The Ballad of God-Makers

G. K. Chesterton (1874–1936) · 1900

iambic tetrameter · 56 lines · from The Wild Knight and Other Poems

A bird flew out at the break of dayFrom the nest where it had curled,And ere the eve the bird had setFear on the kings of the world.

The first tree it lit uponWas green with leaves unshed;The second tree it lit uponWas red with apples red;

The third tree it lit uponWas barren and was brown,Save for a dead man nailed thereonOn a hill above a town.

That night the kings of the earth were gayAnd filled the cup and can;Last night the kings of the earth were chillFor dread of a naked man.

'If he speak two more words,' they said,'The slave is more than the free;If he speak three more words,' they said,'The stars are under the sea.'

Said the King of the East to the King of the West,I wot his frown was set,'Lo; let us slay him and make him as dung,It is well that the world forget.'

Said the King of the West to the King of the East,I wot his smile was dread,'Nay, let us slay him and make him a god,It is well that our god be dead.'

They set the young man on a hill,They nailed him to a rod;And there in darkness and in bloodThey made themselves a god.

And the mightiest word was left unsaid,And the world had never a mark,And the strongest man of the sons of menWent dumb into the dark.

Then hymns and harps of praise they brought,Incense and gold and myrrh,And they thronged above the seraphim,The poor dead carpenter.

'Thou art the prince of all,' they sang,'Ocean and earth and air.'Then the bird flew on to the cruel cross,And hid in the dead man's hair.

'Thou art the sun of the world,' they cried,'Speak if our prayers be heard.'And the brown bird stirred in the dead man's hair,And it seemed that the dead man stirred.

Then a shriek went up like the world's last cryFrom all nations under heaven,And a master fell before a slaveAnd begged to be forgiven.

They cowered, for dread in his wakened eyesThe ancient wrath to see;And the bird flew out of the dead Christ's hair,And lit on a lemon-tree.

Words in this poem

unshed a.
Not parted or divided, as the hair.
thereon adv.
On that or this. [AS. . See There, and On.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
seraphim n.
The Hebrew plural of Seraph. Cf. Cherubim.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Ballad of God-Makers is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Wild Knight and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #12037; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Ballad of God-Makers is 56 lines in 14 stanzas of 4 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 23% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A day · curledA · set · worldA
  2. 2 A-A- uponA · unshed · uponA · red
  3. 3 -A-A upon · brownA · thereon · townA
  4. 4 -A-A gay · canA · chill · manA
  5. 5 ABAB saidA · freeB · saidA · seaB
  6. 6 -A-A west · setA · dung · forgetA
  7. 7 -A-A east · dreadA · god · deadA
  8. 8 -A-A hill · rodA · blood · godA
  9. 9 -A-A unsaid · markA · men · darkA
  10. 11 -A-A sang · airA · cross · hairA
  11. 12 -A-A cried · heardA · hair · stirredA
  12. 14 -A-A eyes · seeA · hair · treeA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A bird flew out at the break of day9·········
From the nest where it had curled,7·······
And ere the eve the bird had set8········
Fear on the kings of the world.7·······
The first tree it lit upon7·······
Was green with leaves unshed;6····˘/
The second tree it lit upon8·/˘·····
Was red with apples red;6···/˘·
The third tree it lit upon7·······
Was barren and was brown,6·/˘···
Save for a dead man nailed thereon9······˘˘/
On a hill above a town.7·······
That night the kings of the earth were gay9·········
And filled the cup and can;6······
Last night the kings of the earth were chill9·········
For dread of a naked man.7····/˘·
'If he speak two more words,' they said,8········
'The slave is more than the free;7·······
If he speak three more words,' they said,8········
'The stars are under the sea.'7·······
Said the King of the East to the King of the West,12············
I wot his frown was set,6······
'Lo; let us slay him and make him as dung,10··········
It is well that the world forget.'8······˘/
Said the King of the West to the King of the East,12············
I wot his smile was dread,6······
'Nay, let us slay him and make him a god,10··········
It is well that our god be dead.'9····/˘···
They set the young man on a hill,8········
They nailed him to a rod;6······
And there in darkness and in blood8···/˘···
They made themselves a god.6··˘/··
And the mightiest word was left unsaid,10··/˘˘···˘/
And the world had never a mark,8····/˘··
And the strongest man of the sons of men10··/˘······
Went dumb into the dark.6······
Then hymns and harps of praise they brought,8········
Incense and gold and myrrh,6˘/····
And they thronged above the seraphim,10···˘···/˘˘
The poor dead carpenter.6···/˘˘
'Thou art the prince of all,' they sang,8········
'Ocean and earth and air.'6/˘····
Then the bird flew on to the cruel cross,10·······/˘·
And hid in the dead man's hair.7·······
'Thou art the sun of the world,' they cried,9·········
'Speak if our prayers be heard.'7··/˘···
And the brown bird stirred in the dead man's hair,10··········
And it seemed that the dead man stirred.10···˘·····˘
Then a shriek went up like the world's last cry10··········
From all nations under heaven,8··/˘··/˘
And a master fell before a slave9··/˘·····
And begged to be forgiven.7····˘/˘
They cowered, for dread in his wakened eyes10·/˘····/˘·
The ancient wrath to see;6·/˘···
And the bird flew out of the dead Christ's hair,10··········
And lit on a lemon-tree.7····/˘·

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