Odyssey

H.D. (1886–1961) · 1924

iambic trimeter · 183 lines · from Heliodora, and Other Poems

Muse,tell me of this man of wit,who roamed long yearsafter he had sackedTroy’s sacred streets.

All the restwho had escaped death,returned,fleeing battle and the sea;only Odysseus,captive of a goddess,desperate and home-sick,thought but of his wife and palace;but Calypso,that nymph and spirit,yearning in the furrowed rock-shelf,burnedand sought to be his mistress;but years passed,the time was ripe,the gods decreed,(although traitors plotto betray him in his own court,)he was to returnto Ithaca;and all the gods pitied him;but Poseidonsteadfast to the lasthatedgod-like Odysseus.

The sea-god visiteda distant folk,Ethiopians,who at the edge of earthare divided into two parts,(half watch the sun rise,half, the sun set,)there the hecatombof slain sheep and oxenawait his revels:and while he rejoiced,seated at the feast,the rest of the godsgathered in the palace of Olympian Zeus;and the father of men and of gods spoke thus:(for he remembered bright Egisthus,slain of Agamemnon’s child,great Orestes:)

O you spirits,how men hate the gods,for they say evil comes of us,when they themselves,by their own wickedness,court perilbeyond their fate;so Egisthus, defiant,sought Agamemnon’s wifeand slew Agamemnonreturning to his own palace,though we ourselvessent bright Hermes,slayer of Argos,to warn himlest Orestes,attaining to man’s estate,demand his inheritanceand take vengeance:we forbade him to strike the king,we warned him to respect his wife:but could Hermesof gracious aspect,subtle with kindly speech,thus avert the foul work?

Then the grey-eyed Athene,the goddess, spoke:O my father, Kronos begot,first among the great,his death at least was just,so may all perish who err thus;but my heart is rentfor the prudent Odysseus,who, exiled from his friends,is kept too long distressedin an island, sea swept,in the sea midst,a forest island,haunt of a spirit,child of Atlas,crafty of thought,who knows the sea depth,who supports the high pillarswhich cut sky from earth;it is his childwho keeps Odysseuslamenting with broken heart,ceaseless to tempt himwith soft and tender speech,that he forget Ithaca;but Odysseus,yearning to see but the smokedrift above his own house,prefers death;your heart, is it not touched,O Olympian?did not Odysseus please youwhen he made sacrificebefore the Grecian shipsin great Troy?why are you angry, Zeus?

Then Zeus,keeper of the clouds,answering her, spoke:O my child,what quaint wordshave sped your lips,for how could I forgetthe god-like Odysseus,a spirit surpassing men,first to make sacrificeto the deathlessin the sky-space?but Poseidongirder of earth,though yet he spares his life,nurtures unending hate;he goads him from place to placebecause of the Cyclopsblinded of Odysseus,Polyphemus, half-god,greatest of the Cyclops,whom the nymph Thoosa,child of Phorcys,king of the waste sea, begotwhen she lay with Poseidonamong the shallow rocks:but come,let us plotto reinstate Odysseus,and Poseidon must abandon his wrath;for what can one god accomplish,striving aloneto defy all the deathless?

Then the grey-eyed Athene,the goddess, spoke:O my father, Kronos begot,first among the great,if then it seems justto the highest,that Odysseus returnto his own house,let us swiftly sendHermes, slayer of Argos,your attendant,that he stateto the fair-haired nymph,our irrevocable wish,that Odysseus,valiant of heart,be sent back:and I will depart to Ithaca,to incite his son,to put courage in his heart,that he call to the market placethe long-haired Greeksand shut his gatesto the pretendantswho ceaselessly devour his flocks,sheep and horned oxenof gentle pace:that he strivefor his father’s sakeand gain favourin men’s thoughts,I will send him to Sparta,to Pylos’ sandy waste.

She spokeand about her feetclasped bright sandals,gold-wrought, imperishable,which lift her above sea,across the land stretch,wind-like,like the wind breath.

