Melmillo

Walter de la Mare (1873–1956) · 1913

trochaic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 20 lines · from Peacock Pie

Three and thirty birds there stoodIn an elder in a wood;Called Melmillo -- flew off three,Leaving thirty in the tree;Called Melmillo -- nine now gone,And the boughs held twenty-one;Called Melmillo -- and eighteenLeft but three to nod and preen;Called Melmillo -- three -- two -- oneNow of birds were feathers none.

Then stole Melmillo inTo that wood all dusk and green,And with lean long palms outspreadSoftly a strange dance did tread;Not a note of music sheHad for echoing company;All the birds were flown to restIn the hollow of her breast;In the wood -- thorn, elder, willow --Danced alone -- lone danced Melmillo.

Words in this poem

preen n.
A forked tool used by clothiers in dressing cloth. [AS. preón a clasp, bodkin; akin to D. priem punch, bodkin, awl, G. pfriem, Icel. prjonn a knitting needle, pin, Dan. preen a bodkin, punch.]
stole n.
A long, loose garment reaching to the feet. [AS. stole, L. stola, Gr. stall. See Stall.]
outspread v. t.
To spread out; to expand; -- usually as a past part. or adj.
flown a.
Flushed, inflated.
lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Melmillo is in the public domain. This text is taken from Peacock Pie, a Book of Rhymes, Project Gutenberg ebook #3753; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Walter de la Mare, Melmillo, in Peacock Pie (1913), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #3753, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/de-la-mare-peacock-pie/melmillo.html, id L12623.

Form and metre

Melmillo is 20 lines in 2 stanzas of 10 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 70% of the lines. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.0 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 35% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB-CDDCC stoodA · woodA · threeB · treeB · gone · oneC · eighteenD · preenD · oneC · noneC
  2. 2 AABB--CC-- inA · greenA · outspreadB · treadB · she · company · restC · breastC · willow · melmillo
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Three and thirty birds there stood7··/˘···
In an elder in a wood;7··/˘···
Called Melmillo -- flew off three,7·······
Leaving thirty in the tree;7/˘/˘···
Called Melmillo -- nine now gone,7·······
And the boughs held twenty-one;7····/˘·
Called Melmillo -- and eighteen7·····˘/
Left but three to nod and preen;7·······
Called Melmillo -- three -- two -- one7·······
Now of birds were feathers none.7····/˘·
Then stole Melmillo in6······
To that wood all dusk and green,7·······
And with lean long palms outspread7·····˘/
Softly a strange dance did tread;7/˘·····
Not a note of music she7····/˘·
Had for echoing company;7··/˘/˘˘
All the birds were flown to rest7·······
In the hollow of her breast;7··/˘···
In the wood -- thorn, elder, willow --8····/˘/·
Danced alone -- lone danced Melmillo.8·˘/·····

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