Elegie on the Lady Marckham
Man is the World, and death th'Ocean,To which God gives the lower parts of man.This Sea invirons all, and though as yetGod hath set markes, and bounds, twixt us and it,Yet doth it rore, and gnaw, and still pretend,And breaks our bankes, when ere it takes a friend.Then our land waters (teares of passion) vent;Our waters, then, above our firmament,(Teares which our Soule doth for her sins let fall)Take all a brackish taft, and Funerall,And even these teares, which should wash sin, are sin.We, after Gods Noe, drowne our world againe.Nothing but man of all invenom'd thingsDoth worke upon itselfe, with inborne stings.Teares are false Spectacles, we cannot seeThrough passions mist, what wee are, or what shee.In her this sea of death hath made no breach,But as the tide doth wash the slimie beach,And leaves embroder'd workes upon the sand,So is her flesh refin'd by deaths cold hand.As men of China,'after an ages stay,Do take up Porcelane, where they buried Clay;So at this grave, her limbecke, which refinesThe Diamonds, Rubies, Saphires, Pearles, and Mines,Of which this flesh was, her soule shall inspireFlesh of such stuffe, as God, when his last fireAnnuls this world, to recompence it, shall,Make and name then, th'Elixar of this All.They say, the sea, when it gaines, loseth too;If carnall Death (the yonger brother) doeUsurpe the body,'our soule, which subject isTo th'elder death, by sinne, is freed by this;They perish both, when they attempt the just;For, graves our trophies are, and both deaths dust.So, unobnoxious now, she'hath buried both;For, none to death sinnes, that to sinne is loth,Nor doe they die, which are not loth to die;So hath she this, and that virginity.Grace was in her extremely diligent,That kept her from sinne, yet made her repent.Of what small spots pure white complaines! Alas,How little poyson cracks a christall glasse!She sinn'd, but just enough to let us seeThat God's word must be true, All, sinners be.Soe much did zeale her conscience rarefieThat, extreme truth lack'd little of a lye,Making omissions, acts; laying the touchOf sinne, on things that sometimes may be such.As Moses Cherubines, whose natures doeSurpasse all speed, by him are winged too:So would her soule, already'in heaven, seeme then,To clyme by teares, the common staires of men.How fit she was for God, I am contentTo speake, that Death his vaine hast may repent.How fit for us, how even and how sweet,How good in all her titles, and how meet,To have reform'd this forward heresie,That women can no parts of friendship bee;How Morall, how Divine shall not be told,Lest they that heare her vertues, thinke her old:And lest we take Deaths part, and make him gladOf such a prey, and to his tryumph adde.
Words in this poem
- firmament n.
- Fixed foundation; established basis. [L. firmamentum, fr. firmare to make firm: cf. F. firmament. See Firm, v. & a.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- carnall a.
- Of or pertaining to the body or is appetites; animal; fleshly; sensual; given to sensual indulgence; lustful; human or worldly as opposed to spiritual. [L. carnalis, fr. caro, carnis, flesh; akin to Gr. kravya; cf. F. charnel, Of. also carnel. Cf. Charnel.]
- sinne adv.
- Old form of Since. [Obs. or Prov.Eng. & Scot.]
- repent a.
- Prostrate and rooting; -- said of stems. Gray. [L. repens, -entis, creeping, p. pr. of repere to creep.]
- conscience n.
- Knowledge of one's own thoughts or actions; consciousness. [F. conscience, fr. L. conscientia, fr. consciens, p.pr. of conscire to know, to be conscious; con- + scire to know. See Science.]
- hast
- , 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Elegie on the Lady Marckham is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of John Donne, Volume 1 (of 2) Edited from the Old Editions and Numerous Manuscripts, Project Gutenberg ebook #48688; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
Elegie on the Lady Marckham is 62 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 61% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 6 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 23% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ----AABBCC--DDEEFFGGHHII--------JJ----KKLLMM-MNN--OOPPQQ--RRSS th'ocean · man · yet · it · pretendA · friendA · ventB · firmamentB · fallC · funerallC · sin · againe · thingsD · stingsD · seeE · sheeE · breachF · beachF · sandG · handG · stayH · clayH · refinesI · minesI · inspire · fire · shall · all · too · doe · is · this · justJ · dustJ · both · loth · die · virginity · diligentK · repentK · alasL · glasseL · seeM · beM · rarefie · lyeM · touchN · suchN · doe · too · thenO · menO · contentP · repentP · sweetQ · meetQ · heresie · bee · toldR · oldR · gladS · addeS
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Man is the World, and death th'Ocean, | 8 | ········ |
| To which God gives the lower parts of man. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| This Sea invirons all, and though as yet | 10 | ·········· |
| God hath set markes, and bounds, twixt us and it, | 10 | ·········· |
| Yet doth it rore, and gnaw, and still pretend, | 10 | ········˘/ |
| And breaks our bankes, when ere it takes a friend. | 10 | ··/······· |
| Then our land waters (teares of passion) vent; | 10 | ·/·/˘··/˘· |
