The Blow
THAT no man schemed it is my hope—Yea, that it fell by will and scopeOf That Which some enthrone,And for whose meaning myriads grope.
For I would not that of my kindThere should, of his unbiassed mind,Have been one knownWho such a stroke could have designed;
Since it would augur works and waysBelow the lowest that man assaysTo have hurled that stoneInto the sunshine of our days!
And if it prove that no man did,And that the Inscrutable, the Hid,Was cause aloneOf this foul crash our lives amid,
I’ll go in due time, and forgetIn some deep graveyard’s oublietteThe thing whereof I groan,And cease from troubling; thankful yet
Time’s finger should have stretched to showNo aimful author’s was the blowThat swept us prone,But the Immanent Doer’s That doth not know,
Which in some age unguessed of usMay lift Its blinding incubus,And see, and own:“It grieves me I did thus and thus!”
(Young Lover’s Reverie)
THE train draws forth from the station-yard,And with it carries me.I rise, and stretch out, and regardThe platform left, and seeAn airy slim blue form there standing,And know that it is she.
While with strained vision I watch on,The figure turns round quiteTo greet friends gaily; then is gone . . .The import may be slight,But why remained she not hard gazingTill I was out of sight?
“O do not chat with others there,”I brood. “They are not I.O strain your thoughts as if they wereGold bands between us; eyeAll neighbour scenes as so much blanknessTill I again am by!
“A troubled soughing in the breezeAnd the sky overheadLet yourself feel; and shadeful trees,Ripe corn, and apples red,Read as things barren and distastefulWhile we are separated!
“When I come back uncloak your gloom,And let in lovely day;Then the long dark as of the tombCan well be thrust awayWith sweet things I shall have to practise,And you will have to say!”
Words in this poem
- enthrone v. t.
- To seat on a throne; to exalt to the seat of royalty or of high authority; hence, to invest with sovereign authority or dignity. [Pref. en- + throne: cf. OF. enthroner. Cf. Inthronize.]
- sunshine n.
- The light of the sun, or the place where it shines; the direct rays of the sun, the place where they fall, or the warmth and light which they give.
- amid prep.
- In the midst or middle of; surrounded or encompassed by; among. [OE. amidde, amiddes, on midden, AS. on middan, in the middle, fr. midde the middle. The s is an adverbial ending, originally marking the genitive; the t is a la]
- whereof adv.
- Of which; of whom; formerly, also, with which; -- used relatively.
- thankful a.
- Obtaining or deserving thanks; thankworthy. [AS. Þancfull.]
- incubus n.
- A demon; a fiend; a lascivious spirit, supposed to have sexual intercourse with women by night. Tylor. [L., the nightmare. Cf. Incubate.]
- reverie n.
- A loose or irregular train of thought occurring in musing or mediation; deep musing; daydream. [F. réverie, fr. rêver to dream, rave, be light-headed. Cf. Rave.]
- gaily adv.
- Merrily; showily. See gaily. [From Gay.]
- neighbour v. i.
- To dwell in the vicinity; to be a neighbor, or in the neighborhood; to be near.
- blankness n.
- The state of being blank.
- shadeful a.
- Full of shade; shady.
- distasteful a.
- Unpleasant or disgusting to the taste; nauseous; loathsome.
- uncloak v. t.
- To remove a cloak or cover from; to deprive of a cloak or cover; to unmask; to reveal. [1st pref. un- + cloak.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Blow is in the public domain. This text is taken from Moments of Vision and Miscellaneous Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #3255; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Thomas Hardy, The Blow, in Moments of Vision and Miscellaneous Verses (1917), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #3255, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hardy-moments-of-vision/the-blow.html, id L24162.
Form and metre
The Blow is 59 lines in 13 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 83%).
