The Comparison
As the sweet sweat of Roses in a Still,As that which from chaf'd muskats pores doth trill,As the Almighty Balme of th'early East,Such are the sweat drops of my Mistris breast,And on her brow her skin such lustre sets,They seeme no sweat drops, but pearle coronets.Ranke sweaty froth thy Mistresse's brow defiles,Like spermatique issue of ripe menstruous boiles,Or like the skumme, which, by needs lawlesse lawEnforc'd, Sanserra's starved men did drawFrom parboild shooes, and bootes, and all the restWhich were with any soveraigne fatnes blest,And like vile lying stones in saffrond tinne,Or warts, or wheales, they hang upon her skinne.Round as the world's her head, on every side,Like to the fatall Ball which fell on Ide,Or that whereof God had such jealousie,As, for the ravishing thereof we die.Thy head is like a rough-hewne statue of jeat,Where marks for eyes, nose, mouth, are yet scarce set;Like the first Chaos, or flat seeming faceOf Cynthia, when th'earths shadowes her embrace.Like Proserpines white beauty-keeping chest,Or Joues best fortunes urne, is her faire brest.Thine's like worme eaten trunkes, cloth'd in seals skin,Or grave, that's dust without, and stinke within.And like that slender stalke, at whose end standsThe wood-bine quivering, are her armes and hands.Like rough bark'd elmboughes, or the russet skinOf men late scurg'd for madnes, or for sinne,Like Sun-parch'd quarters on the citie gate,Such is thy tann'd skins lamentable state.And like a bunch of ragged carrets standThe short swolne fingers of thy gouty hand.Then like the Chymicks masculine equall fire,Which in the Lymbecks warme wombe doth inspireInto th'earths worthlesse durt a soule of gold,Such cherishing heat her best lov'd part doth hold.Thine's like the dread mouth of a fired gunne,Or like hot liquid metalls newly runneInto clay moulds, or like to that ÆtnaWhere round about the grasse is burnt away.Are not your kisses then as filthy, and more,As a worme sucking an invenom'd sore?Doth not thy fearefull hand in feeling quake,As one which gath'ring flowers, still feares a snake?Is not your last act harsh, and violent,As when a Plough a stony ground doth rent?So kisse good Turtles, so devoutly niceAre Priests in handling reverent sacrifice,And such in searching wounds the Surgeon isAs wee, when wee embrace, or touch, or kisse.Leave her, and I will leave comparing thus,She, and comparisons are odious.
Words in this poem
- lustre n.
- A period of five years; a lustrum. [L. lustrum: cf. F. lustre.]
- sweaty a.
- Moist with sweat; as, a sweaty skin; a sweaty garment.
- menstruous a.
- Having the monthly flow or discharge; menstruating. [L. menstruus, fr. mensis month. Cf. Menstruum.]
- needs adv.
- Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]
- skinne n.
- The external membranous integument of an animal. [Icel. skinn; akin to Sw. skinn, Dan. skind, AS. scinn, G. schined to skin.]
- fatall a.
- Proceeding from, or appointed by, fate or destiny; necessary; inevitable. [L. fatalis, fr. fatum: cf. F. fatal. See Fate.]
- whereof adv.
- Of which; of whom; formerly, also, with which; -- used relatively.
- ravishing a.
- Rapturous; transporting.
- scarce a.
- Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
- chaos n.
- An empty, immeasurable space; a yawning chasm. [L. chaos chaos (in senses 1 & 2), Gr. Chasm.]
- sinne adv.
- Old form of Since. [Obs. or Prov.Eng. & Scot.]
- devoutly adv.
