The Hills

Radclyffe Hall (1886–1943) · 1913

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 10 lines · from Songs of Three Counties, and Other Poems

WHEN I the hills of Malvern see,There comes a sadness over me.

The reason why, I cannot tell,Perhaps I love those hills too well.

But this I know, when I beholdTheir springtime green, and autumn gold,

And see that year by year they bearSuch witness that God’s earth is fair,

I’m happy for their beauty’s sake,And yet my heart begins to ache.

Words in this poem

sadness n.
Heaviness; firmness.
springtime n.
The season of spring; springtide.
ache n.
A name given to several species of plants; as, smallage, wild celery, parsley. Holland. [F. ache, L. apium parsley.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Hills is in the public domain. This text is taken from Songs of Three Counties, and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #50591; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Radclyffe Hall, The Hills, in Songs of Three Counties, and Other Poems (1913), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #50591, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hall-three-counties/the-hills.html, id L22660.

Form and metre

The Hills is 10 lines in 5 stanzas of 2 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 97%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA seeA · meA
  2. 2 AA tellA · wellA
  3. 3 AA beholdA · goldA
  4. 4 AA bearA · fairA
  5. 5 AA sakeA · acheA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
WHEN I the hills of Malvern see,8·····/˘·
There comes a sadness over me.8···/˘···
The reason why, I cannot tell,8·/˘··/˘·
Perhaps I love those hills too well.8˘/······
But this I know, when I behold8······˘/
Their springtime green, and autumn gold,8·/···/˘·
And see that year by year they bear8········
Such witness that God’s earth is fair,8·/˘·····
I’m happy for their beauty’s sake,8·/˘··/˘·
And yet my heart begins to ache.8····˘/··

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