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABA hopeA · scopeA · enthroneB · gropeA
- 2 CCBC kindC · mindC · knownB · designedC
- 3 D-BD waysD · assays · stoneB · daysD
- 4 EEBE didE · hidE · aloneB · amidE
- 5 FFBF forgetF · oublietteF · groanB · yetF
- 6 GGBG showG · blowG · proneB · knowG
- 7 H-BH usH · incubus · ownB · thusH
- 9 IJIJ-J yardI · meJ · regardI · seeJ · standing · sheJ
- 10 -K-K-K on · quiteK · gone · slightK · gazing · sightK
- 11 -L-L-L there · iL · were · eyeL · blankness · byL
- 12 MNMN-- breezeM · overheadN · treesM · redN · distasteful · separated
- 13 OPOP-P gloomO · dayP · tombO · awayP · practise · sayP
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| THAT no man schemed it is my hope— | 8 | ········ |
| Yea, that it fell by will and scope | 8 | ········ |
| Of That Which some enthrone, | 6 | ····˘/ |
| And for whose meaning myriads grope. | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| For I would not that of my kind | 8 | ········ |
| There should, of his unbiassed mind, | 7 | ······· |
| Have been one known | 4 | ···· |
| Who such a stroke could have designed; | 8 | ······˘/ |
| Since it would augur works and ways | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Below the lowest that man assays | 9 | ···/˘··/˘ |
| To have hurled that stone | 5 | ····· |
| Into the sunshine of our days! | 8 | ···/··/· |
| And if it prove that no man did, | 8 | ········ |
| And that the Inscrutable, the Hid, | 8 | ···˘/˘·· |
| Was cause alone | 4 | ··˘/ |
| Of this foul crash our lives amid, | 8 | ····/·˘/ |
| I’ll go in due time, and forget | 8 | ······˘/ |
| In some deep graveyard’s oubliette | 7 | ···/··· |
| The thing whereof I groan, | 6 | ······ |
| And cease from troubling; thankful yet | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| Time’s finger should have stretched to show | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| No aimful author’s was the blow | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| That swept us prone, | 4 | ···· |
| But the Immanent Doer’s That doth not know, | 10 | ··/˘/˘···· |
| Which in some age unguessed of us | 8 | ········ |
| May lift Its blinding incubus, | 8 | ···/˘/˘˘ |
| And see, and own: | 4 | ···· |
| “It grieves me I did thus and thus!” | 8 | ········ |
| (Young Lover’s Reverie) | 6 | ·/˘/˘˘ |
| THE train draws forth from the station-yard, | 9 | ······/˘· |
| And with it carries me. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| I rise, and stretch out, and regard | 8 | ······˘/ |
| The platform left, and see | 6 | ·/···· |
| An airy slim blue form there standing, | 9 | ·/˘····/˘ |
| And know that it is she. | 6 | ······ |
| While with strained vision I watch on, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| The figure turns round quite | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| To greet friends gaily; then is gone . . . | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| The import may be slight, | 6 | ·˘/··· |
| But why remained she not hard gazing | 9 | ··˘/···/˘ |
| Till I was out of sight? | 6 | ······ |
| “O do not chat with others there,” | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| I brood. “They are not I. | 6 | ······ |
| O strain your thoughts as if they were | 8 | ········ |
| Gold bands between us; eye | 6 | ······ |
| All neighbour scenes as so much blankness | 9 | ·/˘····/˘ |
| Till I again am by! | 6 | ··˘/·· |
| “A troubled soughing in the breeze | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| And the sky overhead | 6 | ···/˘/ |
| Let yourself feel; and shadeful trees, | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Ripe corn, and apples red, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Read as things barren and distasteful | 9 | ···/˘·˘/˘ |
| While we are separated! | 7 | ···/˘·˘ |
| “When I come back uncloak your gloom, | 8 | ····˘/·· |
| And let in lovely day; | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Then the long dark as of the tomb | 8 | ········ |
| Can well be thrust away | 6 | ····˘/ |
| With sweet things I shall have to practise, | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| And you will have to say!” | 6 | ······ |
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