- In a devout and reverent manner; with devout emotions; piously.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Comparison is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of John Donne, Volume 1 (of 2) Edited from the Old Editions and Numerous Manuscripts, Project Gutenberg ebook #48688; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
The Comparison is 54 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 74% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 82%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 22% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AA--BB--CCDDEEFF----GGHHIIJJIIKKLL--MMNN--OOPPQQRR-RRR stillA · trillA · east · breast · setsB · coronetsB · defiles · boiles · lawC · drawC · restD · blestD · tinneE · skinneE · sideF · ideF · jealousie · die · jeat · set · faceG · embraceG · chestH · brestH · skinI · withinI · standsJ · handsJ · skinI · sinneI · gateK · stateK · standL · handL · fire · inspire · goldM · holdM · gunneN · runneN · ætna · away · moreO · soreO · quakeP · snakeP · violentQ · rentQ · niceR · sacrificeR · is · kisseR · thusR · odiousR
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| As the sweet sweat of Roses in a Still, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| As that which from chaf'd muskats pores doth trill, | 10 | ·········· |
| As the Almighty Balme of th'early East, | 10 | ··˘/˘····· |
| Such are the sweat drops of my Mistris breast, | 10 | ·········· |
| And on her brow her skin such lustre sets, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| They seeme no sweat drops, but pearle coronets. | 10 | ·······/˘/ |
| Ranke sweaty froth thy Mistresse's brow defiles, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| Like spermatique issue of ripe menstruous boiles, | 12 | ····/˘··/˘˘· |
| Or like the skumme, which, by needs lawlesse law | 10 | ·········· |
| Enforc'd, Sanserra's starved men did draw | 10 | ˘/····˘··· |
| From parboild shooes, and bootes, and all the rest | 10 | ·········· |
| Which were with any soveraigne fatnes blest, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| And like vile lying stones in saffrond tinne, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Or warts, or wheales, they hang upon her skinne. | 10 | ·········· |
| Round as the world's her head, on every side, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Like to the fatall Ball which fell on Ide, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Or that whereof God had such jealousie, | 10 | ·········· |
| As, for the ravishing thereof we die. | 10 | ···/˘˘···· |
| Thy head is like a rough-hewne statue of jeat, | 11 | ·······/··· |
| Where marks for eyes, nose, mouth, are yet scarce set; | 10 | ·········· |
| Like the first Chaos, or flat seeming face | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Of Cynthia, when th'earths shadowes her embrace. | 10 | ·/˘··/··˘/ |
| Like Proserpines white beauty-keeping chest, | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Or Joues best fortunes urne, is her faire brest. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Thine's like worme eaten trunkes, cloth'd in seals skin, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Or grave, that's dust without, and stinke within. | 10 | ·········· |
| And like that slender stalke, at whose end stands | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| The wood-bine quivering, are her armes and hands. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Like rough bark'd elmboughes, or the russet skin | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Of men late scurg'd for madnes, or for sinne, | 9 | ········· |
| Like Sun-parch'd quarters on the citie gate, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Such is thy tann'd skins lamentable state. | 10 | ·····˘/˘˘· |
| And like a bunch of ragged carrets stand | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| The short swolne fingers of thy gouty hand. | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Then like the Chymicks masculine equall fire, | 10 | ·····/˘/˘/ |
| Which in the Lymbecks warme wombe doth inspire | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Into th'earths worthlesse durt a soule of gold, | 10 | ·········· |
| Such cherishing heat her best lov'd part doth hold. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Thine's like the dread mouth of a fired gunne, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Or like hot liquid metalls newly runne | 10 | ···/˘///˘· |
| Into clay moulds, or like to that Ætna | 9 | ········· |
| Where round about the grasse is burnt away. | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Are not your kisses then as filthy, and more, | 11 | ···/˘··/˘·· |
| As a worme sucking an invenom'd sore? | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Doth not thy fearefull hand in feeling quake, | 11 | ········/˘· |
| As one which gath'ring flowers, still feares a snake? | 10 | ·····/···· |
| Is not your last act harsh, and violent, | 10 | ·······/˘˘ |
| As when a Plough a stony ground doth rent? | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| So kisse good Turtles, so devoutly nice | 10 | ···/˘·˘/˘· |
| Are Priests in handling reverent sacrifice, | 10 | ···/˘/˘/˘· |
| And such in searching wounds the Surgeon is | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| As wee, when wee embrace, or touch, or kisse. | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| Leave her, and I will leave comparing thus, | 10 | ······˘/˘· |
| She, and comparisons are odious. | 10 | ··˘/˘˘·/˘˘ |
Notes from the edition 15
Herbert Grierson's record of the readings of the early editions and manuscripts, from his Poems of John Donne (Oxford, 1912; Project Gutenberg #48688).
- Line 2 muskats] muskets 1669
- Line 4 breast, 1635-69: breast. 1633
- Line 6 coronets. 1633-69, A18, B, Cy, L74, M, N, O'F, S96, TC: carcanets. A25, C, JC, S, W: carolettes. P
- Line 8 boiles, Ed: boiles. 1633-69: in MSS. generally spelt as pronounced, biles or byles
- Line 13 vile lying stones 1635-54 and MSS.: vile stones lying 1633, 1669
- Line 14 they hang A18, B, JC, L74, M, N, O'F (altered to it), S, TC, W: it hangs 1633-69
- Line 19 a] om. 1635-39
- Line 26 grave] grav'd 1669
- Line 28 hands. W: hands, 1633-69
- Line 34 thy gouty hand. 1635-69, A18, A25, B, L74, N, O'F, P, S96, TC, W (hand; 1635-69): her gouty hand; 1633, JC, S: thy mistress hand; 1669
- Line 37 durt 1635-69: part 1633, from next line
- Line 46 feares] fear'd A18, L74, N, O'F, TC, W
- Line 48 when 1635-69 and MSS.: where 1633
- Line 50 Are Priests ... sacrifice,] A Priest is in his handling Sacrifice, 1669
- Line 51 such A18, A25, B, JC, L74, N, O'F, P, S, S96, TC, W: nice 1633-69
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