Words in this poem 16
desperate a.
Without hope; given to despair; hopeless. [L. desperatus, p. p. of desperare. See Despair, and cf. Desperado.]
folk n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]
hecatomb n.
A sacrifice of a hundred oxen or cattle at the same time; hence, the sacrifice or slaughter of any large number of victims. [L. hecatombe, Gr. hécatombe.]
await v. t.
To watch for; to look out for. [OF. awaitier, agaitier; (L. ad) + waitier, gaitier to watch, F. guetter. See Wait.]
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
defiant a.
Full of defiance; bold; insolent; as, a defiant spirit or act. [Cf. F. défiant, p. pr. of défier. See Defy.]
slayer n.
One who slays; a killer; a murderer; a destrroyer of life.
ceaseless a.
Without pause or end; incessant.
angry a.
Troublesome; vexatious; rigorous. [See Anger.]
quaint a.
Prudent; wise; hence, crafty; artful; wily. [OE. queint, queynte, coint, prudent, wise, cunning, pretty, odd, OF. cointe cultivated, amiable, agreeable, neat, fr. L. cognitus known, p. p. of cognoscere to ]
deathless a.
Not subject to death, destruction, or extinction; immortal; undying; imperishable; as, deathless beings; deathless fame.
reinstate v. t.
To place again in possession, or in a former state; to restore to a state from which one had been removed; to instate again; as, to reinstate a king in the possession of the kingdom.
defy v. t.
To renounce or dissolve all bonds of affiance, faith, or obligation with; to reject, refuse, or renounce. [F. défier, OF. deffier, desfier, LL. disfidare to disown faith or fidelity, to dissolve the bond of allegiance, as between the vassal and his lord; hence, to ch]
valiant a.
Vigorous in body; strong; powerful; as, a valiant fencer. [OE. valiant, F. vaillant, OF. vaillant, valant, originally p. pr. of OF. & F. valoir to be worth, L. valere to be strong. See Wield, and cf. Avail, Convalesce, ]
depart v. i.
To part; to divide; to separate. [OE. departen to divide, part, depart, F. départir to divide, distribute, se départir to separate one's self, depart; pref. dé- (L. de) + partir to part, depart,]
favour n.
Kind regard; propitious aspect; countenance; friendly disposition; kindness; good will. [Written also favour.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Odyssey is 183 lines in 8 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 2 --A-B------A-C----D--DC-B rest · death · returnedA · sea · odysseusB · goddess · sick · palace · calypso · spirit · shelf · burnedA · mistress · passedC · ripe · decreed · plot · court · returnD · ithaca · him · poseidonD · lastC · hated · odysseusB
  2. 4 --ABA-C-D--BE---C---DE--- spirits · gods · usA · themselvesB · wickednessA · peril · fateC · defiant · wifeD · agamemnon · palace · ourselvesB · hermesE · argos · him · orestes · estateC · inheritance · vengeance · king · wifeD · hermesE · aspect · speech · work
  3. 5 -----A-A-----B-B---------C-C-------- athene · spoke · begot · great · just · thusA · rent · odysseusA · friends · distressed · swept · midst · island · spiritB · atlas · thoughtB · depth · pillars · earth · child · odysseus · heart · him · speech · ithaca · odysseusC · smoke · houseC · death · touched · olympian · you · sacrifice · ships · troy · zeus
  4. 6 -------ABA-AB---C-C-------------- zeus · clouds · spoke · child · words · lips · forget · odysseusA · menB · sacrificeA · deathless · spaceA · poseidonB · earth · life · hate · placeC · cyclops · odysseusC · god · cyclops · thoosa · phorcys · begot · poseidon · rocks · come · plot · odysseus · wrath · accomplish · alone · deathless
  5. 7 ----AA--------------------------- athene · spoke · begot · great · justA · highestA · return · house · send · argos · attendant · state · nymph · wish · odysseus · heart · back · ithaca · son · heart · place · greeks · gates · pretendants · flocks · oxen · pace · strive · sake · favour · thoughts · sparta · waste
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Muse,1·
tell me of this man of wit,7·······
who roamed long years4····
after he had sacked5·····
Troy’s sacred streets.4·/˘·
All the rest3···
who had escaped death,5··˘/·
returned,2˘/
fleeing battle and the sea;7/˘/˘···
only Odysseus,6/˘˘/˘˘
captive of a goddess,6/˘··/˘
desperate and home-sick,5/˘···
thought but of his wife and palace;8······/˘
but Calypso,4·˘/·
that nymph and spirit,5···/˘
yearning in the furrowed rock-shelf,8/˘··/˘··
burned1·
and sought to be his mistress;7·····/˘
but years passed,3···
the time was ripe,4····
the gods decreed,4··˘/
(although traitors plot5··/˘·
to betray him in his own court,)8·˘/·····
he was to return5···˘/
