Loves Progress
Who ever loves, if he do not proposeThe right true end of love, he's one that goesTo sea for nothing but to make him sick:Love is a bear-whelp born, if we o're lickOur love, and force it new strange shapes to take,We erre, and of a lump a monster make.Were not a Calf a monster that were grownFace'd like a man, though better then his own?Perfection is in unitie: preferrOne woman first, and then one thing in her.I, when I value gold, may think uponThe ductilness, the application,The wholsomness, the ingenuitie,From rust, from soil, from fire ever free:But if I love it, 'tis because 'tis madeBy our new nature (Use) the soul of trade.All these in women we might think upon(If women had them) and yet love but one.Can men more injure women then to sayThey love them for that, by which they're not they?Makes virtue woman? must I cool my bloudTill I both be, and find one wise and good?May barren Angels love so. But if weMake love to woman; virtue is not she:As beauty'is not nor wealth: He that strayes thusFrom her to hers, is more adulterous,Then if he took her maid. Search every spheareAnd firmament, our Cupid is not there:He's an infernal god and under ground,With Pluto dwells, where gold and fire abound:Men to such Gods, their sacrificing ColesDid not in Altars lay, but pits and holes.Although we see Celestial bodies moveAbove the earth, the earth we Till and love:So we her ayres contemplate, words and heart,And virtues; but we love the Centrique part.Nor is the soul more worthy, or more fitFor love, then this, as infinite as it.But in attaining this desired placeHow much they erre; that set out at the face?The hair a Forest is of Ambushes,Of springes, snares, fetters and manacles:The brow becalms us when 'tis smooth and plain,And when 'tis wrinckled, shipwracks us again.Smooth, 'tis a Paradice, where we would haveImmortal stay, and wrinkled 'tis our grave.The Nose (like to the first Meridian) runsNot 'twixt an East and West, but 'twixt two suns;It leaves a Cheek, a rosie HemisphereOn either side, and then directs us whereUpon the Islands fortunate we fall,(Not faynte Canaries, but Ambrosiall)Her swelling lips; To which when wee are come,We anchor there, and think our selves at home,For they seem all: there Syrens songs, and thereWise Delphick Oracles do fill the ear;There in a Creek where chosen pearls do swell,The Remora, her cleaving tongue doth dwell.These, and the glorious Promontory, her ChinOre past; and the streight Hellespont betweeneThe Sestos and Abydos of her breasts,(Not of two Lovers, but two Loves the neasts)Succeeds a boundless sea, but yet thine eyeSome Island moles may scattered there descry;And Sailing towards her India, in that wayShall at her fair Atlantick Navell stay;Though thence the Current be thy Pilot made,Yet ere thou be where thou wouldst be embay'd,Thou shalt upon another Forest set,Where many Shipwrack, and no further get.When thou art there, consider what this chaceMispent by thy beginning at the face.Rather set out below; practice my Art,Some Symetry the foot hath with that partWhich thou dost seek, and is thy Map for thatLovely enough to stop, but not stay at:Least subject to disguise and change it is;Men say the Devil never can change his.It is the Emblem that hath figuredFirmness; 'tis the first part that comes to bed.Civilitie we see refin'd: the kissWhich at the face began, transplanted is,Since to the hand, since to the Imperial knee,Now at the Papal foot delights to be:If Kings think that the nearer way, and doRise from the foot, Lovers may do so too;For as free Spheres move faster far then canBirds, whom the air resists, so may that manWhich goes this empty and Ætherial way,Then if at beauties elements he stay.Rich Nature hath in women wisely madeTwo purses, and their mouths aversely laid:They then, which to the lower tribute owe,That way which that Exchequer looks, must go:He which doth not, his error is as great,As who by Clyster gave the Stomack meat.
Words in this poem 19
- propose v. i.
- To speak; to converse.
- whelp n.
- One of the young of a dog or a beast of prey; a puppy; a cub; as, a lion's whelps. [AS. hwelp; akin to D. welp, G. & OHG. welf, Icel. hvelpr, Dan. hvalp, Sw. valp.]
