaginary flower supposed never to fade.
dwell v. i.
To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
birthplace n.
The town, city, or country, where a person is born; place of origin or birth, in its more general sense.
clarion n.
A kind of trumpet, whose note is clear and shrill. [OE. clarioun, OF. clarion, F. clairon, LL. clario, claro; so called from its clear tone, fr. L. clarus clear. See Clear.]
vale n.
A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
abode n.
Act of waiting; delay. [OE. abad, abood, fr. abiden to abide. See Abide. For the change of vowel, cf. abode, imp. of abide.]
burial n.
A grave; a tomb; a place of sepulture. [OE. buriel, buriels, grave, tomb, AS. byrgels, fr. byrgan to bury, and akin to OS. burgisli sepulcher.]
sadness n.
Heaviness; firmness.
sunny a.
Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
deathless a.
Not subject to death, destruction, or extinction; immortal; undying; imperishable; as, deathless beings; deathless fame.
festal a.
Of or pertaining to a holiday or a feast; joyous; festive. [L. festum holiday, feast. See feast.]
bier n.
A handbarrow or portable frame on which a corpse is placed or borne to the grave. [OE. bæe, beere, AS. b, b; akin to D. baar, OHG. bara, G. bahre, Icel barar, Dbaare, L. feretrum, Gr. , from the same bear to produce. See 1st Bear, and cf. Barr]
elysium n.
A dwelling place assigned to happy souls after death; the seat of future happiness; Paradise.
wakening n.
The act of one who wakens; esp., the act of ceasing to sleep; an awakening.
bade
A form of the pat tense of Bid.
aught n.
Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Elysium is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of Felicia Hemans, Project Gutenberg ebook #66785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Elysium is 112 lines in 16 stanzas of 7 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABBCC, complete in 9 of its 16 stanzas; the stanza is the Rhyme royal. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%).

