Goodfriday, 1613. Riding Westward
Let mans Soule be a Spheare, and then, in this,The intelligence that moves, devotion is,And as the other Spheares, by being growneSubject to forraigne motions, lose their owne,And being by others hurried every day,Scarce in a yeare their naturall forme obey:Pleasure or businesse, so, our Soules admitFor their first mover, and are whirld by it.Hence is't, that I am carryed towards the WestThis day, when my Soules forme bends toward the East.There I should see a Sunne, by rising set,And by that setting endlesse day beget;But that Christ on this Crosse, did rise and fall,Sinne had eternally benighted all.Yet dare I'almost be glad, I do not seeThat spectacle of too much weight for mee.Who sees Gods face, that is selfe life, must dye;What a death were it then to see God dye?It made his owne Lieutenant Nature shrinke,It made his footstoole crack, and the Sunne winke.Could I behold those hands which span the Poles,And turne all spheares at once, peirc'd with those holes?Could I behold that endlesse height which isZenith to us, and our Antipodes,Humbled below us? or that blood which isThe seat of all our Soules, if not of his,Made durt of dust, or that flesh which was worneBy God, for his apparell, rag'd, and torne?If on these things I durst not looke, durst IUpon his miserable mother cast mine eye,Who was Gods partner here, and furnish'd thusHalfe of that Sacrifice, which ransom'd us?Though these things, as I ride, be from mine eye,They'are present yet unto my memory,For that looks towards them; and thou look'st towards mee,O Saviour, as thou hang'st upon the tree;I turne my backe to thee, but to receiveCorrections, till thy mercies bid thee leave.O thinke mee worth thine anger, punish mee,Burne off my rusts, and my deformity,Restore thine Image, so much, by thy grace,That thou may'st know mee, and I'll turne my face.
Words in this poem
- scarce a.
- Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
- naturall n.
- A native; an aboriginal. Sir W. Raleigh.
- crosse n.
- The implement with which the ball is thrown and caught in the game of lacrosse.
- sinne adv.
- Old form of Since. [Obs. or Prov.Eng. & Scot.]
- eternally adv.
- In an eternal manner.
- antipodes n.
- Those who live on the side of the globe diametrically opposite.
- apparell v. t.
- To make or get (something) ready; to prepare. [OF. apareiller.]
- saviour n.
- One who saves, preserves, or delivers from destruction or danger. [OE. saveour, OF. salveor, F. sauveur, fr. L. salvator to save. See Save, v.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Goodfriday, 1613. Riding Westward is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of John Donne, Volume 1 (of 2) Edited from the Old Editions and Numerous Manuscripts, Project Gutenberg ebook #48688; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
Goodfriday, 1613. Riding Westward is 42 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 76% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 82%).
See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 --AABBCC--DDEEFFFFGGHHI-IIJJKKLLK-KKMMK-NN this · is · growneA · owneA · dayB · obeyB · admitC · itC · west · east · setD · begetD · fallE · allE · seeF · meeF · dyeF · dyeF · shrinkeG · winkeG · polesH · holesH · isI · antipodes · isI · hisI · worneJ · torneJ · iK · eyeK · thusL · usL · eyeK · memory · meeK · treeK · receiveM · leaveM · meeK · deformity · graceN · faceN
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Let mans Soule be a Spheare, and then, in this, | 10 | ·········· |
| The intelligence that moves, devotion is, | 10 | ·˘/˘··˘/˘· |
| And as the other Spheares, by being growne | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Subject to forraigne motions, lose their owne, | 10 | ˘/···/˘··· |
| And being by others hurried every day, | 10 | ·/·/˘/˘/˘· |
| Scarce in a yeare their naturall forme obey: | 11 | ·····/˘/˘˘/ |
| Pleasure or businesse, so, our Soules admit | 11 | /˘·····/·˘/ |
| For their first mover, and are whirld by it. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Hence is't, that I am carryed towards the West | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| This day, when my Soules forme bends toward the East. | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| There I should see a Sunne, by rising set, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| And by that setting endlesse day beget; | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| But that Christ on this Crosse, did rise and fall, | 10 | ·········· |
| Sinne had eternally benighted all. | 10 | ··˘/˘˘˘/˘· |
| Yet dare I'almost be glad, I do not see | 10 | ·········· |
| That spectacle of too much weight for mee. | 10 | ·/˘˘······ |
| Who sees Gods face, that is selfe life, must dye; | 10 | ·········· |
| What a death were it then to see God dye? | 10 | ·········· |
| It made his owne Lieutenant Nature shrinke, | 10 | ····˘/˘/˘· |
| It made his footstoole crack, and the Sunne winke. | 11 | ··········· |
| Could I behold those hands which span the Poles, | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| And turne all spheares at once, peirc'd with those holes? | 10 | ·········· |
| Could I behold that endlesse height which is | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| Zenith to us, and our Antipodes, | 11 | /˘···/˘˘/˘˘ |
| Humbled below us? or that blood which is | 10 | /˘········ |
| The seat of all our Soules, if not of his, | 10 | ····/····· |
| Made durt of dust, or that flesh which was worne | 10 | ·········· |
| By God, for his apparell, rag'd, and torne? | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| If on these things I durst not looke, durst I | 10 | ·········· |
| Upon his miserable mother cast mine eye, | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Who was Gods partner here, and furnish'd thus | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Halfe of that Sacrifice, which ransom'd us? | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Though these things, as I ride, be from mine eye, | 10 | ·········· |
| They'are present yet unto my memory, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘˘ |
| For that looks towards them; and thou look'st towards mee, | 10 | ·········· |
| O Saviour, as thou hang'st upon the tree; | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| I turne my backe to thee, but to receive | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Corrections, till thy mercies bid thee leave. | 10 | ˘/˘··/˘··· |
| O thinke mee worth thine anger, punish mee, | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Burne off my rusts, and my deformity, | 10 | ······˘/˘˘ |
| Restore thine Image, so much, by thy grace, | 10 | ˘/·/˘····· |
| That thou may'st know mee, and I'll turne my face. | 10 | ·········· |
Notes from the edition 7
Herbert Grierson's record of the readings of the early editions and manuscripts, from his Poems of John Donne (Oxford, 1912; Project Gutenberg #48688).
- Line 4 motions A18, B, Cy, D, H49, Lec, N, O'F, S, S96, TC: motion, 1633-69
- Line 8 and] bis 1650-54
- Line 10 toward 1633: do. or towards MSS.: to 1635-69, O'F
- Line 12 beget 1633: beget. 1635-69, Chambers
- Line 13 this Crosse, 1633, A18, D, H49, Lec, O'F, S, S96, TCC: his Crosse, 1635-69, B, Cy, N, TCD
- Line 16 too] two 1639-69
- Line 40 rusts, 1633, B, Cy, D, H49, Lec, N, O'F, S96, TCD: rust, 1635-69, A18, S, TCC
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