to Ithaca;4·/˘˘
and all the gods pitied him;7····/··
but Poseidon4·˘/˘
steadfast to the last5/····
hated2/˘
god-like Odysseus.6··˘/˘˘
The sea-god visited6···/˘˘
a distant folk,4·/˘·
Ethiopians,5·˘/˘˘
who at the edge of earth6······
are divided into two parts,8·˘/˘····
(half watch the sun rise,5·····
half, the sun set,)4····
there the hecatomb5··/˘˘
of slain sheep and oxen6····/˘
await his revels:5˘/·/˘
and while he rejoiced,5···˘/
seated at the feast,5/˘···
the rest of the gods5·····
gathered in the palace of Olympian Zeus;12/˘··/˘·˘/˘˘·
and the father of men and of gods spoke thus:11··/˘·······
(for he remembered bright Egisthus,9··˘/˘····
slain of Agamemnon’s child,7···˘/··
great Orestes:)4·˘/˘
O you spirits,4··/˘
how men hate the gods,5·····
for they say evil comes of us,8···/˘···
when they themselves,4··˘/
by their own wickedness,6···/˘˘
court peril3·/˘
beyond their fate;4····
so Egisthus, defiant,7····˘/˘
sought Agamemnon’s wife6··˘/··
and slew Agamemnon6···˘/·
returning to his own palace,8˘/˘···/˘
though we ourselves5··˘˘/
sent bright Hermes,4··/˘
slayer of Argos,5/˘·/˘
to warn him3···
lest Orestes,4·˘/˘
attaining to man’s estate,7˘/˘··˘/
demand his inheritance7˘/·˘/˘˘
and take vengeance:4··/˘
we forbade him to strike the king,8·˘/·····
we warned him to respect his wife:8····˘/··
but could Hermes4··/˘
of gracious aspect,5·/˘/·
subtle with kindly speech,6/˘·/˘·
thus avert the foul work?6·˘/···
Then the grey-eyed Athene,6······
the goddess, spoke:4·/˘·
O my father, Kronos begot,8··/˘/˘˘/
first among the great,5·····
his death at least was just,6······
so may all perish who err thus;8···/˘···
but my heart is rent5·····
for the prudent Odysseus,8··/˘˘/˘˘
who, exiled from his friends,6·/····
is kept too long distressed6····˘/
in an island, sea swept,6··/˘··
in the sea midst,4····
a forest island,5·/˘/˘
haunt of a spirit,5···/˘
child of Atlas,4··/˘
crafty of thought,4/˘··
who knows the sea depth,5·····
who supports the high pillars7·˘/··/˘
which cut sky from earth;5·····
it is his child4····
who keeps Odysseus6··˘/˘˘
lamenting with broken heart,7˘/˘·/˘·
ceaseless to tempt him5/˘···
with soft and tender speech,6···/˘·
that he forget Ithaca;7··˘//˘˘
but Odysseus,5·˘/˘˘
yearning to see but the smoke7/˘·····
drift above his own house,6······
prefers death;3˘/·
your heart, is it not touched,6······
O Olympian?5·˘/˘˘
did not Odysseus please you8··˘/˘˘··
when he made sacrifice6···/˘·
before the Grecian ships6···/˘·
in great Troy?3···
why are you angry, Zeus?6···/˘·
Then Zeus,2··
keeper of the clouds,5/˘···
answering her, spoke:5/˘˘··
O my child,3···
what quaint words3···
have sped your lips,4····
for how could I forget6····˘/
the god-like Odysseus,7···˘/˘˘
a spirit surpassing men,7·/˘˘/˘·
first to make sacrifice6···/˘·
to the deathless4··/˘
in the sky-space?4····
but Poseidon4·˘/˘
girder of earth,4/˘··
though yet he spares his life,6······
nurtures unending hate;6/˘˘/˘·
he goads him from place to place7·······
because of the Cyclops6····/·
blinded of Odysseus,7/˘·˘/˘˘
Polyphemus, half-god,6······
greatest of the Cyclops,6/˘··/·
whom the nymph Thoosa,5·····
child of Phorcys,4····
king of the waste sea, begot7·····˘/
when she lay with Poseidon7····˘/˘
among the shallow rocks:6···/˘·
but come,2··
let us plot3···
to reinstate Odysseus,8··˘/˘/˘˘
and Poseidon must abandon his wrath;10·˘/˘·˘/˘··
for what can one god accomplish,8·····˘/˘
striving alone4/˘˘/
to defy all the deathless?7·˘/··/˘
Then the grey-eyed Athene,6······
the goddess, spoke:4·/˘·
O my father, Kronos begot,8··/˘/˘˘/
first among the great,5·····
if then it seems just5·····
to the highest,4··/˘
that Odysseus return7·˘/˘˘˘/
to his own house,4····
let us swiftly send5··/˘·
Hermes, slayer of Argos,7/˘/˘·/˘
your attendant,4·˘/˘
that he state3···
to the fair-haired nymph,5·····
our irrevocable wish,8/˘˘/˘˘˘·
that Odysseus,5·˘/˘˘
valiant of heart,4/˘··
be sent back:3···
and I will depart to Ithaca,9···˘/·/˘˘
to incite his son,5·˘/··
to put courage in his heart,7··/˘···
that he call to the market place8·····/˘·
the long-haired Greeks4····
and shut his gates4····
to the pretendants5·····
who ceaselessly devour his flocks,9·/˘˘˘/˘··
sheep and horned oxen5···/˘
of gentle pace:4·/˘·
that he strive3···
for his father’s sake5··/˘·
and gain favour4··/˘
in men’s thoughts,3···
I will send him to Sparta,7·····/˘
to Pylos’ sandy waste.6·/˘/˘·
She spoke2··
and about her feet5·····
clasped bright sandals,4··/˘
gold-wrought, imperishable,7··˘/˘˘˘
which lift her above sea,6······
across the land stretch,5˘/···
wind-like,2··
like the wind breath.4····

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