Millers Dale

John Drinkwater (1882–1937) · 1919

iambic tetrameter · ABABCDCD · 24 lines · from Poems, 1908-1919

Barefoot we went by Millers DaleWhen meadowsweet was golden gloomAnd happy love was in the valeSinging upon the summer bloomOf gipsy crop and branches laidOf willows over chanting pools,Barefoot by Millers Dale we madeOur summer festival of fools.

Folly bright-eyed, and quick, and youngWas there with all his silly plots,And trotty wagtail stepped amongThe delicate forget-me-nots,And laughter played with us aboveThe rocky shelves and weeded holesAnd we had fellowship to loveThe pigeons and the water-voles.

Time soon shall be when we are allStiller than ever runs the Wye,And every bitterness shall fallTo-morrow in obscurity,And wars be done, and treasons fail,Yet shall new friends go down to greetThe singing rocks of Millers Dale,And willow pools and meadowsweet.

Words in this poem

barefoot a.
With the feet bare; without shoes or stockings.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
vale n.
A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
stiller n.
One who stills, or quiets.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Millers Dale is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, 1908-1919, Project Gutenberg ebook #51575; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: John Drinkwater, Millers Dale, in Poems, 1908-1919 (1919), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #51575, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/drinkwater-poems/millers-dale.html, id L23092.

Form and metre

Millers Dale is 24 lines in 3 stanzas of 8 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABCDCD, complete in 2 of its 3 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCD daleA · gloomB · valeA · bloomB · laidC · poolsD · madeC · foolsD
  2. 2 ABABCDCD youngA · plotsB · amongA · notsB · aboveC · holesD · loveC · volesD
  3. 3 A-A-BCBC allA · wye · fallA · obscurity · failB · greetC · daleB · meadowsweetC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Barefoot we went by Millers Dale8/····/˘·
When meadowsweet was golden gloom8·····/˘·
And happy love was in the vale8·/˘·····
Singing upon the summer bloom8/˘···/˘·
Of gipsy crop and branches laid8·/˘··/˘·
Of willows over chanting pools,8·/···/˘·
Barefoot by Millers Dale we made8/··/˘···
Our summer festival of fools.8//˘/˘˘··
Folly bright-eyed, and quick, and young8/˘······
Was there with all his silly plots,8·····/˘·
And trotty wagtail stepped among8···/˘···
The delicate forget-me-nots,8·/˘˘˘/··
And laughter played with us above8·/˘·····
The rocky shelves and weeded holes8·/˘··/˘·
And we had fellowship to love8···/˘···
The pigeons and the water-voles.8·/˘··/˘·
Time soon shall be when we are all8········
Stiller than ever runs the Wye,8/˘·/˘···
And every bitterness shall fall8·/˘/˘˘··
To-morrow in obscurity,8·/˘·˘/˘˘
And wars be done, and treasons fail,8·····/˘·
Yet shall new friends go down to greet8········
The singing rocks of Millers Dale,8·/˘··/˘·
And willow pools and meadowsweet.8·/······

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