To Mr. Christopher Brooke

John Donne (1572–1631) · 1633

iambic pentameter · 73 lines · from Poems

Thou which art I, ('tis nothing to be soe)Thou which art still thy selfe, by these shalt knowPart of our passage; And, a hand, or eyeBy Hilliard drawne, is worth an history,By a worse painter made; and (without pride)When by thy judgment they are dignifi'd,My lines are such: 'Tis the preheminenceOf friendship onely to'impute excellence.England to whom we'owe, what we be, and have,Sad that her sonnes did seeke a forraine grave(For, Fates, or Fortunes drifts none can soothsay,Honour and misery have one face and way.)From out her pregnant intrailes sigh'd a windeWhich at th'ayres middle marble roome did findeSuch strong resistance, that it selfe it threwDowneward againe; and so when it did viewHow in the port, our fleet deare time did leese,Withering like prisoners, which lye but for fees,Mildly it kist our sailes, and, fresh and sweet,As to a stomack sterv'd, whose insides meete,Meate comes, it came; and swole our sailes, when weeSo joyd, as Sara'her swelling joy'd to see.But 'twas but so kinde, as our countrimen,Which bring friends one dayes way, and leave them then.Then like two mighty Kings, which dwelling farreAsunder, meet against a third to warre,The South and West winds joyn'd, and, as they blew,Waves like a rowling trench before them threw.Sooner then you read this line, did the gale,Like shot, not fear'd till felt, our sailes assaile;And what at first was call'd a gust, the sameHath now a stormes, anon a tempests name.Ionas, I pitty thee, and curse those men,Who when the storm rag'd most, did wake thee then;Sleepe is paines easiest salue, and doth fullfillAll offices of death, except to kill.But when I wakt, I saw, that I saw not;I, and the Sunne, which should teach mee'had forgotIf'the world had lasted, now it had beene day.Thousands our noyses were, yet wee'mongst allCould none by his right name, but thunder call:Lightning was all our light, and it rain'd moreThen if the Sunne had drunke the sea before.Some coffin'd in their cabbins lye,'equallyGriev'd that they are not dead, and yet must dye;And as sin-burd'ned soules from graves will creepe,At the last day, some forth their cabbins peepe:And tremblingly'aske what newes, and doe heare so,Like jealous husbands, what they would not know.Some sitting on the hatches, would seeme there,With hideous gazing to feare away feare.Then note they the ships sicknesses, the MastShak'd with this ague, and the Hold and WastWith a salt dropsie clog'd, and all our tacklingsSnapping, like too-high-stretched treble strings.And from our totterd sailes, ragges drop downe so,As from one hang'd in chaines, a yeare agoe.Even our Ordinance plac'd for our defence,Strive to breake loose, and scape away from thence.Pumping hath tir'd our men, and what's the gaine?Seas into seas throwne, we suck in againe;Hearing hath deaf'd our saylers; and if theyKnew how to heare, there's none knowes what to say.Compar'd to these stormes, death is but a qualme,Hell somewhat lightsome, and the'Bermuda calme.Darknesse, lights elder brother, his birth-rightClaims o'r this world, and to heaven hath chas'd light.All things are one, and that one none can be,Since all formes, uniforme deformityDoth cover, so that wee, except God sayAnother Fiat, shall have no more day.So violent, yet long these furies bee,That though thine absence sterve me,'I wish not thee.

Words in this poem 16
shalt
2d per. sing. of Shall.
soothsay n.
A true saying; a proverb; a prophecy.
honour n.
Esteem due or paid to worth; high estimation; respect; consideration; reverence; veneration; manifestation of respect or reverence. [OE. honor, honour, onour, onur, OF. honor, onor, honur, onur, honour, onour, F. honneur, fr. L. honor, honos.]
deare
variant of Dere, v. t. & n.
leese v. t.
To hurt. B. Jonson. [Cf. f. léser, L.laesus, p. p. of laedere.]
withering a.
Tending to wither; causing to shrink or fade.
kist n.
A chest; hence, a coffin. Jamieson. [See Chest.]
farre n.
A young pig, or a litter of pigs. [See Farrow.]
anon adv.
Straightway; at once. [OE. anoon, anon, anan, lit., in one (moment), fr. AS. on in + an one. See On and One.]
wast
The second person singular of the verb be, in the indicative mood, imperfect tense; -- now used only in solemn or poetical style.
snapping
a. & n. from Snap, v. Snapping beetle. (Zoöl.) See Snap beetle, under Snap.
ordinance n.
Orderly arrangement; preparation; provision. [OE. ordenance, OF. ordenance, F. ordonnance. See Ordain, and cf. Ordnance, Ordonnance.]
defence n.
The act of defending, or the state of being defended; protection, as from violence or danger. [F. défense, OF. defense, fem., defens, masc., fr. L. defensa (cf. Fence.]
lightsome a.
Having light; lighted; not dark or gloomy; bright.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
sterve v. t.
To die, or cause to die; to perish. See Starve.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

