The Moon upon Her Watch-Tower

Eleanor Farjeon (1881–1965) · 1918

iambic trimeter · 12 lines · from Sonnets and Poems

The moon upon her watch-towerWith her golden eyeGuarded the quartersEast and West the sky.Just as midnightWas stepping pastOne drew his first breath,One drew his last.The moon upon her watch-towerRang a soundless bell--It might have been for welcome,It might have been farewell.

Words in this poem

soundless a.
Not capable of being sounded or fathomed; unfathomable.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Moon upon Her Watch-Tower is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sonnets and Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #56244; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Moon upon Her Watch-Tower is 12 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%).

See other poems in iambic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AB-B-C-CAD-D towerA · eyeB · quarters · skyB · midnight · pastC · breath · lastC · towerA · bellD · welcome · farewellD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The moon upon her watch-tower7······/
With her golden eye5··/˘·
Guarded the quarters5/˘·/˘
East and West the sky.5·····
Just as midnight4··/·
Was stepping past4·/˘·
One drew his first breath,5·····
One drew his last.4····
The moon upon her watch-tower7······/
Rang a soundless bell--5··/˘·
It might have been for welcome,7·····/˘
It might have been farewell.6·····/

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