Berries

Walter de la Mare (1873–1956) · 1913

iambic trimeter · 72 lines · from Peacock Pie

There was an old womanWent blackberry pickingAlong the hedgesFrom Weep to Wicking. -Half a pottle-No more she had got,When out steps a FairyFrom her green grot;And says, 'Well, Jill,Would 'ee pick ee mo?'And Jill, she curtseys,And looks just so.Be off,' says the Fairy,'As quick as you can,Over the meadowsTo the little green laneThat dips to the hayfieldsOf Farmer Grimes:I've berried those hedgesA score of times;Bushel on bushelI'll promise'ee, Jill,This side of supperIf'ee pick with a will.'She glints very bright,And speaks her fair;Then lo, and behold!She had faded in air.

Be sure Old GoodieShe trots betimesOver the meadowsTo Farmer Grimes.And never was queenWith jewelry richAs those same hedgesFrom twig to ditch;Like Dutchmen's coffers,Fruit, thorn, and flower -They shone like WilliamAnd Mary's bower.And be sure Old GoodieWent back to Weep,So tired with her basketShe scarce could creep.

When she comes in the duskTo her cottage door,There's Towser waggingAs never before,To see his MissusSo glad to beCome from her fruit-pickingBack to he.As soon as next morningDawn was grey,The pot on the hobWas simmering away;And all in a stewAnd a hugger-muggerTowser and JillA-boiling of sugar,And the dark clear fruitThat from Faerie came,For syrup and jellyAnd blackberry jam.

Twelve jolly gallipotsJill put by;And one little teeny one,One inch high;And that she's hiddenA good thumb deep,Half way overFrom Wicking to Weep.

Words in this poem

went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
wicking n.
the material of which wicks are made; esp., a loosely braided or twisted cord or tape of cotton.
pottle n.
A liquid measure of four pints. [OE. potel, OF. potel, dim. of pot. See Pot.]
jill n.
A young woman; a sweetheart. See Gill. Beau. & Fl. [See Gill sweetheart.]
berried a.
Furnished with berries; consisting of a berry; baccate; as, a berried shrub.
betimes adv.
In good season or time; before it is late; seasonably; early. [Pref. be- (for by) + time; that is, by the proper time. The -s is an adverbial ending.]
scarce a.
Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
towser n.
A familiar name for a dog. [ Written also Towzer. ] [See Touse to pull about.]
syrup n.
A thick and viscid liquid made from the juice of fruits, herbs, etc., boiled with sugar. [F. sirop (cf. It. siroppo, Sp. jarabe, jarope, LL. siruppus, syrupus), fr. Ar. sharab a drink, wine, coffee, sirup. Cf. Sherbet.]
teeny a.
Very small; tiny.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Berries is in the public domain. This text is taken from Peacock Pie, a Book of Rhymes, Project Gutenberg ebook #3753; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Walter de la Mare, Berries, in Peacock Pie (1913), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #3753, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/de-la-mare-peacock-pie/berries.html, id L12590.

Form and metre

Berries is 72 lines in 4 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 5.0 syllables. 26 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 47% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -ABAC-DECE-ED-B--FBFCC-C-G-G woman · pickingA · hedgesB · wickingA · pottleC · got · fairyD · grotE · jillC · moE · curtseys · soE · fairyD · can · meadowsB · lane · hayfields · grimesF · hedgesB · timesF · bushelC · jillC · supper · willC · bright · fairG · behold · airG
  2. 2 ABCB-DCD-E-EAF-F goodieA · betimesB · meadowsC · grimesB · queen · richD · hedgesC · ditchD · coffers · flowerE · william · bowerE · goodieA · weepF · basket · creepF
  3. 3 -A-A-B-B-C-C-------- dusk · doorA · wagging · beforeA · missus · beB · picking · heB · morning · greyC · hob · awayC · stew · mugger · jill · sugar · fruit · came · jelly · jam
  4. 4 -ABABC-C gallipots · byA · oneB · highA · hiddenB · deepC · over · weepC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
There was an old woman6····/˘
Went blackberry picking6·/·˘/˘
Along the hedges5˘/·/˘
From Weep to Wicking. -5···/˘
Half a pottle-4··/˘
No more she had got,5·····
When out steps a Fairy6····/˘
From her green grot;4····
And says, 'Well, Jill,4····
Would 'ee pick ee mo?'5·····
And Jill, she curtseys,5·····
And looks just so.4····
Be off,' says the Fairy,6····/˘
'As quick as you can,5·····
Over the meadows5···/·
To the little green lane6··/˘··
That dips to the hayfields6····/·
Of Farmer Grimes:4·/˘·
I've berried those hedges6·/˘·/˘
A score of times;4····
Bushel on bushel5/˘·/˘
I'll promise'ee, Jill,5·····
This side of supper5···/˘
If'ee pick with a will.'6······
She glints very bright,5··/˘·
And speaks her fair;4····
Then lo, and behold!5···˘/
She had faded in air.6··/˘··
Be sure Old Goodie5···/˘
She trots betimes4····
Over the meadows5···/·
To Farmer Grimes.4·/˘·
And never was queen5·/˘··
With jewelry rich5·/˘˘·
As those same hedges5···/˘
From twig to ditch;4····
Like Dutchmen's coffers,5···/˘
Fruit, thorn, and flower -5···/˘
They shone like William5···/˘
And Mary's bower.5·/˘/˘
And be sure Old Goodie6····/˘
Went back to Weep,4····
So tired with her basket7·/˘··/˘
She scarce could creep.4····
When she comes in the dusk6······
To her cottage door,5··/˘·
There's Towser wagging5·/˘/˘
As never before,5·/˘··
To see his Missus5···/˘
So glad to be4····
Come from her fruit-picking6····/˘
Back to he.3···
As soon as next morning6····/˘
Dawn was grey,3···
The pot on the hob5·····
Was simmering away;6·/˘˘˘/
And all in a stew5·····
And a hugger-mugger6··/˘/˘
Towser and Jill4/˘··
A-boiling of sugar,6·/˘·/˘
And the dark clear fruit5·····
That from Faerie came,5·····
For syrup and jelly6·/˘·/˘
And blackberry jam.5·/·˘·
Twelve jolly gallipots6·/˘···
Jill put by;3···
And one little teeny one,7··/˘/˘·
One inch high;3···
And that she's hidden5···/˘
A good thumb deep,4····
Half way over4····
From Wicking to Weep.5·/˘··

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