To Mr. Christopher Brooke is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of John Donne, Volume 1 (of 2) Edited from the Old Editions and Numerous Manuscripts, Project Gutenberg ebook #48688; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

To Mr. Christopher Brooke is 73 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 79%). 91% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.3 syllables. 6 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 35% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ----AABBCCDDEEFF--GGHH----IIJJKKLLMMNN-OOPP--QQRR--SSTT--UUVVWWXXYYZ-aaZZ soe · know · eye · history · prideA · dignifi'dA · preheminenceB · excellenceB · haveC · graveC · soothsayD · wayD · windeE · findeE · threwF · viewF · leese · fees · sweetG · meeteG · weeH · seeH · countrimen · then · farre · warre · blewI · threwI · galeJ · assaileJ · sameK · nameK · menL · thenL · fullfillM · killM · notN · forgotN · day · allO · callO · moreP · beforeP · lye,'equally · dye · creepeQ · peepeQ · soR · knowR · there · feare · mastS · wastS · tacklingsT · stringsT · so · agoe · defenceU · thenceU · gaineV · againeV · theyW · sayW · qualmeX · calmeX · rightY · lightY · beZ · deformity · saya · daya · beeZ · theeZ
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Thou which art I, ('tis nothing to be soe)10·····/˘···
Thou which art still thy selfe, by these shalt know10··········
Part of our passage; And, a hand, or eye10··//˘·····
By Hilliard drawne, is worth an history,10·/˘····/˘˘
By a worse painter made; and (without pride)10···/˘·····
When by thy judgment they are dignifi'd,10···/˘··/˘·
My lines are such: 'Tis the preheminence10··········
Of friendship onely to'impute excellence.10·/˘/˘··/˘˘
England to whom we'owe, what we be, and have,10/˘········
Sad that her sonnes did seeke a forraine grave10··········
(For, Fates, or Fortunes drifts none can soothsay,10···/˘···/˘
Honour and misery have one face and way.)10/˘·/˘·····
From out her pregnant intrailes sigh'd a winde10···/˘·····
Which at th'ayres middle marble roome did finde10···/˘/˘···
Such strong resistance, that it selfe it threw10··˘/˘·····
Downeward againe; and so when it did view11···········
How in the port, our fleet deare time did leese,10····/·····
Withering like prisoners, which lye but for fees,10/˘·/˘·····
Mildly it kist our sailes, and, fresh and sweet,10/˘··/·····
As to a stomack sterv'd, whose insides meete,10·······˘/·
Meate comes, it came; and swole our sailes, when wee11·······/···
So joyd, as Sara'her swelling joy'd to see.11······/˘···
But 'twas but so kinde, as our countrimen,10······/···
Which bring friends one dayes way, and leave them then.10··········
Then like two mighty Kings, which dwelling farre10···/˘··/˘·
Asunder, meet against a third to warre,10˘/˘·······
The South and West winds joyn'd, and, as they blew,10··········
Waves like a rowling trench before them threw.10··········
Sooner then you read this line, did the gale,10/˘········
Like shot, not fear'd till felt, our sailes assaile;11······/····
And what at first was call'd a gust, the same10··········
Hath now a stormes, anon a tempests name.10····˘/·/˘·
Ionas, I pitty thee, and curse those men,11˘/˘········
Who when the storm rag'd most, did wake thee then;10··········
Sleepe is paines easiest salue, and doth fullfill11···/˘˘/····
All offices of death, except to kill.10·/˘˘······
But when I wakt, I saw, that I saw not;10··········
I, and the Sunne, which should teach mee'had forgot11·········˘/
If'the world had lasted, now it had beene day.10···/˘·····
Thousands our noyses were, yet wee'mongst all10/˘/·······
Could none by his right name, but thunder call:10·······/˘·
Lightning was all our light, and it rain'd more10/˘··/·····
Then if the Sunne had drunke the sea before.10··········
Some coffin'd in their cabbins lye,'equally11········/˘˘
Griev'd that they are not dead, and yet must dye;10··········
And as sin-burd'ned soules from graves will creepe,10····˘·····
At the last day, some forth their cabbins peepe:10··········
And tremblingly'aske what newes, and doe heare so,10··········
Like jealous husbands, what they would not know.10·/˘/˘·····
Some sitting on the hatches, would seeme there,10·/˘··/˘···
With hideous gazing to feare away feare.10·/˘/˘··˘/·
Then note they the ships sicknesses, the Mast10·····/˘˘··
Shak'd with this ague, and the Hold and Wast10···/˘·····
With a salt dropsie clog'd, and all our tacklings11········//˘
Snapping, like too-high-stretched treble strings.10/˘····˘/˘·
And from our totterd sailes, ragges drop downe so,10··/·······
As from one hang'd in chaines, a yeare agoe.10··········
Even our Ordinance plac'd for our defence,10///˘˘··/˘/
Strive to breake loose, and scape away from thence.10······˘/··
Pumping hath tir'd our men, and what's the gaine?10/˘·//·····
Seas into seas throwne, we suck in againe;10··········
Hearing hath deaf'd our saylers; and if they10/˘··//˘···
Knew how to heare, there's none knowes what to say.10··········
Compar'd to these stormes, death is but a qualme,10˘/········
Hell somewhat lightsome, and the'Bermuda calme.11·///˘······
Darknesse, lights elder brother, his birth-right10···/˘/˘···
Claims o'r this world, and to heaven hath chas'd light.10······/···
All things are one, and that one none can be,10··········
Since all formes, uniforme deformity10······˘/˘˘
Doth cover, so that wee, except God say10·/˘·······
Another Fiat, shall have no more day.10˘/˘/˘·····
So violent, yet long these furies bee,10·/˘˘···/˘·
That though thine absence sterve me,'I wish not thee.11···/˘······
Notes from the edition 27

