A Valediction: Of my name, in the window

John Donne (1572–1631) · 1633

iambic tetrameter · 68 lines · from Poems

My name engrav'd herein,Doth contribute my firmnesse to this glasse,Which, ever since that charme, hath beeneAs hard, as that which grav'd it, was;Thine eye will give it price enough, to mockThe diamonds of either rock.

'Tis much that Glasse should beeAs all confessing, and through-shine as I,'Tis more, that it shewes thee to thee,And cleare reflects thee to thine eye.But all such rules, loves magique can undoe,Here you see mee, and I am you.

As no one point, nor dash,Which are but accessaries to this name,The showers and tempests can outwash,So shall all times finde mee the same;You this intirenesse better may fulfill,Who have the patterne with you still.

Or, if too hard and deepeThis learning be, for a scratch'd name to teach,It, as a given deaths head keepe,Lovers mortalitie to preach,Or thinke this ragged bony name to beeMy ruinous Anatomie.

Then, as all my soules bee,Emparadis'd in you, (in whom aloneI understand, and grow and see,)The rafters of my body, boneBeing still with you, the Muscle, Sinew, and Veine,Which tile this house, will come againe.

Till my returne, repaireAnd recompact my scattered body so.As all the vertuous powers which areFix'd in the starres, are said to flowInto such characters, as graved beeWhen these starres have supremacie:

So, since this name was cutWhen love and griefe their exaltation had,No doore 'gainst this names influence shut;As much more loving, as more sad,'Twill make thee; and thou shouldst, till I returne,Since I die daily, daily mourne.

When thy inconsiderate handFlings ope this casement, with my trembling name,To looke on one, whose wit or land,New battry to thy heart may frame,Then thinke this name alive, and that thou thusIn it offendst my Genius.

And when thy melted maid,Corrupted by thy Lover's gold, and page,His letter at thy pillow'hath laid,Disputed it, and tam'd thy rage,And thou begin'st to thaw towards him, for this,May my name step in, and hide his.

And if this treason goeTo an overt act, and that thou write againe;In superscribing, this name flowInto thy fancy, from the pane.So, in forgetting thou remembrest right,And unaware to mee shalt write.

But glasse, and lines must bee,No meanes our firme substantiall love to keepe;Neere death inflicts this lethargie,And this I murmure in my sleepe;Impute this idle talke, to that I goe,For dying men talke often so.

Disputed thou it, and tame thy rage.If thou to him begin'st to thaw for this,

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
fulfill v. t.
To fill up; to make full or complete. [OE. fulfillen, fulfullen, AS. fulfyllan; ful full + fyllan to fill. See Full, a., and Fill, v. t.]
sinew n.
A tendon or tendonous tissue. See Tendon. [OE. sinewe, senewe, AS. sinu, seonu; akin to D. zenuw, OHG. senawa, G. sehne, Icel. sin, Sw. sena, Dan. sene; cf. Skr. snava. sq. root290.]
recompact v. t.
To compact or join anew.
vertuous a.
Virtuous; powerful.
mourne n.
The armed or feruled end of a staff; in a sheephook, the end of the staff to which the hook is attached. Sir P. Sidney. [See 2d Morne.]
casement n.
A window sash opening on hinges affixed to the upright side of the frame into which it is fitted. (Poetically) A window. [Shortened fr. encasement. See Incase 1st Case, and cf. Incasement.]
thaw v. i.
To melt, dissolve, or become fluid; to soften; -- said of that which is frozen; as, the ice thaws.
overt a.
Open to view; public; apparent; manifest. [OF. overt, F. ouvert, p. p. of OF. ovrir, F. ouvrir, to open, of uncertain origin; cf. It. aprire, OIt. also oprire, L. aperire to open, operire to cover, deope]
pane n.
The narrow edge of a hammer head. See Peen. [F. panne.]
unaware a.
Not aware; not noticing; giving no heed; thoughtless; inattentive.
shalt
2d per. sing. of Shall.
substantiall a.
Belonging to substance; actually existing; real; as, substantial life. [F. substantiel, L. substantialis.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

A Valediction: Of my name, in the window is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of John Donne, Volume 1 (of 2) Edited from the Old Editions and Numerous Manuscripts, Project Gutenberg ebook #48688; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