- wealth n.
- Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
- adulterous a.
- Guilty of, or given to, adultery; pertaining to adultery; illicit.
- firmament n.
- Fixed foundation; established basis. [L. firmamentum, fr. firmare to make firm: cf. F. firmament. See Firm, v. & a.]
- cupid
- The god of love, son of Venus; usually represented as a naked, winged boy with bow and arrow. [L.Cupido, fr. cupido desire, desire of love, fr. cupidus. See Cupidity.]
- contemplate v. t.
- To look at on all sides or in all its bearings; to view or consider with continued attention; to regard with deliberate care; to meditate on; to study. [L. contemplatus, p.p. of contemplari to contemplate; con- + templum a space for observation marked out by the augur. See Temple.]
- ambrosiall a.
- Consisting of, or partaking of the nature of, ambrosia; delighting the taste or smell; delicious.
- remora n.
- Delay; obstacle; hindrance. [L.: cf. F. rémora.]
- dwell v. i.
- To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
- glorious a.
- Exhibiting attributes, qualities, or acts that are worthy of or receive glory; noble; praiseworthy; excellent; splendid; illustrious; inspiring admiration; as, glorious deeds. [OF. glorios, glorious, F. glorieux, fr. L. gloriosus. See Glory, n.]
- hellespont n.
- A narrow strait between Europe and Asia, now called the Daradanelles. It connects the Ægean Sea and the sea of Marmora.
- descry
- , Discovery or view, as of an army seen at a distance.
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- navell n.
- A mark or depression in the middle of the abdomen; the umbilicus. [AS. nafela, fr. nafu nave; akin to D. navel, G. nabel, OHG. nabolo, Icel. nafli, Dan. navle, Sw. nafle, L. umbilicus, Gr. n. *260. See Nave hub, and cf. Omphali]
- shalt
- 2d per. sing. of Shall.
- chace v. t.
- To pursue. See Chase v. t.
- therial a.
- Theriac. Holland.
- aversely adv.
- Backward; in a backward direction; as, emitted aversely.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
Loves Progress is 96 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 81% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 36% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBCCDDEEDD--FF--GG--HHII--JJKKLLMMNNOO----PPQQRRSSTTUUVV--WWXXYYZZaabbccddeeff-egghhiijjkkll-- proposeA · goesA · sickB · lickB · takeC · makeC · grownD · ownD · preferrE · herE · uponD · applicationD · ingenuitie · free · madeF · tradeF · upon · one · sayG · theyG · bloud · good · weH · sheH · thusI · adulterousI · spheare · there · groundJ · aboundJ · colesK · holesK · moveL · loveL · heartM · partM · fitN · itN · placeO · faceO · ambushes · manacles · plain · again · haveP · graveP · runsQ · sunsQ · hemisphereR · whereR · fallS · ambrosiallS · comeT · homeT · thereU · earU · swellV · dwellV · chin · betweene · breastsW · neastsW · eyeX · descryX · wayY · stayY · madeZ · embay'dZ · seta · geta · chaceb · faceb · artc · partc · thatd · atd · ise · hise · figuredf · bedf · kiss · ise · kneeg · beg · doh · tooh · cani · mani · wayj · stayj · madek · laidk · owel · gol · great · meat
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Who ever loves, if he do not propose | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| The right true end of love, he's one that goes | 10 | ·········· |
| To sea for nothing but to make him sick: | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Love is a bear-whelp born, if we o're lick | 10 | ·········· |
| Our love, and force it new strange shapes to take, | 10 | /········· |
| We erre, and of a lump a monster make. | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Were not a Calf a monster that were grown | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Face'd like a man, though better then his own? | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Perfection is in unitie: preferr | 10 | ˘/˘·····˘/ |
| One woman first, and then one thing in her. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| I, when I value gold, may think upon | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| The ductilness, the application, | 9 | ······˘/˘ |
| The wholsomness, the ingenuitie, | 9 | ········· |