| Our waters, then, above our firmament, | 11 | //˘···/˘/˘˘ |
| (Teares which our Soule doth for her sins let fall) | 10 | ··/······· |
| Take all a brackish taft, and Funerall, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘˘ |
| And even these teares, which should wash sin, are sin. | 10 | ·/········ |
| We, after Gods Noe, drowne our world againe. | 10 | ······/··· |
| Nothing but man of all invenom'd things | 10 | /˘········ |
| Doth worke upon itselfe, with inborne stings. | 10 | ·········· |
| Teares are false Spectacles, we cannot see | 10 | ···/˘˘·/˘· |
| Through passions mist, what wee are, or what shee. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| In her this sea of death hath made no breach, | 10 | ·········· |
| But as the tide doth wash the slimie beach, | 10 | ·········· |
| And leaves embroder'd workes upon the sand, | 10 | ·········· |
| So is her flesh refin'd by deaths cold hand. | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| As men of China,'after an ages stay, | 11 | ···/˘···/˘· |
| Do take up Porcelane, where they buried Clay; | 11 | ········/˘· |
| So at this grave, her limbecke, which refines | 10 | ········˘/ |
| The Diamonds, Rubies, Saphires, Pearles, and Mines, | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Of which this flesh was, her soule shall inspire | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Flesh of such stuffe, as God, when his last fire | 11 | ·········/˘ |
| Annuls this world, to recompence it, shall, | 10 | /˘········ |
| Make and name then, th'Elixar of this All. | 10 | ·········· |
| They say, the sea, when it gaines, loseth too; | 10 | ·········· |
| If carnall Death (the yonger brother) doe | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| Usurpe the body,'our soule, which subject is | 11 | ···/˘/··˘/· |
| To th'elder death, by sinne, is freed by this; | 10 | ·········· |
| They perish both, when they attempt the just; | 10 | ·/˘···˘/·· |
| For, graves our trophies are, and both deaths dust. | 10 | ··//˘····· |
| So, unobnoxious now, she'hath buried both; | 11 | ········/˘· |
| For, none to death sinnes, that to sinne is loth, | 10 | ·········· |
| Nor doe they die, which are not loth to die; | 10 | ·········· |
| So hath she this, and that virginity. | 10 | ······˘/˘˘ |
| Grace was in her extremely diligent, | 10 | ····˘/˘/˘˘ |
| That kept her from sinne, yet made her repent. | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Of what small spots pure white complaines! Alas, | 10 | ······˘/˘/ |
| How little poyson cracks a christall glasse! | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| She sinn'd, but just enough to let us see | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| That God's word must be true, All, sinners be. | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Soe much did zeale her conscience rarefie | 11 | ······/˘··· |
| That, extreme truth lack'd little of a lye, | 10 | ·˘/··/˘··· |
| Making omissions, acts; laying the touch | 10 | /˘˘/˘·/˘·· |
| Of sinne, on things that sometimes may be such. | 10 | ·····˘/··· |
| As Moses Cherubines, whose natures doe | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| Surpasse all speed, by him are winged too: | 10 | ········˘· |
| So would her soule, already'in heaven, seeme then, | 10 | ·······/·· |
| To clyme by teares, the common staires of men. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| How fit she was for God, I am content | 10 | ········/˘ |
| To speake, that Death his vaine hast may repent. | 10 | ········˘/ |
| How fit for us, how even and how sweet, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| How good in all her titles, and how meet, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| To have reform'd this forward heresie, | 10 | ··˘/·/˘··· |
| That women can no parts of friendship bee; | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| How Morall, how Divine shall not be told, | 10 | ·/˘·˘/···· |
| Lest they that heare her vertues, thinke her old: | 10 | ·········· |
| And lest we take Deaths part, and make him glad | 10 | ·········· |
| Of such a prey, and to his tryumph adde. | 9 | ········· |
Notes from the edition 17
Herbert Grierson's record of the readings of the early editions and manuscripts, from his Poems of John Donne (Oxford, 1912; Project Gutenberg #48688).
- Line 8 firmament,] firmament. 1633
- Line 10 Funerall, Ed: Funerall. 1633-69
- Line 11 these D, H49, Lec: those 1633-69
- Line 16 mist] mistes Cy, L74, N, TCD
- Line 19 embroder'd 1635-54: embroderd 1633: embroider'd 1669
- Line 21 stay, Ed: stay 1633-69
- Line 25 which Ed: which, 1633-69
- Line 28 then, 1633: then 1635-39: them 1650-69
- Line 34 and both deaths dust. Ed: and both Deaths' dust. Grolier: and both, deaths dust. 1633: and both death's dust. 1635-69 and Chambers: and both dead dust. D, Cy, H40, H49, JC, Lec, S96. See note
- Line 36 loth, Ed: loth. 1633-69
- Line 37 die; Ed: die, 1633-69
- Line 44 omitted in 1633 between foot of one page and top of next
- Line 45 rarefie,] rectify, D, H40, H49, JC, Lec, S96
- Line 48 sometimes 1633 and MSS.: sometime 1635-69, and Chambers
- Line 52 teares,] tears Chambers
- Line 54 Death D: death 1633-69
- Line 62 tryumph 1633-69, A25, D, H40, Lec: triumphes A18, B, H49, JC, L74, N, O'F, P, S96, TC
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