Herbert Grierson's record of the readings of the early editions and manuscripts, from his Poems of John Donne (Oxford, 1912; Project Gutenberg #48688).

  1. Line 2 these 1633 and most MSS.: this 1635-69, O'F, S
  2. Line 4 an 1633: a 1635-69
  3. Line 7 such: Ed: such. 1633-69
  4. Line 11 soothsay, 1650-54: spelt Southsay 1633-39: gainsay 1669
  5. Line 12 and way. 1633, 1669: one way. 1635-54
  6. Line 18 lye] laie Q
  7. Line 19 fresh W: fresh, 1633-69
  8. Line 20 As W: As, 1633-69
  9. Line 23 'twas 1650-69: 'twas, 1633-39
  10. Line 30 fear'd] fear'd, 1633
  11. Line 37 not; Ed: not. 1633-69
  12. Line 38 I, and the Sunne, 1633-69 and most MSS.: yea, and the Sunne, Q
  13. Line 39 lasted, now 1633, 1669: lasted, yet 1635-54: Lasted yet, O'F
  14. Line 41 his] this 1669
  15. Line 43 before.] before; 1633
  16. Line 45 dye; Ed: dye. 1633-69
  17. Line 46 graves 1669, A25, B, D, H49, JC, L74, Lec, N, O'F, P, S, TCD, W: grave 1633-54, Cy
  18. Line 48 tremblingly 1633, A25, D, H49, HN, L74, Lec, N, TCD, W: trembling 1635-69, Cy, JC, O'F, P, S
  19. Line 49 Like 1633, D, H49, HN, JC, L74, Lec, N, TCD, W: As 1635-69
  20. Line 52 Then] There 1669
  21. Line 53 this] an 1635-69
  22. Line 55 too-high-stretched 1633, A25, Cy, D, H49, JC, L74, Lec, N, P, S, TCD, W (MS. spelling generally to and stretcht): too-too-high-stretch'd 1635-54: to too-high-stretch'd 1669, B, O'F
  23. Line 58 Even our Ordinance 1633 and MSS.: Yea even our Ordinance 1635-69
  24. Line 59 Strive 1633, D, H49, HN, JC, L74, Lec, S, TCD, W: Strives 1635-69, Chambers: Striv'd A25, B, Cy
  25. Line 65 Hell] Hell's S
  26. Line 66 elder A25, Cy, D, H49, HN, JC, L74, N, O'F, P, Q, S, TCD, W: eldest 1633-69, B, Lec
  27. Line 67 Claims 1635-69 and MSS.: Claim'd 1633 this 1633, D, H49, HN, L74, Lec, N, TCD: the 1635-69, A25, B, Cy, O'F, P, Q, S

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