| From rust, from soil, from fire ever free: | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| But if I love it, 'tis because 'tis made | 10 | ·········· |
| By our new nature (Use) the soul of trade. | 10 | ·/·/˘····· |
| All these in women we might think upon | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| (If women had them) and yet love but one. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Can men more injure women then to say | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| They love them for that, by which they're not they? | 10 | ·········· |
| Makes virtue woman? must I cool my bloud | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Till I both be, and find one wise and good? | 10 | ·········· |
| May barren Angels love so. But if we | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Make love to woman; virtue is not she: | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| As beauty'is not nor wealth: He that strayes thus | 10 | ·········· |
| From her to hers, is more adulterous, | 10 | ······˘/˘˘ |
| Then if he took her maid. Search every spheare | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| And firmament, our Cupid is not there: | 10 | ·/˘˘//˘··· |
| He's an infernal god and under ground, | 10 | ··˘/˘····· |
| With Pluto dwells, where gold and fire abound: | 10 | ·/˘····/˘/ |
| Men to such Gods, their sacrificing Coles | 10 | ·····/˘·˘· |
| Did not in Altars lay, but pits and holes. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Although we see Celestial bodies move | 10 | ····˘/˘/˘· |
| Above the earth, the earth we Till and love: | 10 | ·········· |
| So we her ayres contemplate, words and heart, | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| And virtues; but we love the Centrique part. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Nor is the soul more worthy, or more fit | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| For love, then this, as infinite as it. | 10 | ·····/˘˘·· |
| But in attaining this desired place | 10 | ··˘/˘·˘/˘· |
| How much they erre; that set out at the face? | 10 | ·········· |
| The hair a Forest is of Ambushes, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘˘ |
| Of springes, snares, fetters and manacles: | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| The brow becalms us when 'tis smooth and plain, | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| And when 'tis wrinckled, shipwracks us again. | 10 | ····˘···˘/ |
| Smooth, 'tis a Paradice, where we would have | 10 | ·········· |
| Immortal stay, and wrinkled 'tis our grave. | 10 | ˘/˘··/˘·/· |
| The Nose (like to the first Meridian) runs | 10 | ······˘/˘· |
| Not 'twixt an East and West, but 'twixt two suns; | 10 | ·········· |
| It leaves a Cheek, a rosie Hemisphere | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| On either side, and then directs us where | 10 | ·/˘···˘/·· |
| Upon the Islands fortunate we fall, | 10 | ···/˘/˘˘·· |
| (Not faynte Canaries, but Ambrosiall) | 9 | ··˘/˘·˘/˘ |
| Her swelling lips; To which when wee are come, | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| We anchor there, and think our selves at home, | 10 | ·/˘···/··· |
| For they seem all: there Syrens songs, and there | 10 | ·········· |
| Wise Delphick Oracles do fill the ear; | 10 | ···/˘˘···· |
| There in a Creek where chosen pearls do swell, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| The Remora, her cleaving tongue doth dwell. | 10 | ·/˘˘·/˘··· |
| These, and the glorious Promontory, her Chin | 11 | ···/˘/˘˘˘·· |
| Ore past; and the streight Hellespont betweene | 10 | ·····/˘˘·· |
| The Sestos and Abydos of her breasts, | 10 | ·········· |
| (Not of two Lovers, but two Loves the neasts) | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Succeeds a boundless sea, but yet thine eye | 10 | ˘/·/˘····· |
| Some Island moles may scattered there descry; | 10 | ·/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| And Sailing towards her India, in that way | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| Shall at her fair Atlantick Navell stay; | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Though thence the Current be thy Pilot made, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Yet ere thou be where thou wouldst be embay'd, | 10 | ·········· |