A Valediction: Of my name, in the window is 68 lines in 12 stanzas. The commonest rhyme scheme is ABABCC, in 3 of the 12 stanzas; the rest vary or could not be confirmed. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ----AA herein · glasse · beene · was · mockA · rockA
  2. 2 ABAB-- beeA · iB · theeA · eyeB · undoe · you
  3. 3 ABABCC dashA · nameB · outwashA · sameB · fulfillC · stillC
  4. 4 ABAB-- deepeA · teachB · keepeA · preachB · bee · anatomie
  5. 5 ABAB-- beeA · aloneB · seeA · boneB · veine · againe
  6. 6 -A-A-- repaire · soA · are · flowA · bee · supremacie
  7. 7 ABABCC cutA · hadB · shutA · sadB · returneC · mourneC
  8. 8 ABABCC handA · nameB · landA · frameB · thusC · geniusC
  9. 9 ABAB-- maidA · pageB · laidA · rageB · this · his
  10. 10 A-A-BB goeA · againe · flowA · pane · rightB · writeB
  11. 11 -A-ABB bee · keepeA · lethargie · sleepeA · goeB · soB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
My name engrav'd herein,6··˘/˘/
Doth contribute my firmnesse to this glasse,10·˘/˘······
Which, ever since that charme, hath beene8·/˘·····
As hard, as that which grav'd it, was;8········
Thine eye will give it price enough, to mock10······˘/··
The diamonds of either rock.7·/˘·/˘·
'Tis much that Glasse should bee6······
As all confessing, and through-shine as I,10··˘/˘·····
'Tis more, that it shewes thee to thee,8········
And cleare reflects thee to thine eye.8··˘/····
But all such rules, loves magique can undoe,10··········
Here you see mee, and I am you.8········
As no one point, nor dash,6······
Which are but accessaries to this name,9·········
The showers and tempests can outwash,9·/˘·/˘···
So shall all times finde mee the same;8········
You this intirenesse better may fulfill,11······/˘·˘/
Who have the patterne with you still.8········
Or, if too hard and deepe6······
This learning be, for a scratch'd name to teach,10·/˘·······
It, as a given deaths head keepe,8···/˘···
Lovers mortalitie to preach,8/˘······
Or thinke this ragged bony name to bee10···/˘/˘···
My ruinous Anatomie.8·/˘˘····
Then, as all my soules bee,6······
Emparadis'd in you, (in whom alone10········˘/
I understand, and grow and see,)8··˘/····
The rafters of my body, bone8·/˘··/˘·
Being still with you, the Muscle, Sinew, and Veine,11/····/˘/˘··
Which tile this house, will come againe.8········
Till my returne, repaire6······
And recompact my scattered body so.10·····/˘/˘·
As all the vertuous powers which are10···/˘˘/˘··
Fix'd in the starres, are said to flow8········
Into such characters, as graved bee10···/˘˘··˘·
When these starres have supremacie:8········
So, since this name was cut6······
When love and griefe their exaltation had,10··········
No doore 'gainst this names influence shut;9·····/˘˘·
As much more loving, as more sad,8···/˘···
'Twill make thee; and thou shouldst, till I returne,10··········
Since I die daily, daily mourne.8···/˘/˘·
When thy inconsiderate hand8········
Flings ope this casement, with my trembling name,10···/˘··/˘·
To looke on one, whose wit or land,8········
New battry to thy heart may frame,8········
Then thinke this name alive, and that thou thus10····˘/····
In it offendst my Genius.7·····/˘
And when thy melted maid,6···/˘·
Corrupted by thy Lover's gold, and page,10˘/˘··/˘···
His letter at thy pillow'hath laid,9·/˘······
Disputed it, and tam'd thy rage,8˘/˘·····
And thou begin'st to thaw towards him, for this,10··········
May my name step in, and hide his.8········
And if this treason goe6···/˘·
To an overt act, and that thou write againe;11··˘/·······
In superscribing, this name flow8········
Into thy fancy, from the pane.8···/˘···
So, in forgetting thou remembrest right,10··˘/˘·˘/˘·
And unaware to mee shalt write.8··˘/····
But glasse, and lines must bee,6······
No meanes our firme substantiall love to keepe;10··/·˘/˘···
Neere death inflicts this lethargie,8··˘/····
And this I murmure in my sleepe;8········
Impute this idle talke, to that I goe,10˘/·/˘·····
For dying men talke often so.8·/˘··/˘·
Disputed thou it, and tame thy rage.9˘/˘······
If thou to him begin'st to thaw for this,10··········
Notes from the edition 20

Herbert Grierson's record of the readings of the early editions and manuscripts, from his Poems of John Donne (Oxford, 1912; Project Gutenberg #48688).

  1. Stanza 1, line 4 was; Ed: was, 1633-69
  2. Stanza 1, line 5 eye] eyes A18, B, Cy, JC, N, O'F, P, S, S96, TC
  3. Stanza 2, line 2 I, 1633-54: I 1669
  4. Stanza 2, line 6 am you.] see you. 1669
  5. Stanza 3, line 2 accessaries 1633-69, O'F, S: accessary A18, B, Cy, D, H40, H49, JC, Lec, N, P, S96, TC
  6. Stanza 3, line 3 tempests 1633, 1669: tempest 1635-54
  7. Stanza 4, line 1 Or, Ed: Or 1633-69
  8. Stanza 6, line 2 so. 1633-35: so, 1639-69, Chambers. See note
  9. Stanza 6, line 4 flow Ed: flow, 1633-69
  10. Stanza 7, line 1 So, Ed: So 1633-69
  11. Stanza 7, line 3 shut; Ed: shut, 1633-69
  12. Stanza 8, line 2 ope 1633-69, O'F, S96: out A18, B, D, H40, H49, JC, Lec, N, P, S, TC
  13. Stanza 8, line 6 offendst] offends 1669
  14. Stanza 9, line 2 and] or 1669, JC, O'F, S96
  15. Stanza 10, line 1 goe] growe JC, O'F, S
  16. Stanza 10, line 2 againe; 1633: againe: 1635-69
  17. Stanza 10, line 3 this] my 1669
  18. Stanza 10, line 4 pane. 1633: Pen, 1635-69, O'F, S
  19. Stanza 10, line 6 unaware] unawares B, N, O'F, P, S, S96, TC
  20. Stanza 11, line 4 this] thus 1635-69, O'F, P, S, S96

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