Grim

Walter de la Mare (1873–1956) · 1913

iambic tetrameter · 12 lines · from Peacock Pie

Beside the blaze of forty firesGiant Grim doth sit,Roasting a thick-woolled mountain sheepUpon an iron spit.Above him wheels the winter sky,Beneath him, fathoms deep,Lies hidden in the valley mistsA village fast asleep ---Save for one restive hungry dogThat, snuffing towards the height,Smells Grim's broiled supper-meat, and spiesHis watch-fire twinkling bright.

Words in this poem

restive a.
Unwilling to go on; obstinate in refusing to move forward; stubborn; drawing back. [OF. restif, F. rétif, fr. L. restare to stay back, withstand, resist. See Rest remainder, and cf. Restiff.]
twinkling n.
The act of one who, or of that which, twinkles; a quick movement of the eye; a wink; a twinkle. Holland.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Grim is in the public domain. This text is taken from Peacock Pie, a Book of Rhymes, Project Gutenberg ebook #3753; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Walter de la Mare, Grim, in Peacock Pie (1913), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #3753, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/de-la-mare-peacock-pie/grim.html, id L12609.

Form and metre

Grim is 12 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 6.9 syllables. 42% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -ABA-B-B-C-C fires · sitA · sheepB · spitA · sky · deepB · mists · asleepB · dog · heightC · spies · brightC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Beside the blaze of forty fires8˘/···/˘/
Giant Grim doth sit,5/˘···
Roasting a thick-woolled mountain sheep8/˘···/˘·
Upon an iron spit.6···/˘·
Above him wheels the winter sky,8·····/˘·
Beneath him, fathoms deep,6···/˘·
Lies hidden in the valley mists8·/˘··/˘·
A village fast asleep ---6·/˘·˘/
Save for one restive hungry dog8···/˘/˘·
That, snuffing towards the height,6·/˘···
Smells Grim's broiled supper-meat, and spies8···/˘···
His watch-fire twinkling bright.6··//˘·

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