| Thou shalt upon another Forest set, | 10 | ····˘/˘/˘· |
| Where many Shipwrack, and no further get. | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| When thou art there, consider what this chace | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| Mispent by thy beginning at the face. | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| Rather set out below; practice my Art, | 10 | /˘····/˘·· |
| Some Symetry the foot hath with that part | 10 | ·········· |
| Which thou dost seek, and is thy Map for that | 10 | ·········· |
| Lovely enough to stop, but not stay at: | 10 | /˘˘/······ |
| Least subject to disguise and change it is; | 10 | ·/˘·˘/···· |
| Men say the Devil never can change his. | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| It is the Emblem that hath figured | 10 | ···/˘··/˘˘ |
| Firmness; 'tis the first part that comes to bed. | 10 | /˘········ |
| Civilitie we see refin'd: the kiss | 10 | ······˘/·· |
| Which at the face began, transplanted is, | 10 | ····˘/˘/˘· |
| Since to the hand, since to the Imperial knee, | 11 | ·······˘/˘· |
| Now at the Papal foot delights to be: | 10 | ···/˘·˘/·· |
| If Kings think that the nearer way, and do | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Rise from the foot, Lovers may do so too; | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| For as free Spheres move faster far then can | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Birds, whom the air resists, so may that man | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| Which goes this empty and Ætherial way, | 10 | ···/˘·/˘˘· |
| Then if at beauties elements he stay. | 10 | ···/˘/˘˘·· |
| Rich Nature hath in women wisely made | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| Two purses, and their mouths aversely laid: | 10 | ·/˘···˘/˘· |
| They then, which to the lower tribute owe, | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| That way which that Exchequer looks, must go: | 10 | ····/·˘··· |
| He which doth not, his error is as great, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| As who by Clyster gave the Stomack meat. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
Notes from the edition 30
Herbert Grierson's record of the readings of the early editions and manuscripts, from his Poems of John Donne (Oxford, 1912; Project Gutenberg #48688).
- Line 4 Love is a 1669: And Love's a MSS.
- Line 5 strange 1661 and MSS.: strong 1669
- Line 11 I,] I 1669
- Line 14 ever 1669: for ever O'F, S, S96
- Line 17 these 1669 and MSS.: this 1661, Cy, P, Chambers
- Line 20 them] om. 1661
- Line 27 Then if he took] Then he that took 1661, B (takes), Cy, O'F, P, S
- Line 30 abound: Ed: abound, 1669
- Line 38 infinite] infinit 1669
- Line 40 erre 1661-69, S, S96: stray A18, A25, B, Cy, D, H49, JC, N, O'F, P, TC
- Line 42 springes, H49 and some MSS.: springs, 1669
- Line 47 first Meridian 1661 and MSS.: sweet Meridian 1669.
- Line 55 For they seem all: there 1669, A18, B, D, H49, JC, Lec, N, S, TC: For they sing all their 1661, Cy, P
- Line 59 the glorious Promontory,] brackets and no comma, 1669
- Line 60 Ore past; ... betweene 1661 and MSS.: Being past the Straits of Hellespont between 1669
- Line 62 Loves] loves 1669
- Line 63 yet] that D, H49, Lec, and other MSS.
- Line 65 Sailing] Sailng 1669
- Line 66 Navell] Naval 1669
- Line 68 wouldst A18, A25, B, Cy, H49, JC, Lec, N, O'F, P, S, S96, TC: shouldst 1669
- Line 70 many 1669: some doe A18, A25, B, Cy, D, H49, JC, Lec, N, P
- Line 73 my 1669, A25, B, Cy, D, H49, N, O'F, P, S, S96, TCD: thy Chambers: thine A18, TCC
- Line 80 the] bis 1669
- Line 81 Civilitie, we see, refin'd the kisse Which at the face begonne, transplanted is D, H49, Lec
- Line 83 Imperial] imperial 1669
- Line 86 too;] too. 1669
- Line 90 elements 1661 and MSS.: enemies 1669
- Line 91 hath] Chambers omits
- Line 93 owe,] owe 1669
- Line 96 Clyster gave A18, D, H49, Lec, N, TC: glister gives 1669
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