See other poems in rhyme royal, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABBCC dreamsA · flowersB · streamsA · bowersB · hoursB · clingsC · thingsC
  2. 2 ABABBCC lightA · castB · nightA · lastB · fastB · dayC · decayC
  3. 3 ABABBCC shadesA · byB · gladesA · replyB · sighB · breathC · deathC
  4. 4 -A-AABB sky · strainA · harmony · brainA · vainA · birthB · earthB
  5. 5 A-ABBCC treadA · asphodel · deadA · dwellB · swellB · inhaleC · galeC
  6. 6 ABABBCC praiseA · roundB · laysA · soundB · foundB · becomeC · homeC
  7. 7 ABABBCC thoughtA · alliedB · soughtA · guideB · diedB · dreamsC · streamsC
  8. 8 ABABBCC theyA · voiceB · wayA · choiceB · rejoiceB · dieC · eyeC
  9. 9 -A-AABB abode · traceA · sod · faceA · placeA · theseB · treesB
  10. 10 ABABBCC doorA · spreadB · shoreA · headB · deadB · fellC · farewellC
  11. 11 ABABB-- tearsA · breastB · yearsA · compress'dB · guestB · sky · liberty
  12. 12 ABABBCC bierA · decayB · dearA · layB · awayB · thouC · browC
  13. 13 A-ABBCC landA · gone · handA · unknownB · shoneB · pastC · blastC
  14. 14 ABABB-- play'dA · sleepB · fadeA · deepB · weepB · grove · love
  15. 15 ABABBCC theyA · voiceB · wayA · choiceB · rejoiceB · dieC · eyeC
  16. 16 ABABB-- thenA · fledB · menA · spreadB · deadB · dwell · asphodel
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Fair wert thou in the dreams6······
Of elder time, thou land of glorious flowers11·/˘····/˘/˘
And summer winds and low-toned silvery streams,10·/˘····/˘·
Dim with the shadows of thy laurel bowers,11···/···/˘/˘
Where, as they pass’d, bright hours7·····/˘
Left no faint sense of parting, such as clings10·····/˘···
To earthly love, and joy in loveliest things!11·/˘········
Fair wert thou, with the light6······
On thy blue hills and sleepy waters cast10·····/˘/˘·
From purple skies ne’er deep’ning into night,10·/˘·······
Yet soft, as if each moment were their last10·····/˘···
Of glory, fading fast6·/˘/˘·
Along the mountains!--but thy golden day10˘/·/˘··/˘·
Was not as those that warn us of decay.10········˘/
And ever, through thy shades,6·/˘···
A swell of deep Æolian sound went by9·········
From fountain-voices in their secret glades,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
And low reed-whispers, making sweet reply10···/˘/˘·˘/
To summer’s breezy sigh,6·/˘/˘·
And young leaves trembling to the wind’s light breath,10···/˘·····
Which ne’er had touch’d them with a hue of death!10··········
And the transparent sky6··˘/˘·
Rang as a dome, all thrilling to the strain10·····/˘···
Of harps that midst the woods made harmony,10·······/˘˘
Solemn and sweet; yet troubling not the brain10/˘···/˘···
With dreams and yearnings vain,6···/˘·
And dim remembrances, that still draw birth10··˘/˘˘····
From the bewildering music of the earth.10··˘/˘/˘···
And who, with silent tread,6···/˘·
Moved o’er the plains of waving asphodel?10·····/˘/˘˘
Call’d from the dim procession of the dead,10····˘/˘···
Who midst the shadowy amaranth-bowers might dwell,11···/˘/˘·/··
And listen to the swell6·/˘···
Of those majestic hymn-notes, and inhale10··˘/˘···˘/
The spirit wandering in the immortal gale?10·//˘··˘/˘·
They of the sword, whose praise,6······
With the bright wine, at nations’ feasts went round!10·····/˘···
They of the lyre, whose unforgotten lays10··········
Forth on the winds had sent their mighty sound,10·······/˘·
And in all regions found6···/˘·
Their echoes midst the mountains!--and become10·/˘··/˘·˘/
In man’s deep heart as voices of his home!10·····/˘···
They of the daring thought!6···/˘·
Daring and powerful, yet to dust allied--10/˘·/˘···˘/
Whose flight through stars, and seas, and depths, had sought10··········
The soul’s far birthplace--but without a guide!10···/······
Sages and seers, who died,6/˘····
And left the world their high mysterious dreams,10······˘/˘·
born midst the olive woods by Grecian streams.10···/˘··/˘·
But the most loved are they6······
Of whom fame speaks not with her clarion voice,10·······/˘·
In regal halls! The shades o’erhang their way;10·/˘·······
The vale, with its deep fountains, is their choice,10·····/˘···
And gentle hearts rejoice6·/˘·˘/
Around their steps; till silently they die,10·····/˘˘··
As a stream shrinks from summer’s burning eye.10·····/˘/˘·
And these--of whose abode,6····˘/
Midst her green valleys, earth retain’d no trace,10···/˘·˘/··
Save a flower springing from their burial-sod,10··//˘··/˘·
A shade of sadness on some kindred face,10···/˘··/˘·
A dim and vacant place6···/˘·
In some sweet home;--thou hadst no wreaths for these,10··········
Thou sunny land! with all thy deathless trees!10·/˘····/˘·
The peasant at his door6·/˘···
Might sink to die when vintage-feasts were spread,10·····/˘···
And songs on every wind! From thy bright shore10···/˘·····
No lovelier vision floated round his head--11····/˘/˘···
Thou wert for nobler dead!6···/˘·
He heard the bounding steps which round him fell,10···/˘·····
And sigh’d to bid the festal sun farewell!10·····/˘··/
The slave, whose very tears6···/˘·
Were a forbidden luxury, and whose breast10··/˘/˘˘···
Kept the mute woes and burning thoughts of years,10·····/˘···
As embers in a burial-urn compress’d;10·/˘··/˘·˘/
He might not be thy guest!6······
No gentle breathings from thy distant sky10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Came o’er his path, and whisper’d “Liberty!”10·····/˘/˘˘
Calm, on its leaf-strewn bier,6······
Unlike a gift of Nature to Decay,10˘/···/˘·˘/
Too rose-like still, too beautiful, too dear,10·····/˘˘··
The child at rest before the mother lay,10·······/˘·
E’en so to pass away,6····˘/
With its bright smile!--Elysium! what wert thou10····˘/˘···
To her, who wept o’er that young slumb’rer’s brow?10··········
Thou hadst no home, green land!6······
For the fair creature from her bosom gone,10···/˘··/˘·
With life’s fresh flowers just opening in its hand,10···/·/˘···
And all the lovely thoughts and dreams unknown,10···/˘···˘/
Which in its clear eye shone6······
Like spring’s first wakening! but that light was past--10···/˘·····
Where went the dewdrop swept before the blast?10···/˘·····
Not where thy soft winds play’d,6······
Not where thy waters lay in glassy sleep!10···/˘··/˘·
Fade with thy bowers, thou Land of Visions, fade!10···/···/˘·
From thee no voice came o’er the gloomy deep,10·······/˘·
And bade man cease to weep!6······
Fade, with the amaranth plain, the myrtle grove,11···/˘···/˘·
Which could not yield one hope to sorrowing love!10·······/˘·
For the most loved are they6······
Of whom Fame speaks not with her clarion voice,10·······/˘·
In regal halls! The shades o’erhang their way;10·/˘·······
The vale, with its deep fountains, is their choice,10·····/˘···
And gentle hearts rejoice6·/˘·˘/
Around their steps; till silently they die,10·····/˘˘··
As a stream shrinks from summer’s burning eye.10·····/˘/˘·
And the world knows not then,6······
Not then, nor ever, what pure thoughts are fled!10···/˘·····
Yet these are they, who on the souls of men10··········
Come back, when night her folding veil hath spread,10·····/˘···
The long-remember’d dead!6··˘/˘·
But not with thee might aught save glory dwell--10·······/˘·
Fade, fade away, thou shore of asphodel!10··˘/···/˘˘
Notes from the edition 1

Notes from The Poems of Felicia Hemans (Project Gutenberg #66785), largely Mrs Hemans's own.

  1. Stanza 14, line 7 The form of this poem was a good deal altered by Mrs Hemans some years after its first publication, and, though done so perhaps to advantage, one verse was omitted. As originally written, the two following stanzas concluded the piece:-- For the most loved are they Of whom Fame speaks not with her clarion voice, In regal halls! The shades o’erhang their way; The vale, with its deep fountains, is their choice, And gentle hearts rejoice Around their steps; till silently they die, As a stream shrinks from summer’s burning eye. And the world knows not then, Not then, nor ever, what pure thoughts are fled! Yet these are they, who on the souls of men Come back, when night her folding veil hath spread, The long-remember’d dead! But not with thee might aught save glory dwell-- Fade, fade away, thou shore of asphodel!

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